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Thanks to ur love and support that im here opening second thread of Walking with You.

An ff tht first I thought will be an short story, than I told MAHA, "15 chapter se zayda likh lo tu mein mar jao gi"..but sumhow I strt loving writng this as much as I did my other works, though this ff is completely unplanned'

N now I m here at 26 chapter still I donot know how long, but promise not more thn 30, hopefully

 

Thnks aloot for ur love on this story

 



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Chapter: 26

He kept her hugging like tht for sumtime, n she slowly moved him apart, still holding his one hand wch was in tight grip of him , she sat near him, removing files n laptop..

Nupur: kiya baat hai..mjhy bhi nhi baatay gay…

Mayank: his head was still lower….n he ws finding words to strt…

Nupur: mayank, she cuped his face n make him look to her…bolein..i trust u…

He pulled her near n hugged her tight, n she rubed his back to clam his nerves, thought her heart was skiping beats in fear, he is a strong person , pretty storng thn wht has happened now…

The words tht escaped from her mouth were the words he want to hear, again n again..

Moving back she single him tht she is here to listen, taking a deep breath he strt…

Mayank: apko pata hai k hum woh new company k fianc handle ker rah rhy thy, us ki construction k saray papers hum se he approve ho rahy thy,

He paused…4 din pehly jab hum office gay tu, boss called me, aur unhony kaha kus company k accounts mein se 20 lakhs k details gayab hain..

Nupur: wht…he looked at her n she aked him to speak…

Mayank: kyun k hum woh sab handle kertay hain tu, nupur hum ny sab check kerliya, us k record nhi hai..kahin nhi hai, aur jis cheque per approval hoa hai, us per signature humaray hain as a grantee..

Nupur: per apt u bahgir parhy kuch sign nhi kertay aur itni bari amount..

Mayank: woh manual cheque the, machined nhi, asa sirf ek cheque hum ny sign kiya tha aur woh jaha tak humain yaad hai itny hi baray amount k tha, magar woh site per, workers eid bouns k liyan, aur barish ki wajah se jo maal zaya hoa hai us k liyan tha….

Wasy tu sara maal insured hota hai, but us insurance company ny humain ek email ki thi jis mein us k letter than, aur hum ny electronic signature k sath un ko post kiya tha, n we both agreed k abhi urgently company day rahi hai, bad mein insurance company day gi…

Per jab hum ny waha call kiya tu waha bhi us manger ny kaha k asa tu kuch us ny kiya hi nhi, plus mera outbox se bhi woh gayab hai…

Nupur: matlab….

Mayank: matabl un 2o lkh k koi record nhi, site per workers k bonus, MD ny issue khud kerdiya tha, jis k baray mein mjhy nhi batay gaya, aur yeah cheque maal k liyan bhi nhi tha, as insurance company ny pay kerdiya hai…inshort yeah pasy mein ny choray hain

Nupur: mayank…asa kuch nhi hain

Mayank: yeah tu janti ho mein janta hoo…per sab kcuh mera gilaf hai, nupur agar hum is sab mein khud ko beghina na sabit ker saky tu, job tu jay gi hi, humain balck list alag kerdiya jay gay…aur 20 lakh woh hum kaha se lay gay..kaha se company ko return kerain gay…mujh kuch samhj nhi arha ha…he again diged his hand in his hands

Nupur: per koi tu zariya hoga, agar kisi ny apk outbox se mail bhi delete ki tu system mein hoti hai woh, magar ap k PC k password kisi pata tha…

Mayank: ksis ko nhi aur her 4 days mein mein change kerta hoon , islyan k mera kam hi asa hai, sab kuch khatam ho jay ga…..

