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Posted: 17 November 2011 at 7:09pm | IP Logged
I just read the entire 15 chapters in one GO...and I must say that your story is Brilliant!!   Such heartfelt emotions wrapped in a spellbinding story...gripping your heart and mind simultaneously!!  I love it.  I am adding you to my buddy's list in hopes to get a PM for the next update.  Smile 

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 11:00am | IP Logged




Edited by Lyraa99 - 03 June 2016 at 12:06am

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 11:04am | IP Logged
Me first...
what a heartbreaking update

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 11:17am | IP Logged

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sorry sugar for the late comment .. hope i am forgiven .. i know i am .. so here goes my comments 

as always wonderful start ... holding her in his arms and whispering his love to her ..and also the cuddling her ...  wow tht is so toucy and romantic .. i was dreaming for a sec over tht point .. but as i had to continue reading i dragged myself out of it .. 

wow after reading the first para .. i found arnav to be a total different person from the one we saw before everything .. it was good in a way to read the hurt ,, tht he has gone through .. and it is nicly put into words ... feels sorry for him at the sametime .. ok i am having mixed emotions over here .. 

initially i was a bit confussed when did kushi's babuji entered the story ... but have to say  tht was a great move .. best move so far ... 

and i almost cried as i read the part where kushi is out of deprssion and Aranav realises wht he have lost and the regret .. god it was so good ..

broken arnav .. talking to babuji was heart breaking yaar ... i am almost in tears .. i feels so bad for him .. but cannt blame kushi either ,,, 

". It's too soon for her to forgive and forget' "

"Will she ever?" Arnav asked brokenly

"Keep faith son. It is all that keeps us going."

this words were the most touching and sensible part so far in this update ...

Arnav felt his breath catch knowing that within a span of minutes his world would suddenly become empty. 

this was even better ... 

btw loved the emotional out break of the entire family .. nani hugging mami .. now tht is new and mami wipping nani's tears .. thtz eired and above all mami announcing to make jalabeis .. i sort of laugh at this moment .. 

so far it was a misture of heart break and happiniess ... though more of heart break for me .. 

"Shaurya, I don't know how to thank you." She said genuinely

"Marry me" Shaurya said seriously without missing a beat.

nice going man ... around of appaluse to shaurya .. i didnt see it coming .. u totally took me by suproise .. and i glad .. thanx for the shock ..

wow .. u actually make sense Wink  .. never imagined tht u were this wise based .. i am dam imppressed ... i new u were good .. but this good .. nevver imagined .. 

Shaurya and Anjali's part was amazing .. it talks volumes of stuff ... i am so stunted at the moment .. and it felt right and good ... 

wow ... the part kushi leaving .. and the broken Arnav .. made me cry .. at last u made me cry .. god .. tt was very will written .. each word ,, and phrase was so much of emotion tht i could help feeling heart broken and sad .. but hun .. it was a marvelous peice ..

over all comment .. the whole thing was .. much more than i signed for .. it was so good and u have over done ur self ... 

the seperation was heart breaking for sure .. but as they say ... abscence make ur heart grow fonder .. 

thanx for the spoiler .. it was a relief ...  so much to look forward to .. will see how u pull it off ... surprise me .. 

thanx for writting such a wonderful update and sharing it with us ... enjoyed a lot ..

catch u in a sec 

- - badra 




Edited by 143badra - 21 November 2011 at 8:25am

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 11:18am | IP Logged
niceee...bt heartbreaking...

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 11:21am | IP Logged

Amazing Lyraa..!

Heartbreaking Update and a six-month Leap? How did Arnav survive and most importantly Khushi

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
hi dear
 
beautiful, touching update
i totally agree wid u, things cant change in a split second...every1 needs time to sort their emotional n mental state of mind
and im glad there's a leap of 6 months...cant wait for the next part
 
take care n continue soon
 

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Posted: 18 November 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Heart warming update. Really good. Thanks for the PM.

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