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ff- pyar ya takrar {part-4, pg-17} (Page 6)

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Posted: 19 October 2011 at 4:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by stary_kajal

Originally posted by prerna26

Hey Hi. I just read your FF. It's nice!!!Viren is a sweetheart, he not only cares About  Jeevika but also understands her feelings. Continue soon .And do Pm me when you update.Take care!Smile


thanks dear hope u liked it...'
i will update soon dear...
yes i will do...

Please Update your other FF-"Ek Ajnabee".Embarrassed Loved reading this update.Smile


Edited by prerna26 - 19 October 2011 at 4:33am

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very nice...cont soon and plz pm me when u update :)

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PART-2

everyone brings maanvi home and jeevika is very worried about maanvi, so as biji also with pinky and his chachu and viren's family, dadaji is looking at maanvi, she looks at dadaji and she gets scared.. she looks here and there. dadaji stands up and everyone looks at him.

dadaji: jaisey ki aap jantey hai ki viren aur jeevika ki sagaai ki rasam toh hum nibha chuke hai.. aur mey chahta hu ki un dono ki shaadi bi jald sey jald ho jaaye.

maanvi makes faces, dadaji looks at her. dadaji continues

dadaji: mey aapsey kuch aur bi kehna chahta hu, mey janta hu ki viren aur jeevika ki shaadi ke baad, virat bilku akela padh jaayega

virat looks at dadaji then viren and smiles...maanvi looks at dadaji, dadaji comes to maanvi and holds her up, she smiles so as jeevika and viren along with buaji and everyone.

dadaji: kyu beta banogi merey ghar ki bahu, karogi virat sey shaadi..

virat face was shocked and viren was happy, biji was serious and bua also... viren mums was happy and maanvi was as usual shocked, she sees dadaji and then jeevika. she goes from there... jeevika follows her...


Scene shift

maanvi comes and she jumps on bed and jeevika comes there... jeevika doesnt look at her.. jeevika comes and sits beside her, she caress her hairs ...she come close to her

jeevika: manu dar raha hai 
maanvi: di yeh dada ji keh kya keh rahey hai... mey aur virat...  kaisey di mey aur virat kaisey { maanvi was very tense and worried}.. maana ki mey aur woh jagadtey rehtey hai, thodi is hasi titoli kartey hai lakin {she sits} shaadi kaisey di...humarey pass ek common topic nahi hai baat karney ke liye 
jeevika: lakin pyar toh ho jaata hai na manu aur virat bahut acha ladka hai tumhey bahut khush rakhega...
maanvi: di yeh pyar vyar sab filmo mey hota hai real life mey...


here virat stands up

virat: ha filmo mey hota hai pyar vyar bhai... maanvi dadaji ko koi aur pasand nahi aayi merey liye...woh jhali , jiske naak pe hamesha gussa chada rehta hai.. i mean usko hasi mazaak mey toh tolerate karna theek hai lakin real life woh bi har time.. no way brother...

maanvi turns to jeevika

maanvi: attitude dekha usney apna, jjab dekho humara pariwaar, i am so handsome hamesha paisey ka rob dikhata hai... aapko pata hai di woh mera kitna mazak udhata hai... kisi ke samney kabhi bi insult kar deta hai... arey meri bi toh self respect hai...

here virat:

virat: respect arey usey toh tamiz bi nahi hai bado sey baat karney ki is pariwaar mey kaisey adjust karegi

{camera focus on maanvi face}
maanvi: mey aur virat kabhi nahi di
virat: no bro never...

jeevika: manu chalo ek pal ke liye maan lo woh bahut bahut bura hai, attitude show karta hai... lakin woh dil ka bahut acha hai na tujhe yaad hai na usney tujhe biji sey bachaya tha aur gaadi wali baat bi nahi bataiyee thi

here viren

viren: virat maanvi thodi naadaan hai lakin usney jo kuch bi kiya sirf jeevika ko apney aap sey dur na karney ke iye aisa pretend kiya... aur waisey bi tum bi koi kam nahi ho...WinkWinkWinkWink

virat: what bro? aap mujhe keh rahey ho...waah bro abhi saali bani bi nahi aur abhi sey uski side le rahey ho... {viren smiles} 

scene shifts

biji is thinking something, bua comes to dadaji

bua: kya aapko lagta hai ki maanvi is ghar ki bahu banney ke layak hai... yaha ke taur tarike mey dhalney ke layak hai...