Nupur: shhh….she moved more near to him..n cuped his face..kuch nhi hoga, Allah ki asmish hai bus, jab ap ny kuch galat nhi kiya tha ap k sath bhi khabi kuch galat nhi hoga, itna stress lay gay tu phir soch kasay pay ga k akhir ap ko kaun pehassa raha hai, baba se baat

Mayank: nhi ..ghar mein shadi hai wasy hi ami itni hyper hoi hain, ghar mein sab ko enjoy kerny do, mein tu apko bhi pershan nhi kerna chata tha, magr mjhy se aur bardsht nhi horaha tha..

Nupur: agar ap hum se chopa ty tu humain lagat ap hum per behrossa nhi kertay, mayank biwi hain hum apki, sirf khushi per hi nhi gham per bhi humara pora haq hai..

Mayank: per humari is month ki salry bhi rukh li hai…

Nupur: tu kiya hoa, we have our savings, aur humar expense hi kitna hai…

Mayank: shadi hai nupur….

Nupur: apki nhi hai…she said trying to lighten his mood, n slighty smile did appers on his face, Samrat ki hai, aur un ko gift dayn haina bus, woh hojay ga, baqi baba se hum ny pocha tha k ap ny kaha hai k kisi bhi chez ki zaroorat hotu hum hain….us per baba ny ek dam data lagai, k abhi woh hain, aur yeah un k dialogue hai…

He was looking at her as the most blessd belsing of God in his life…

Kuch nhi hoga, thora arm kerain, phir sari chezay dobara se hum dono discus kertay hai, dekhna us shakas ny kahin tu koi galti ki hogi…haina..

He nooded in yes…she cuped his face

Ap ny kuch nhi kiya, tu ap k sath bhi kuch bora nhi hoga, Allah per behrosa rekhain..

Saying so she slowly softly placed her lips on his, he shuted his eyes tighly knowing how much he needs her trust , her word, pulling her close he deepen the kiss, while she caress his neck assuring she is there, always. moving a slight away he caressed her cheek..

Mayank: ap janti hai ap meri zindagi ki sab se bari Allah ki nimaat hain, pehly lagta tha k yeah sab dialogues hain , per sach hain, hamesha humary sath rahiya ga, pls, apk bhgir shayd hum kuch bhi na ker pay…

Nupur: mayan…

Her words were left on finished as he sealed her lips, this time with deepest affection and respect for her…

After sumtime..He was lying with his head on her shoulder, snuggling to her..n she was stroking his hair

Nupur: mayank

Mayank: hmm..

Nupur: office mein ap k rival kaun hai…aur jo next month apk promotion hona tha woh ksi ki position kahli horahi hai…

Mayank: rival…humain nhi lgata koi bhi hai…aur promotion tu mera, boss ki position per hona tha, cause unhony MD se kaha tha k itna sara kam woh aklea sambhaltay hain, n all tht , so MD decided to have two people at this position…

Ek min..he sat up a bit…

Nupur: kiya hua…

Mayank: meray data base k acess tu boss k pass hota hai, aur unhony MD se islayn kaha tha kyun he wants an increment, but MD ny kaha he has done nthing speciall k un ko out of way promote kiya jay ya increment diay ja, but MD was giving me tht, aur is se..

Nupur: boss ki position insecure hojay gai..

Mayank: ya Allah…

Nupur: kiy ahua..

Mayank: smarat ki shadi waly din states jaraha hai…vacations per…asa tu nhi k woh

Nupur: bhag raha haoo…

Mayank: perso se ghar mein function shoro horah hai..aur yeah sab..

Nupur: ab yaha ki fikar bulkily maat kerain hum sab sambhal lay gay…ap ab direct MD se baat kerain

Mayank: mein kal hi office jata hoon

Nupur: nhi mayank office mein nhi…un k ghar jay..office mein sab one must be keeping check on u

Mayank:  but nupur us se pehly mera pass actually koi tu asi baat hoi chaiy jis se mein prove kersako im right…

Tum so jao mein woh project phir se ek baar study kerta hoon, sari details aur sary papers, kcuh tu hoga..

