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~Caged Hues~ ArHi FF (Chap:15 Pg.144) (Page 9)

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 5:22pm | IP Logged
Its awesome...just kinda worried about adi's role in khushi's life...keep it up!

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 7:09pm | IP Logged
OK so that was totally amazing! I really like how Khushi draws to ease herself; it was quite a nice change Tongue Can't wait to read about the pictures she'll draw in the future! Poor girl, she feels so odd in the midst of all that grandeur she's been introduced to. 

Adi is SUUUCHHH a sweetheart *sends a pappi his way* I love how the Mehras are so unassuming and warm towards Khushi. I hope, though, that Adi doesn't fall in love with Khushi Shocked That would be quite sad... lol. 

Ooh la laa, apne Hero ka entry hogaya LOL I was so anxious to see him show up that I began thinking, "Is Adi the hero?! ShockedLOL Is he the same stone-hearted knight as in the show? Not that it really matters because I'll be fine with however he is since I'm sure you'll do full justice to his character Tongue Loved the description of his eyes! <3


Absolutely can't WAIT for you to continueee

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Posted: 21 October 2011 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
Fantastic start ..different story line .i am definitely hooked...thanks for the pmSmile
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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 4:00am | IP Logged
hey pallo!!

its wonderful beginning...
very nicely described how khushi felt..
nively writtenSmile
waiting for next partSmile

Divya

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 9:44am | IP Logged
Grt start...hmm already liking Arnav ;)

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 9:55am | IP Logged
awesome Pallo! tht wuz great! luv the way you described everything! beautiful girl! I luv Adi already!

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Nice chapter...I can't wait til the next update!!!!!

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 8:19am | IP Logged

Really enjoying this!!!

 
 
Very much looking forward to reading more, please update soon!!!!!!

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