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Posted: 20 October 2011 at 7:46pm | IP Logged
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api will comment after comming back from college

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 1:15am | IP Logged
wow api u rite poem quite good
i like it
iam not fond of poems but you are talented
very good peot lolll
thankx alo for poem
keep it up
maria

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 2:35am | IP Logged
Meri Geetu!
 
Words cant not describe the way that your poems alight feelings into me. I could NOT stop smiling throughout the whole poem. Everything was beautifully penned, as usual. You suprise everytime with your poems. Seriously your write beautifully. BEST POET ON IF! Your topics flow beautifully and flawlesly. I think you should take interest on being a poet, you have the potential to be one of the greatest. I Absoulately loved the way you transioned the views that children hold and associate with parents over a period of time. I loved LOVED loved the parts where you ended them with eg " They called them parents, I called them..." So perfect ;) Keep writing I LOVE YOU!
 
With Love, Priyanka.

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 3:28am | IP Logged
WOW
 

WOW

THIS WAS SIMPLY AMEZING .

MY MOMY IS A POEM WRITTER HA COOL

AB MIYA GALIB KA KYA HOGA, BECHRE TOUGH COMPITISION.

MUJHYE AUR DADY KO DHYAN MAI RAKH KAR LIKHA HAI GOOD GOOD.

AUR KISNE ADVISE DI APKO MUJHYE BATAO TOH JARA YE JO RAICHAN HOTYE HAI NA BAS HAR BAAT PE ADVISE DETE HAI TOH INKI BATO PAR SENTI MAT HONA.

MAI GHAR SE DOOR HU SO I CAN ANDERSTAND THIS

That taught me the value of Parents, without any strife.

 

LOVE U MOM
 
 


Edited by ishka_virani - 21 October 2011 at 5:53am

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 3:51am | IP Logged
Comment Edited on pg 2Big smile

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 7:55am | IP Logged
OMG! I am --- don't noe what to say? --- um...mesmerized di...WOW! I mean that was fabtastic...<3 Really very heart touching...i am speechless it wz like really nice and emotional i am so touched by this one you are the best poet, friend, di,,,,,,,i have ever come across :) <3

Too good di...really good...<3 Thank you for the pm :)
Luv u <3

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 8:01am | IP Logged
You just touched the most sensitive part of my heart...

 So beautiful... You write with a sprinkle of truth and magic in your every word...


I just got my inspiration from you

Thanks loadzzz

Regards
Liashna


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