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Posted: 20 October 2011 at 9:55am | IP Logged
Heyyy Guys...How r u All?...So here I am Again with One of My Poem...This one is very close to my heart...Hope you like it...Embarrassed


 

 

                             INCREDIBLE LINGAGE

 

 

 

 

The First soothing touch, that confident embrace,

Made my weak uncertain toddle complete with grace.

I learnt to walk, then fall and rise,

Of failures and victories they made me apprise.

They gave me life, taught me to live,

Instilling in me all values they could give.

They showed me life much beyond theaters,

The world call them Parents, I called them Creators.

 


They toiled and struggled, worked and earned,

Keeping at stake all that they had yearned.

For all they wanted was a world free of vice,

To create for their children who were yet novice.

The sacrifice they made, the dreams they let to fade,

To save us from the wrath of the dangers in the glade.

In the times of despair, they are our only drivers,

The world called them Parents, I call them En-lighteners.

 


Then comes a time when things took a turn,

For better or worse, it was yet to discern.

The wind swept us away, the dazzle made us blind,

And before we knew it, our true identify we could not find.

They called us rebellious launched into worries of rebuking,

We put our adamant foot down, responded with arrays of refuting.

Despite constant clash of ideologies, they were our only Protectors,

The world called them parents, I called them Victors.

 


Years Passed and with them did our Childhood,

We shed those scales of Impulsiveness, which we never thought we could.

And suddenly those words of advice, all seemed to make sense,

The realization dawned upon us, the ego seemed to condense.

Only too soon did we abandon those futile attempts to liberty,

Those illusions dreams, invisible ambitions were now all murky.

It was they who sailed with us through this vogue of called life,

That taught me the value of Parents, without any strife.

 

 

 Hope its worth Reading...Do Like and Comments.Embarrassed


Lots and Lots of Love

GEET

 



Edited by sweetdesire - 20 October 2011 at 10:12am

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Posted: 20 October 2011 at 9:55am | IP Logged

Hey Jaana...Hug

ya ya i knw i m damn late...Ouch...but hey i wanted my comment to be super long...Embarrassed.see i m here wid my big boring letter..Wink...so buckle ur seat belt...nd start reading...Thumbs Up...


see i told u are jst fantastic...   wat a fab piece u have written my love ...i m completely speechless bt still wil try to say as much as i can...(kuch toh fayda ho content writer hone ka...Wink)


First the title OMG...

its jst perfect..very catchy nd most suitable...
INCREDIBLE LINGAGE
...
i m really fell in love wid d title...


Now cuming to ur beautiful words...i think dis one is jst perfect...more then perfect yar...its jst d best...each word holds u wid such a force dat u read it again nd again...


So true...the way u captured all d words together nd made them flow in rhythm is amazing...so true...Clap Clap Heart Heart


U wont believe i have already read this poem thrice... And reading it AGAIN & AGAIN & AGAIN!...Embarrassed...So wonderfully n brilliantly written!!!...Clap Clap hats off...

The way u showed parent-child relationship..ups nd downs. is really beautiful love...u really rocked yar...do post it on FB..we kids often do not understand what it involves but parents are the greatest gift for sure!!!...after reading ur poem..i was saying so damn true words...Smile.Tongue


The wind swept us away, the dazzle made us blind,

And before we knew it, our true identify we could not find.

They called us rebellious launched into worries of rebuking,

We put our adamant foot down, responded with arrays of refuting.

Despite constant clash of ideologies, they were our only Protectors,


The lines actually made me teary...sumtimes we use so much harshness on our parents bt still they always luks for us...our better life...Your topic was flowing beautifully and flawlessly...making me smile all d way...Clap Clap Clap Clap


Ur poem is going to inspire many of us to respect our parents til our last breath...Thumbs Up

do write more nd more poems...Tongue.dat too super soon...got it...Angry



lots nd lots of love jaana...Hug Heart
ur's sweetheart...
jannat...Embarrassed





Edited by jannat4ever - 22 October 2011 at 1:40am

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Posted: 20 October 2011 at 10:28am | IP Logged
RESERVED. Dii. I NEED the links of all your poems since you said this is ONE of your poems. Curse me for not knowing this b4.
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Posted: 20 October 2011 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SmokingDreams

RESERVED. Dii. I NEED the links of all your poems since you said this is ONE of your poems. Curse me for not knowing this b4.

Ok jee...As you say..I will send you the Links...Embarrassed
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Posted: 20 October 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
hey geet
awesome poem man it was soo cute i loved it and trust me the poem was worth reading.. loved the way you talk about rents and its so true... beautifully written plz write more soon and thnx for the pm :D
tc
sejal<3

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Posted: 20 October 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Wow
Beautifully written poem, supercool
Keep up the great work

Luv
pooja

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Posted: 20 October 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
beautifully written

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Posted: 20 October 2011 at 11:29am | IP Logged


OMG Geet aww i really love the peom..

Its sooo beautiful and touching... Lovelyyy

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