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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
I just finished reading ur whole FF.
OMG. I am just too overwhelmed to say anything.

What do u do when life takes away every reason to live for? When there are no more tears to shed, no voice to explain? When every prayer goes unheard. Just brought tears to my eyes. 

I really love ur FF yaar...please please please update soon. and please add me to the pm list. can't wait to read more! 

Thanks a lot.
Love ya.

btw,my name is Shaila

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Posted: 24 October 2011 at 2:27am | IP Logged
Once again an u took us on an emotional roller-coaster...i'm still trying to absorb all of the torrents of emotions from every character's perspective..
Reading about khushi, specially when she says  " 'I'm sorry,' she cried 'I'm so sorry.'  " when she has done nothing to warrant an apology..when it was actually the other way around, n she was the wronged... this small line broke my heart...

I'm glad that every misunderstanding, every little doubt Arnav had of Khushi r being cleared up..and i loved this line "Arnav closed his eyes. Can ur heart break and yet beat at the same time? His heart beat because khushi wasn't wrong here but the same nave innocent girl he had fallen in love with but broke because he had hurt her beyond endurance." Finally he is where he should be regarding what he thinks of Khushi..finally without any doubts he has accepted her n how much he had wronged her...

and again the brother in him i have always adored"Di, grip my hand real hard because u will have to be strong.. If not for urself den 4 me'" this line as always beautifully conveyed the bond between the brother n the sister..

and the hurtful words everyone threw at Khushi one after the other hurting her beyond endurance..wonder if she'll try to take her life cz just reading them it hurts to think how she must feel..cz the ones who hurt her the most were the ones whom she loved more than life itself..
the way u have brought out what Khushi was feeling "The words kept going in circles but the pain didn't come. Her heart felt numb. She felt dead from within. She had smiled till it hurt to smile; tried to explain till she realized that there wasn't any one believed; and trying to prove herself outside had killed something on the inside. After all she had always known tomorrow would come, had always known that their story couldn't go on forever" this is beautifully worded as always...

and then anjali after considering everything still thinks " And even though it was fresh and painful she knew she would survive and someday she hoped she would come alive." which i think is the difference between her n Khushi right now...Anjali still has hope within her, wherein with Khushi hope itself is a forgotten emotion...

and ur final line ""A little word unsaid.., may look too small to say.., but somewhere for this word, a heart may pray" " summed it all up so beautifully...

so as always an amazing update!Clap i loved it to bits.the only complain i have with this update is i so wish it was longer..so hoping for a longer n just as beautifully written next part and counting the minutes for the next update.. Embarrassed



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Posted: 24 October 2011 at 3:10am | IP Logged
Awesom Iyraa.. Anjali's emotions beautifully said.

It was too good but very emotional.. Thanks for the PM dear.. Please continue soon!

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Posted: 24 October 2011 at 7:45am | IP Logged
super please update soon

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Posted: 24 October 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
hey
read 2 parts together,...
very well writtten...
u potray the emotions so well!Clap
good that anjali n arnav know the truth!
continue soon

Divya

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