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Cute story! The viren, jeevika suhag raat was definitely interesting LOL! Loved how Viraat took care of Manvi! It was so adorable! Can't wait to read what happens next! Do you do PMs when you update? Because I would love to be added to that list Big smile

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I really enjoyed it plsz update soon and can u plsz have more virman scenes thanx anyway and plsz pm me wen u update

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Guys updating  today... i am so sorry for being so late now decided to continue this ff take care and i hope u all will support me... seriously this time i am updating

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Woow...grt...plzz pm me...

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Part-4

Jeevika comes to maanvi and tell her to have rest. Maanvi denies...

jeevika: mannu please tu thoda rest kar le teri tabiyat theek nahi hai
maanvi: kya di aap bi mey koi bachi thodi na hu ki mujhe kuch ho jaayega, mey theek hu di... tension mat lo...
jeevika: lakin manu { maanvi interupts}
maanvi: lakin wakin kuch nahi jiju { maanvi calls viren} aap yaha aaiye aur apni pyari si biwi aor meri pyar si behan ko boliye ki tension lekar apna BP na badaye

viren: hmm saali shaiba tension toh nahi leni chahiye lakin ha aaram toh tumhey karna padega aisa kartey hai pehaley breakfast kar letey hai phir aaram kartey hai ??? kyu virat

virat: ji bhai waisey bi logo ka kya pata kab bihosh hokar gir jaaye...

maanvi irriates with virat tantrums and looks at him

Maanvi: tum { she comes to virat} kisey i mean darpok kaun hai ha maana ki mey bihosh hogyi thi lakin kabhi kabhi ho jaata hai..iska matab yeh nahi ki mey apna dhyan nahi rakh sakti... {maanvi shows her finger}

viren and jeevika leaves from there seeing them in fighting mood. Virat looks at finger then maanvi.. He looks deep into her eyes...maanvi also sees him... virat holds maanvi finger..virat starts taking steps forward and maanvi back ..

virat {husky voice}: kaun dhyan nahi rakh sakta apna
maanvi looks here and there..
maanvi: virat tum {maanvi took back steps, until virat pins her at wall}
virat comes close to maanvi earlobe and sees her... she was silent and only looking at virat so as virat also..he puts finger on maanvi lips
virat: shhh ek dam chup.. tum yaha sey hilogi bi nahi jab tak mey nahi kehta samjhi...
maanvi looks into virat eyes.. which was having only naughtiness, love and care..maanvi nodes her head in approval...

someone...

ahem {clears his throat}
virat sees back and rolls his eyes, sees viren and jeevika...
viren: bhai humhey toh laga ki yaha jung ka maidaan ban gaya hoga lakin yaha to romance chal raha hai... {jeevika smiles}

maanvi feels embarrsed and goes from there...virat smiles...


Maanvi was jumping on stairs and viren, virat and jeevika was coming down. Jeevika sees maanvi jumping she stops maanvi jumping and looks at her where bua and dadaji was looking at her. Maanvi straighten her self and looks down and follows jeevika.. Jeevika- viren and virat and maanvi takes their blessings.. Bua and Dadaji smiles..

Bua: God bless u two couple. Jeevika aur maanvi jaaiye mithey bananey ki rasam puri kijye..

jeevika smiles and maanvi looks confused. Bua looks at maanvi. they start too walk but bua stops maanvi.

Bua: maanvi tum ruko pehaley jeevika ghar ki badi bahu hai toh woh pehaley mitha baneygi aur uske baad aap...

maanvi looks worried here and there, jeevika is also confused. Viren and virat looks at maanvi. Virat interupts

Virat: Bua woh kya hai doctor ne kaha ki maanvi ke kuch test karwaney hai toh mey aur maanvi clicnic ja rahey hai...

Bua: lakin virat breakfast toh karna hai na

Virat: bua woh test toh khaali pet hi hogey na toh maanvi kuch kha nahi sakti aur uski tabiyat bi theek nahi hai toh hum ja rahey hai

Dadaji: theek hai virat beta tum log jao lakin jaldi ghar wapas aa jaana

Virat holds maanvi hand and walks out from house. Bua looks at virat

bua (st): aaj toh maanvi bach gayi lakin kab tak uska saath dogey virat


scene shifts:

virat holding maanvi hand in his hand... maanvi stops in between... he looks at maanvi then hand and leaves...

maanvi: o hello meri help kyu ki tumney
virat: kya
maanvi: jayada boley mat bano mujhe sab pata hai
virat: kya pata hai tumhey
maanvi: yeh jo tum di aur jiju ke samney bahut achey baney ka naatak kar rhaey ho na jayada din tak nahi chalega.. bas ek baar mey theek ho jau...
virat: tum theek sey chal toh paati nahi ho aur theek honey ki baat kar rahi ho..wat a joke??
maanvi: hello Mr kya bolna kya chahtey ho tum
virat comes little close to maanvi
virat: yahi ki now i m ur husband so start behaving like a proper married girl now.. grow up kid
maanvi: ha ha tum toh jaisey budhey hogaye ho na dadaji

virat: dekho scene create mat karo aur chalo 
maanvi: nahi chali toh kya karogey

maanvi gives threatening looks at virat. virat looks away and then

virat: arey jeevika bhabhi aap
maanvi turns away and he pulls maanvi takes her in his arm... maanvi is shocked .. virat start walking...


scene shifts:

bua starts having a spoon of sweet.. she looks at jeevika and then viren who was smiling... 

bua: bahut acha bana hai jeevika {she smiles}
jeevika takes her blessing, bua gives her khandaani jewellery...
bua: aisey is meethey ki terha hum sab ke dilo mey aur is ghar mey mithas ghol dena jeevika.. aur hum maanvi sey bi yahi umeed kartey hai...

dadaji also gives her nake and then she tooks dadaji blessings also...

so guys here i end i hope u all will like it..i know short one but for next time i will make it long.. please comment ...



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Update aftr a long time... gud 1 yaar

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