Nupur: mayank, per pehly ap kuch kahy, hum kuch sanck lay rahy hain, pls pehly kuch kaha lyain…

Mayank: nupur alredy 12 baj rahy hain, aur  sach mein humain bhook……..he paused…ek min ek min, he crossed his arms around his chest…apny khana khaya hai….

Nupur: mh…han…han na hum ny tu kaha liya tha….

Mayank: he looked at her in donot lie…nupur ap bhi na…acha jaldi se jao aur kuch lay aoo, hum kam shoro kertay hain sath mein kahy gay, per ek sharat per

Nupur: kiya

Mayank: apko khilana peray ga..

Nupur: she moved forwards and asked msiheviouly….kiyaa…

He grined n pulled her close

Mayank: ohh…khnay se pehly sweet dish k mood hai kisi k, wasy tu would have loved to explore it..aur aj meri biwi demanding n tht so boldy….

Nupur: choray time nhi hai apk pass, kam kerain..she said lowering her eyes n blushing

Mayank: he chukled…woh phir se blush…..buhat bori baat hai, ek tu khud distrct kero aur phir bhagoo….he pecked her sofly, jay maaf kiya…

He turned the other way n she peck ker cheeks, he turned in surprise…

Nupur: my hubby is back…he smiled widly n she left, leaving n ear to ear smile on his face too, true she is a blessing in his life…making his nightmare, unaffected on him…

Mayank: magar is baat k asar kafi barha hai nupur..hope sab thik hojay



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yeee new thread
congrats jana


lets cut the ribbon of ur new thread



janu- i hope tum aur tarakki karoge...LOL LOL
par week 4/5 ff update, 3/4 OS likhoge
May ALLAH  bless u dear


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Oye hoye cascade- bahut he barya update tha
fabulous hun...
errr – so koi mayank kofasana chati hai- and he may be his boss

That's why he was tensed and behaved rudly with nups

But thnax GOD finally he shared his problem with nupur and nups also helped him to fin out the solution..

Meri nupur to lakho main ek hai- aisa tou hoga he…..i loved mayur cono sweetu. Loved the way they shared their problem and also tried to find out the reason behind it.

Nups took care of Mayank ad gave him  strength…

I really loved this update

Wonderful sweetu

Too good

Keep it up




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me second Party

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first of all ... a BIG congratulation ... another thread ... not bad yaar ...n u deserve it.
bdw, whre is our party ...jaldi chiye ...warna WWU ki jagah WWE ho jayega Evil Smile
par ye kya baat hui ... ab tu chapter k hisab se story decide karegi kya????Disapprove
dekh ...WWU ek bht acchi story hai ... one of ur best FF ... i loved it a lot, even more than CSI.Big smile
to ye bhul ja kitni chapters huye hai ...just story k hisab se chal ...thik hai. i can understand k tu kya soch rahi hai ... but believe me, aisa kuch nahi hoga ... aur agar jaldi end kar dia, to tu wo nahi dikha payegi jo dikhana chahti hai ... so dont worry ...aur dil kholke likh.Star


now coming to this update.

i just loved loved loved this update.

through it a sad update according to mayur ...but u presented it beautifully.

oh god ... mayank pe 20 lakh chori ka ilzamOuch ... aur wo bhis uske boss ne lagaya Ouch

argh!!!! why jealous people exits on this world ... they are most dangerous than any anti-socials.Angry how beautifully he trapped mayank .Angry.. par jai ho nupur ki ...how intelligent she was ...how easily and logically clear evey doubt.Big smile

i think ye CSI ka asar hai LOL

jocks apart ... besides all odds ... our mayur rocks ... loved their cuteness ... loved their emotional bonding ... it was beautiful ... beyond words...Day Dreaming

finally mr. & mrs. mayank ahmed are back on their track.Big smile

loved this update a lot.

contunue soon.

aur jaldi end karne ki sochna bhi mathEvil Smile





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Great Party

Oh Mayank Confused
Hope things will work out well for him... Nupur is such a darling Embarrassed


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