dadaji: yeh mat bhulo ki woh jeevika ki behan hai... jeevika mey jo sanskaar hai wahi sanskaar uski behan mey bi zarur honegy... ha woh shararti hai..lakin shayad tumne ek cheez nhi dekhi woh hai jeevika aur maanvi ke bich jo pyar hai..woh pyar ka ehsaas mujhe tab hua jab maanvi ki baatein aur jo woh sidhiyo sey nichey giri tab dekh liya tha

bua: lakin aap ek baar virat aur maanvi sey puchiye toh woh do kya chahtey hai

dadaji: virat ne aaj tak meri koi baat nahi taali aur mey janta hu maanvi jeevika ko na nahi bolegi...

dadaji smiles but bua looks worried , they come down where biji and all are standing ...

biji: dehkye bhai saheb aap toh maanvi ko jantey hai uskey swabhav ke barey mey...
koi bi faisala jald baazi mey mat lijye

dadaji: mainey yeh faisal bahut soch samjhkar liya hai...

biji looks up and sees maanvi coming down... here virat also comes...they both look at each other,,,,

viren: dadaji virat ney haa kar di hai
dadaji and everyone smiles... maanvi was shocked...jeevika goes to biji...
jeevika: manu ney bi ha kar di biji

everyone smiles... 

camera focus on two couple sitting on sofa for roka {engagment}

biji puts tilak on viren forehead and same as do to virat also... bua gives a set of jewelleries {same as in the episode showz for jeevika} bua looks at maanvi

bua: i am sorry maanvi hum tumarey liye toh kuch la hi nahi paaye actulaay kisko pata tha ki roka karney aaye they badi behan ka aur choti behan ka karna padh jaayega...

maanvi looks at virat then biji... dadaji comes forward with a set of jewellery...and gives to maanvi...

dadaji: yeh haar viren aur virat ki dadi ka hai... yeh mey tumhey de raha hu taaki tum bi is ghar ki zimedari nibha sako bikul viren aur virat ki dadi ki terha...

maanvi takes dadaji bleesing, jeevika smiles so as biji and everyone but bua was not having any expression {but seems she was jealous}

viren mum's : mey hamesha bhagwan sey dua karti thi ki mujhe beti ho... aur aaj bhawan ne meri jholi ek nahi balki do do betiyoo sey bhar di hai... mey bahut khush hu...

all of them smiles...


scene shifts:

early morning, jeevika wakes up and she wakes up maanvi also...

jeevika: maanvi uth jaldi kar..
maanvi: didi kya hua kyu itni jaldi utha rahi ho
jeevika: tujhe yaad nahi hai aaj karwachauth hai...
jeevika pulls maanvi blanket...
maavi: ha toh aap rakh lo na vrat shrat...
jeevika: dekh manu jaldi...theek hai toh meu tujhe utha rahi hu

jeevika pulls maanvi...she wakes up

maanvi: hey bhagwan ji yeh pariwaar pata nahi shaadi sey pehaley kitney vrat rakhwayeaga...

jeevika: sabk rakhna padta hai...samjhi aur ab tu bachi nahi hai... teri bi shaadi honey waali hai samjhi..

maanvi: o didi tum na jayada patni shatani mat bano...abhi time hai...

jeevika makes maanvi go to shower...and she goes...

virat and viren was thinking something

virat: acha bro yeh batao yeh karwachauth ka vrat humhey toh nahi rakhana padea na
viren: oey hoey kya baat hai abhi sey maanvi ko impress karna chahta hai
virat: ha ha kya baat kar rahey ho bhai maanvi ko impress sau janam bi le lu toh bi woh impress na hogi... usko toh bas uski didi chahiye... waisey bro aap batao aap rakh rahey ho
viren: tu bada interest le raha hai...
virat: {playing with mobile} nahi woh toh filmo mey hota hai na that why...
viren: dekhtey hai...
virat: that means aap rakhney waley ho
viren smiles... virat makes fun of viren
virat: oh oho oho oho bhai bhabi ke liye fasting karney waley hai...oho oho oho oho..
viren runs behind virat to slap him {sooo cutee}


Scene shift:

in the afternoon maanvi was playing phone on game.. virat comes and sits with her...
he snatches her phone...

virat: mujhe nahi pata ki mey tumhey itna acha lagta hu ki ki u r so desperate ki mujhse shaadi karney  ke liye  ...

