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ArshiNmaNervs Goldie
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 2:52am | IP Logged
lyraa you are truly good

Edited by SobtianluvLG - 22 May 2013 at 2:53am

snehal.sharma Goldie
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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Amazing story 
Loved it 
It was wonderful 
Enjoyed reading it Smile


Edited by snehal.sharma - 25 May 2013 at 10:55am
Sisbamboo1 Senior Member
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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 12:58am | IP Logged
This is the second time I have read this but the first time I am commenting. Last time I think I was too emotionally exhausted because you made me cry buckets, woman! This time was not any better. You have a real knack for making me cry Cry. I finished half a box of Kleenex.

Every source of Khushi's love had turned into hate, scorn, and cruelty. No wonder she broke :( I am super duper grateful that you didn't make her commit suicide. I'm always 50/50 on it because sometimes her desperation makes sense and other times it just seems like a really bad cliche. I guess in a way Khushi committed mental suicide. She just gave up. She was numb. 

I could feel Khushi's pain and Arnav's repentance. My most favorite scene is the one with Khushi and her babuji. I LOVED his character in the show and was so pissed off that they turned him into a glorified prop. No matter if all the evidence was against Khushi, her babuji would have trusted her and known she was not in the wrong. Khushi needed that support desperately in the show.

You are a fantastic writer and I cannot believe that this is your first FF. I could kiss your fingers. They have magic in them!


Edited by Sisbamboo1 - 28 May 2013 at 1:15am

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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 3:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sisbamboo1

This is the second time I have read this but the first time I am commenting. Last time I think I was too emotionally exhausted because you made me cry buckets, woman! This time was not any better. You have a real knack for making me cry Cry. I finished half a box of Kleenex.

Every source of Khushi's love had turned into hate, scorn, and cruelty. No wonder she broke :( I am super duper grateful that you didn't make her commit suicide. I'm always 50/50 on it because sometimes her desperation makes sense and other times it just seems like a really bad cliche. I guess in a way Khushi committed mental suicide. She just gave up. She was numb. 

I could feel Khushi's pain and Arnav's repentance. My most favorite scene is the one with Khushi and her babuji. I LOVED his character in the show and was so pissed off that they turned him into a glorified prop. No matter if all the evidence was against Khushi, her babuji would have trusted her and known she was not in the wrong. Khushi needed that support desperately in the show.

You are a fantastic writer and I cannot believe that this is your first FF. I could kiss your fingers. They have magic in them!

awww thank you so much
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Posted: 30 May 2013 at 2:26am | IP Logged
superb
Amiarisme Goldie
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Posted: 31 May 2013 at 5:30pm | IP Logged
hello,
i just read this story and my previous experience with your writing is only with the parts of "this time forever", i hope u continue that story soon, however now coming to this. it was a beautiful story and i really enjoyed it. everyone was so rude to her, damn i wanted to kill them all and i would have loved them to suffer a bit more :) but thts okay, all well tht ends well. i really liked that you showed khushi babuji there when she actually woke up, to console her, that was just perfect. enjoyed reading it alot.
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Posted: 01 June 2013 at 1:39am | IP Logged
I would write a lengthy comment, but one word came to mind at the end: Beautiful. An incredible journey of such intense emotions culminating in beauty.
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Posted: 01 June 2013 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
amazing FF loved it

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