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Posted: 12 years ago
pics courtesy Zubi aka Zoobidoobi..
 
 
Arree, arreee!! Aap dono kya kar rahen hain yaar!!
 
 
Tearless cries that brings tears to our eyes
A little less a little more
The moment of fun would be lost forever..
 
Twisted faces comical expressions
A little less a little more
The moment etched in our minds  forever..
 
Bowed head kiddish talk and closed eyes
A little less a little more
The moment of childish youth lived forever..
 
Tearless eyes yet heartfelt feelings
A little less a little more
The moment of Raya fresh as ever..
 
Edited by maris08 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Nicely penned Maris! πŸ‘
Posted: 12 years ago
this is superb yaar... m adding it to da ATπŸ‘
Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it Maris ! Wow nice lines πŸ˜Š ..suit Raya !πŸ€—
Posted: 12 years ago
Awww mere golu molu 😳
Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely lines,MarisπŸ‘
 
That's my favourite scene of that episode.They both looked so cute😳 Haan scene DDLJ se churaya toh tha πŸ˜‰πŸ˜› but koi nai it was lovelyπŸ˜†
Posted: 12 years ago
Aww So sweet THey are adorable !!
Posted: 12 years ago
kitne cutie pie Nautanki hain na yeh dono...love them πŸ˜³
Posted: 12 years ago
πŸ‘πŸ‘Maris,
What apt lines for RAYA! Why don't  u write more???? What a well written poem that captures the essence of RAYA ! You need to seriously write an OS for our forum!
You are a poet and an amazing writer!
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