maanvi: lagta hai aapko na bahut galatfemi hai ki aap bahut handsome ho islye mainey aapsey shaadi ki baat ki hai...

virat: acha ji...

maanvi:  ji ha aur ha yeh shaadi mey sirf apni di ke khsuhi ke liye kar rahi hu samjhey toh kisi aur galatfemi mat rehna...

virat: oh really

maanvi: yes chalo mera phone do jaldi...

virat: nahi diya toh... {he runs and maanvi also runs behind}

viren comes there and they both runing round and round and viren is in between trying to stop them...meanwhile jeevika also comes there

maanvi: jiju dekhiye na virat ji mera phone nahi de rahey hai...
virat: arey mery bhai ki saali unsey kyu shikhayat kar rahi ho mujhe kaho na...
maanvi: tumhari kya problem hai meri na sahi apni bhai ki toh suno...

virat: bhai aaj kuch nahi kahebgey woh toh khud bhabi key rang mey dhaal rahey hai..
{ background viji music starts}

maanvi: kyu

viren: dekh tu kuch nahi bolega {virat stops and maanvi snatches her phone}

maanvi: kyu kya baat hai jiju

virat: bhai ney bhabi ke liye vrat rakha hai
maanvi: really jiju how sweet..
virat sees jeevika
virat: arey bhabi ji aap waha kyu khadi hai.. yaha aaiye
jeevika comes...and sees viren...she smiles... virat and maanvi leaves from there as they see both of them...

jeevika: aapney vrat kyu rakha hai
viren: tumney bi toh rakha hai
jeevika: yeh mera haqh hai ki mey aapkey liye vrat rakhu
viren: same goes to me
jeevika blushes and she goes but viren hold her hand and jeevika closes her eyes...
she turns and sees viren he smiles and leave her...she runs from there...


scene shifts:

in the night everyone was waiting for moon to come.. maanvi was not feelimg well... jeevika is worried about maanvi health... she is very worried... viren comes to jeevika

 {maanvi outfit}



{i used this pic only for jeevika dress and this outift will suit her}

viren: kya baat hai jeevika are you okay
jeevika: ji mey theek hu lakin mujhe maanvi ki bahut chinta ho rahi hai..woh pehaley kabhi bi bukhi nahi rahi hai
viren: kuch nahi hoga she will be fine
maanvi: shayad

maanvi was feeling dizzy but she was balancing her as she is nt getting uncousiness so much...

here the moon comes all of them were excited... everyone starts doing pooja { everyone was standing as per precap of episode}

maanvi was copying jeevika but as she sees moon.. her head start rotating very badly and she feels down. all of them were shocked...  virat sees he comes to maanvi... he sits and put hand on maanvi cheeks... 

virat: maanvi tum theek ho...
manvi was unconscious and jeevika comes there... virat sprinkle water on maanvi face...she comes to her senses..virat feeds water to maanvi... jeevika was worried about her...

maanvi gets up... her head was rotating still.. jeevika makes her sit... she was again feeling dizzy...virat takes maanvi to his lap and takes her to room... jeevika follows virat...viren also comes with jeevika alon with all elders...

jeevika comes and sits beside maanvi

jeevika: manu tu theek hai na ...
maanvi: ha di mey theek hu
jeevika: mainey kaha tha na vrat nahi rakha jaata toh dadaji ya biji sey keh de ...lakin tu apni zidd ke aagey kisi ke samney nahi sunti hai...
maanvi hugs jeevika { ek hazrro ka title music starts}
maanvi holds her ears
maanvi: aapney bi toh rakha hai na jiju ke liye...acha sorry
jeevika hugs maanvi and wipes her tears...
jeevika: paagal kahi ki...



so friends here i end hope u all will like it ...


















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Posted: 20 October 2011 at 11:44pm | IP Logged
aww so sweet!!!!

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 3:42am | IP Logged
it was a nice update bt please write more scenes for viren & jeevika pls continue soon

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 5:03am | IP Logged
yayyy.. love how u have manvi virat than the show.. makes up for it

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RES :) 
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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 5:55am | IP Logged
Lovely update!!Smile

 Aww...Even Viren kept fast for Jeevika..Day DreamingSo sweet!Big smile Thoroughly enjoyed reading this update. Continue soon.Thumbs Up Take care!!Hug


Edited by prerna26 - 09 November 2011 at 8:55pm

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