And She Shattered In His Arms Overwhelmingly. - Page 4

Posted: 12 years ago
wow that was beautiful loved it
Posted: 12 years ago
Outstanding
U r amazing
loved the poem
Posted: 12 years ago
👍🏼no words yaaa... 👏

When I'm all alone, out in the night
You comes along, and finds the light,
When I am sad, and life's no fun
You were be there to be my sun; In every moment, of my life
Glory weeped intensely for not to loose her Father again 
Her strain, fear and tears scraping her perpetually.
Posted: 12 years ago
edited my comment on page 1!:)
Posted: 12 years ago
amazing lines, sadaf..

She Embraced him snugly and tenderly with her warm hands
Shattered and crushed like a petals mashed vertically,
She felt to be in his arms cause; she know there will be no harms

-- loved itt.. perfect!
Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the PM! What poetry! Absolutely beautiful! My fave part:

"...Every night in my dreams I search for you
My eyes longs for a look at your sweet smile
And big brown eyes I am losing myself in You
But the more I search the more my soul disappears
The more I desire you the more my heart breaks
And the more I love you The more I Lose myself,
Falling this deep in love, I never thought it was possible, 
But now, I see, it is, indeed, very plausible."


😳👏
Posted: 12 years ago
I loved it!!!!
as always you left me speechless
Posted: 12 years ago
wowww sadaf...dear...itz fab...👏
just like it sooo much...😳

And the more I love you The more I Lose myself,
Falling this deep in love, I never thought it was possible,
But now, I see, it is, indeed, very plausible.


😍😍😍

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