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Posted: 19 October 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged

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Posted: 19 October 2011 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
 he held a hand over his heart  and muttered angrily 'heal damn it'..
lyraa u make me sentimental again!
very nice and that pigheaded darling of ours realises that shyam forced himself on her!!yippy!
and now i can study with peace..thankyou so much!!:)
and next time take your dear sweet time and write us a long satisfying update..:)
good job!!


Edited by shaam91 - 19 October 2011 at 12:08pm

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Posted: 19 October 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
god!!!! arnav still doesn't blv khushi!!!!! y????
wen will he start blvng her????

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Posted: 19 October 2011 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
omg  its awesone Clap awaiting your next update Smile

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Posted: 19 October 2011 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Hmm... well i liked the update.. but i hope it would have been longer than this Embarrassed
Please update soon. I really like to read your story.
 
And this is just a request. Please make some silent romantic scenes between Arnav and Khushi. Tongue May be played by destiny itself Wink I want to know them from your point of view.
 
Thats just a request. You can always continue just the way you thought about the story. Because i like your writing anyways. Embarrassed

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Posted: 19 October 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
Awesome update!! Hope he starts believing her soon! Before it's too late! Can't wait for the next update, hoping for a longer one though!Smile Thanks for the PM! xx

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Posted: 19 October 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
heyy thanks for the pm!

very good part!! both of them are going through so much pain but ughh arnav can be so aggravating! I hope he believes her soon and beats the crap out of creepo! 

You know one thing i really love is some of the lines u use in here, like that moon one i loved, and then this one 

"he held a hand over his heart  and muttered angrily 'heal damn it'"

that right there...was the best line in the whole part...so touching and so well portrayed! 

keep it up =D
ooo and yes i know im demanding a lot but please make ur parts a bit longer =D

great job once again!

hershi

ps: Is that vanessa hudgens in ur dp? kinda looks like her





Edited by Smileyface - 19 October 2011 at 12:30pm

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Posted: 19 October 2011 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the pm's!!!!!
This story keeps getting better and better
I hope arnav will start believing khushi and becomes a little nicer towards her...

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