Posted: 12 years ago
Heyyy Guys...How r u All?...So here I am Again with One of My Poem...This one is very close to my heart...Hope you like it...😳


 

 

                             INCREDIBLE LINGAGE

 

 

 

 

The First soothing touch, that confident embrace,

Made my weak uncertain toddle complete with grace.

I learnt to walk, then fall and rise,

Of failures and victories they made me apprise.

They gave me life, taught me to live,

Instilling in me all values they could give.

They showed me life much beyond theaters,

The world call them Parents, I called them Creators.

 


They toiled and struggled, worked and earned,

Keeping at stake all that they had yearned.

For all they wanted was a world free of vice,

To create for their children who were yet novice.

The sacrifice they made, the dreams they let to fade,

To save us from the wrath of the dangers in the glade.

In the times of despair, they are our only drivers,

The world called them Parents, I call them En-lighteners.

 


Then comes a time when things took a turn,

For better or worse, it was yet to discern.

The wind swept us away, the dazzle made us blind,

And before we knew it, our true identify we could not find.

They called us rebellious launched into worries of rebuking,

We put our adamant foot down, responded with arrays of refuting.

Despite constant clash of ideologies, they were our only Protectors,

The world called them parents, I called them Victors.

 


Years Passed and with them did our Childhood,

We shed those scales of Impulsiveness, which we never thought we could.

And suddenly those words of advice, all seemed to make sense,

The realization dawned upon us, the ego seemed to condense.

Only too soon did we abandon those futile attempts to liberty,

Those illusions dreams, invisible ambitions were now all murky.

It was they who sailed with us through this vogue of called life,

That taught me the value of Parents, without any strife.

 

 

 Hope its worth Reading...Do Like and Comments.😳


Lots and Lots of Love

GEET

 

Edited by sweetdesire - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Jaana...🤗

ya ya i knw i m damn late......but hey i wanted my comment to be super long...😳.see i m here wid my big boring letter..😉...so buckle ur seat belt...nd start reading...👍🏼...


see i told u are jst fantastic...   wat a fab piece u have written my love ...i m completely speechless bt still wil try to say as much as i can...(kuch toh fayda ho content writer hone ka...😉)


First the title OMG...

its jst perfect..very catchy nd most suitable...
INCREDIBLE LINGAGE
...
i m really fell in love wid d title...


Now cuming to ur beautiful words...i think dis one is jst perfect...more then perfect yar...its jst d best...each word holds u wid such a force dat u read it again nd again...


So true...the way u captured all d words together nd made them flow in rhythm is amazing...so true...👏 👏 ❤️ ❤️


U wont believe i have already read this poem thrice... And reading it AGAIN & AGAIN & AGAIN!...😳...So wonderfully n brilliantly written!!!...👏 👏 hats off...

The way u showed parent-child relationship..ups nd downs. is really beautiful love...u really rocked yar...do post it on FB..we kids often do not understand what it involves but parents are the greatest gift for sure!!!...after reading ur poem..i was saying so damn true words...😊.😛


The wind swept us away, the dazzle made us blind,

And before we knew it, our true identify we could not find.

They called us rebellious launched into worries of rebuking,

We put our adamant foot down, responded with arrays of refuting.

Despite constant clash of ideologies, they were our only Protectors,


The lines actually made me teary...sumtimes we use so much harshness on our parents bt still they always luks for us...our better life...Your topic was flowing beautifully and flawlessly...making me smile all d way...👏 👏 👏 👏


Ur poem is going to inspire many of us to respect our parents til our last breath...👍🏼

do write more nd more poems...😛.dat too super soon...got it...😡



lots nd lots of love jaana...🤗 ❤️
ur's sweetheart...
jannat...😳



Edited by jannat4ever - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
RESERVED. Dii. I NEED the links of all your poems since you said this is ONE of your poems. Curse me for not knowing this b4.
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by SmokingDreams


RESERVED. Dii. I NEED the links of all your poems since you said this is ONE of your poems. Curse me for not knowing this b4.

Ok jee...As you say..I will send you the Links...😳
Posted: 12 years ago
hey geet
awesome poem man it was soo cute i loved it and trust me the poem was worth reading.. loved the way you talk about rents and its so true... beautifully written plz write more soon and thnx for the pm :D
tc
sejal<3
Posted: 12 years ago
Wow
Beautifully written poem, supercool
Keep up the great work

Luv
pooja
Posted: 12 years ago


OMG Geet aww i really love the peom..

Its sooo beautiful and touching... Lovelyyy
Posted: 12 years ago

Geeeta Diii 🤗

You poems were, are & will ALWAYS be the BEST poems that I ever read! <3 I Mean, you write so beautifully, and all the topics you touch with your creative poetic mind just relate to me so very easily & nicely. I Have already read this poem twice! And wanna read it AGAIN & AGAIN & AGAIN! To be honest, this is the same issue that comes up between me & my parents, they say something, but I Don't even bother to listen to them, and then after some time when I Finally realize that Shit Mannn they were right!And I Was wrong! The EGO inside me! :|

 
Maybe the children of today can beat their parents in the feilds like technology or talent or whatever, but one thing they can never beat their parents in is their experiance! The experiance that your parents have, just simpply show you the right ways & wrong ways, in which path we should walk, and which one we should not we walking on. <3
 
 
You are an Incredible Writer Diii. <3
I Simply love your poems more than you! :P
 
P.S-I Loveee Youuu 🤗
Posted: 12 years ago
@Sam...OMKSG SAMMM...thanksss a lot for such a lovely comment...I am so glad you like it...will reply to ur comment in detail...but for now I just want to say just one thing...you just made my day...love you so much ...<3:)Edited by sweetdesire - 12 years ago

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