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viren wipes her tears and hugs her tight! Closing his eyes feeling her warm touch!
*Roshni Se Bare Bare*(Ashoka) Music starts... (just imagine lol)
He lifts her up and carries her to the bed. He takes off her duppata from her head and unpins her hair! jeevika hesitates but gives in after feeling his touch!
He then takes off her jewelries leaving it beside them on the bed. Meanwhile he kisses her forehead and she closes her eyes!
viren gives a naughty look at took the opportunity while her eyes r closed, he kissed her lips and she opened her eyes in shock! He smiles and she blushes..
scene shifts
maanvi was sleeping and suddenly she start coughing very badly.. virat wakes up
and gives her a glass of water, but she was not feeling good...
virat: do you need a doctor maanvi???
maavi: no virat ji i am just okay. she was in tears...
maanvi is sacred and she was feeling uneasy...and crying
virat sees maanvi, he turns maanvi to him and sees him...
virat: i know tum abhi is rishtey ke liye ready nahi ho lakin hum achey dost toh
ban saktey hai na maanvi.???
maanvi sees virat and smiles...she nodes her head...
virat: owkey now come here...
virat makes maanvi lay on a bed and caresses her head so that she can sleep.. after
two minutes she felt sleep...and virat also sleep.
scene shifts:
viren again kisses jeevika and this time she gives in! she holds the back of his head and pulls him towards her, feeling the response viren got happy and made the kiss deeper. While with his fingers he starts to untie the dhori's that are located at the back of jeevika's lengha!
jeevika felt his hands brushing against her back but she was too busy to think of anything so she carried on with the kiss and pull away when she needed air!
viren looks at her lovingly! admiring her beauty while untieing her dhori's. jeevika was as red as a tomato! He succeeded in opening all her dhori's and she layed down!
He layed next to her and looked at her with a smile, he then put rose petals on her face and she closes her eyes! She squeezes his hands! He felt electric shock through his body! a feeling that he never felt before! He wanted to maker her his right there and then!
He pins jeevika's hand to the bed and slightly move on top of her
(his face to top of hers, not the body! Relax girls, i hope no1 fainted)
Her eyes closed and he admires her!
Slighty goes in to her face, he kisses her nose, eyes, cheeks forehead and then finds his way to her lips which was light pink! His kiss was full of passion and love! jeevika response his kiss with love as well!
He broke the kiss and went down to her neck! He bites her neck and remove the choli of her lengha off with his mouth! !! jeevika feels shy and tries to cover with bed sheet but only if viren would allow her lol! Full moon shining in the room with candles everywhere made it more romantic! He couldn't get enough of looking at her! She stands up and runs behind the curtain and he gives a naughty smile thinking "Your mine" Lool
They both walk behind the curtain but on opposite sides and runs their fingures through the curtains touching each others fingures (i hope u gt the image)
And then viren pulls her towards him and then you see jeevika sitting on the floor and viren's head on her lap, playing with her fingures! He gets up and she stands up immediately
He slips a ring on her fingure, and unzip her lower part of her lengha! and lifts her up again! (what to do? hes a macho man)
Puts her in the middle of the bed! Then you see the white silky bed sheets on jeevika and viren still in his sherwani! orange sherwani with golden and white emriodery sherwani matchin jeevika's Lengha!
Then viren holds jeevika close and starts caressing her and she moans a little ! He closes his eyes with her voice ecoing in his head! He pins her hands against the bed and she moans in his ears! jeevika finally grip her hand to his and they become one!
The wind blows the candles and the room has only moon lights which makes the whole scene natural!
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Virat is so sweet. Hope that soon they(Maanvi and Virat) will fall in love. Jeevika and Viren's moments were super hot and romantic.
Continue soon and take care.
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