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Posted: 10 May 2013 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
superb one dear...

this is among the best i hav ever read...

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Posted: 15 May 2013 at 2:19pm | IP Logged
I absolutely enjoyed reading this ff... you are a wonderful wonderful writer... im not sure if u r still writing... but if u r ... i'll catch up with the other stories too..
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Posted: 19 May 2013 at 6:36pm | IP Logged
wow Awesome FF loved it 
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Posted: 22 May 2013 at 2:52am | IP Logged
lyraa you are truly good

Edited by SobtianluvLG - 22 May 2013 at 2:53am
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Posted: 25 May 2013 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Amazing story 
Loved it 
It was wonderful 
Enjoyed reading it Smile


Edited by snehal.sharma - 25 May 2013 at 10:55am
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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 12:58am | IP Logged
This is the second time I have read this but the first time I am commenting. Last time I think I was too emotionally exhausted because you made me cry buckets, woman! This time was not any better. You have a real knack for making me cry Cry. I finished half a box of Kleenex.

Every source of Khushi's love had turned into hate, scorn, and cruelty. No wonder she broke :( I am super duper grateful that you didn't make her commit suicide. I'm always 50/50 on it because sometimes her desperation makes sense and other times it just seems like a really bad cliche. I guess in a way Khushi committed mental suicide. She just gave up. She was numb. 

I could feel Khushi's pain and Arnav's repentance. My most favorite scene is the one with Khushi and her babuji. I LOVED his character in the show and was so pissed off that they turned him into a glorified prop. No matter if all the evidence was against Khushi, her babuji would have trusted her and known she was not in the wrong. Khushi needed that support desperately in the show.

You are a fantastic writer and I cannot believe that this is your first FF. I could kiss your fingers. They have magic in them!


Edited by Sisbamboo1 - 28 May 2013 at 1:15am

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Posted: 28 May 2013 at 3:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sisbamboo1

This is the second time I have read this but the first time I am commenting. Last time I think I was too emotionally exhausted because you made me cry buckets, woman! This time was not any better. You have a real knack for making me cry Cry. I finished half a box of Kleenex.

Every source of Khushi's love had turned into hate, scorn, and cruelty. No wonder she broke :( I am super duper grateful that you didn't make her commit suicide. I'm always 50/50 on it because sometimes her desperation makes sense and other times it just seems like a really bad cliche. I guess in a way Khushi committed mental suicide. She just gave up. She was numb. 

I could feel Khushi's pain and Arnav's repentance. My most favorite scene is the one with Khushi and her babuji. I LOVED his character in the show and was so pissed off that they turned him into a glorified prop. No matter if all the evidence was against Khushi, her babuji would have trusted her and known she was not in the wrong. Khushi needed that support desperately in the show.

You are a fantastic writer and I cannot believe that this is your first FF. I could kiss your fingers. They have magic in them!

awww thank you so much
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Posted: 30 May 2013 at 2:26am | IP Logged
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