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Posted: 12 years ago

If isn't letting me click the like button...

I usually don't read poems, but something made me read this and I'm gladd I did! This was sooo sweet and inspiring!
You are really talented!

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ARKJ_4EVER

@ARKJ_4EVER

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

Resss... 🤗

Geet...wow!!! that's the only word that's coming ...for now😆...yet loads to say...editing this 2morro after exams!! But one more thing, U'RE MARVELLOUS!!!

Hey Geet!! wow...i mean it's sooo beautiful...when read it, was hoping it wouldn't end!!! the feelings are so ethereal!!! Worth reading, u're kidding right, it's out of the world...perfect!!!!! So wonderfully n brilliantly written!!!
This parent-child relationship is really beautiful n often we do not understand what it involves but they're the greatest for sure!!!
Love it to the core!!!

Take care
Muahhh
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Edited by ARKJ_4EVER - 12 years ago

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Izzah

@virmaan-virika

Goldie

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Posted: 12 years ago

WOW Geet!! Lovely and awesome poem! It was incredible =D Do write more poems =)

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anumeha khanna

@anumeha_rajat

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

awwwsum poem geet..

soo amazing n superb...

beautiful...

loved it yaar..

thnx for the pm...

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

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api will comment after comming back from college

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow api u rite poem quite good
i like it
iam not fond of poems but you are talented
very good peot lolll
thankx alo for poem
keep it up
maria

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Priyanka

@..KaJenDelena..

Senior Member

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Posted: 12 years ago

Meri Geetu!

Words cant not describe the way that your poems alight feelings into me. I could NOT stop smiling throughout the whole poem. Everything was beautifully penned, as usual. You suprise everytime with your poems. Seriously your write beautifully. BEST POET ON IF! Your topics flow beautifully and flawlesly. I think you should take interest on being a poet, you have the potential to be one of the greatest. I Absoulately loved the way you transioned the views that children hold and associate with parents over a period of time. I loved LOVED loved the parts where you ended them with eg " They called them parents, I called them..." So perfect ;) Keep writing I LOVE YOU!

With Love, Priyanka.

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633854

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Posted: 12 years ago

WOW

THIS WAS SIMPLY AMEZING .

MY MOMY IS A POEM WRITTER HA COOL

AB MIYA GALIB KA KYA HOGA, BECHRE TOUGH COMPITISION.

MUJHYE AUR DADY KO DHYAN MAI RAKH KAR LIKHA HAI GOOD GOOD.

AUR KISNE ADVISE DI APKO MUJHYE BATAO TOH JARA YE JO RAICHAN HOTYE HAI NA BAS HAR BAAT PE ADVISE DETE HAI TOH INKI BATO PAR SENTI MAT HONA.

MAI GHAR SE DOOR HU SO I CAN ANDERSTAND THIS

That taught me the value of Parents, without any strife.

LOVE U MOM

Edited by ishka_virani - 12 years ago

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ARKJ_4EVER

@ARKJ_4EVER

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

Comment Edited on pg 2😃

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mehak arora

@Mojo.

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG! I am --- don't noe what to say? --- um...mesmerized di...WOW! I mean that was fabtastic...<3 Really very heart touching...i am speechless it wz like really nice and emotional i am so touched by this one you are the best poet, friend, di,,,,,,,i have ever come across :) <3

Too good di...really good...<3 Thank you for the pm :)

Luv u <3

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