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SublimeSanaya IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 8:11am | IP Logged

hi dr ... this is my first PROPER comment ... 

i just read ur first chapter when i commented first and i had no idea tht this ff would be this good .. ur first pt of good but the rest is great ...

wow it is simply amazing ... sorry for being so late for reading .. i finished my exams on fri and completed reading it today ... 

i did think tht i would ever be longing to read a sad story .. the way u have interpreted is perfect .. and each and every torment tht is thrown towards kushi feels like tht it is toward the me .. it really hurts .. i did think i would be this sensitive .. i think it is the way u have written .. i just feels so close to ur heart and it truly is amazing how a sad story feel so touching specially for me ... as u already have said tht the end would be a happy one it sounds more appealing ...

i am turning to be a sucker for sad stories .. but one thing the end needs to be happyWink

love the way the characters are build in ur ffs ... ASR hurts kushi a lot but dr cannt make myself to hate the guy ... 

as always u have stopped at a place tht i cannt stay without finding out the rest .. god it is killing me to wait for ur next update  ...  btw i am glad i didnt read this in minds of my exams .. i was bound to lose my mind ... i think i have lost it after reading this .. anyways dr loved ur updates .. every single one .. i am nt buttering uWink here when i say tht each update was better than the previous .. perfect correlation ...

i almost cried reading the last update ... i was wondering how could she smile when she is going through such a time ... the last words of Aranv  should have shattered here to pieces ... i was wondering whether she will attempt to commit suicide ...  or will she hang there for her father's sake ... u tell me .. before i lose it completely ... 

so let me conclude by saying u are a fab writer and i love ur ff ... pls continue soon 

will be waiting for a pm from u

and thanx for the previous pms dr 

and also best of luck for the up coming exams and glad tht u are finding time to update this ff .. we will be waiting .. but dont fall behind ur studies ... as u always can pay us back for keeping us waiting .. by give a extra huge update ... 

so update when possible .. but will be waiting to read wht u have in store for us .. wht type of turn would it take???? ... i will leave it here

so see u around dr 

- - badra


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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 8:34am | IP Logged

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 8:41am | IP Logged
hope it gets better for khushi!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 8:43am | IP Logged
I really admire your writing. Having been a sad story admirer, I'm absolute loving how the story is unfolding! It's really well written :)

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Beautifully written , specially the paragraph :

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What do u do when life takes away every reason to live for? When there are no more tears to shed, no voice to explain? When every prayer goes unheard. The pain was is intense, too deep for tears.  Holding on to hope is like holding on to a moment which always vanished. Every day she had gone on hoping someday her life would come together while every day, piece by piece it had fallen apart. She knew now that she had been searching for something she would never find. She had lost all the important pieces of her life that had made her the person she was- khushi who smiled, khushi who dreamed, khushi who loved.. and they had taken away all the light with them. "

I just loved this part SmileSmile ... Waiting for the happier parts to come

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 8:59am | IP Logged
so sad! i feel khushi has hit her lowest point here. got a bad feeling of what she might do. even i'm feeling bad!lol god damn it! i hate everyone except khushi here at the moment, lol. i want them to feel pain, lolololol ;)
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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 9:01am | IP Logged
i almost had tears in my eyes... hope there is no suicide 
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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 9:01am | IP Logged
Clapnice update atleast now Arnav will make Kushi happy i think plzzz dont make Kushi cry hereafter Cry
  hope everything will be good for kushi and want her smile Big smile immediately

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