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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 3:19am | IP Logged
Wow just read all the parts at once. Great writing. Please update soon and add me to ur PM list Please.

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 7:37am | IP Logged

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 7:40am | IP Logged
yay yay yay!!!*does a little dance*
things looking towards better..and arnie boy  u better..u better make it upto her...coz this time its her that i love to bits!!
:)
thanks lyraa...nice one!:)
now im all perked up for my studies!


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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Oh that was awesome!Clap

As usual , you convey emotions so beautifully! We may all feel this, but to express so beautifully in words ...*Sigh*Cry

Thanks for the pm!Wink

Ab aage...Big smile

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Wow another powerful scene...so much emotinal turmoil...hope the mood starts lightening up a little now the truth is out!!!
 
Many thanks

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 8:09am | IP Logged
awesome Lyraa! Your r too good girl! keep it up !! tht wuz just wow!!! I hope Arnie has a huge plan made out or else!!

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 8:09am | IP Logged

amazing as always dr ... so here goes my comments 

" I wonder how u can live with yourself knowing that ur existence causes pain to every one around."

"its ironic that ur named khushi when u cudn give khushi to any one but probably apt as u took khushi from every one"

"yes I was wrong about u. I thought people like u were rare and yes having poison inside u to such extent is indeed rare."

" u proved one thing. Adopted daughter can never take place of a true one. Get out from our sight before ur presence affects ur babuji's health more."

these 4 statements summed it all the prvious updates .. it felt like reliving the pain .. 

finally all most eeveryone knows the truth .. i was thinking would it be late when Arnav get back to kushi ... will wait and see wht happensWink 

Anjali is going through wht kushi did .. but is no where near to the pain tht kushi has endured ... i wish everything to sort out smoothly ... but everyone needs to pay for kushi's tears ... every single one of them ... 

nicly done .. and will wait for another emaotional update from u 

so continue soon dr 

btw did i mention tht u are one hell of a writer .. if nt here i go  ... "u are a fab writer ... each line has so much meaning and emotions embeded in them ... i feel tht i am in a total different world while reading it "

so see u around dr 

-  -badra




Edited by 143badra - 23 October 2011 at 8:42am

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Posted: 23 October 2011 at 8:13am | IP Logged
wooo! i'm sooo glad you updated!! i've been waiting checking my inbox again and again lololol!

the truth is out! but is it too late?! i really hope arnav goes through a guilt and regret phase. he bloody needs it! poor khushi shes slowly turning mad :'(

hope to see another pm from u very soon!! 
xxx

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