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Posted: 16 October 2011 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
girls this FF is zara hat kay...just like this serial...i will be up dating during week ends based on friday episode...Big smile
 
part 1:
 
continuation of friday-14th oct epi...Wink

around 3pm:

seema was taking a nap in her room.kunal came back after fixing the cooker. he kept the cooker in the kitchen and went to his room.

he casually looked at neatly fixed bed...'uff...for the past 3 nights i could not sleep properly...ab tho bed free hai Tongue...thodi thayr so jata hunSleepy...kya pata aaj raat kaise kaat na pade ga?Unhappy...'as soon as he thought, he jumped on the bed.he happily pulled the blanket up and covered himself from neck to toe , closed his eyes and tried to sleep.

but he could not sleep...the bed, blanket and the pillows were filled with the feminine fragrance of siddhi,sign of used by her 3 nights...he turned restlessly from one side to other side...he flipped himself and lied on his stomach and tried to bury his face on the pillow...flipped again and lied flat on his back...pulled the blanket and covered his face...the pleasant odor of siddhi suffocated him . he pushed the blanket off from him and got up from the bed.

he looked at the clock, it was 4:30pm.he got irritated to realize that for the past one and half hour he was trying to sleep but failed ...he grabbed the towel angrily and went to take a hot shower.

when he came out after his shower it was 5pm. seema was busy in the kitchen...

kunal:' seema... wo...cooker maine teek karwadiya...Smile' he came to the kitchen wiping his head with the towel.

seema:' haan mai ne thaykha...chai bana dun?Smile...'

kunal:' um...itni jaldi dinner banane ki kya zaroori hai?Confused...' he asked looking at her busy cutting vegetables.

seema:' thodi thay mai siddhi aajayeh gi...pata nahi lunch khaye bhi ya nahi...thought of making tiffin for herSmile...' she said handing over the tea cup to him.

kunal:'oh!...Approve'he stood hesitantly drinking tea.

kunal:'mai madad kardun?...Smile'

seema:' nahi...wo...'she was about to refuse... quickly changed her mind and said 'that will be fine...mai bachon ko homework karwati hun...Approve' immediately she left the kitchen with a secret smile on her face.

around 6pm:

siddhi was yet to return from office.kunal was walking to and fro in his room frequently looking at the clock.other chopras were sitting in the hall worrying for siddhi.

seema: 'papa...wo aajayehgi...peak hours mai traffic high hota hai...Unhappy'

raj:'Unhappy...phone bhi nahi uttarahi hai...Ouch...mosam bahut kharaab hi, kabhi  bhi baarish ho sakti hai...Unhappy'when he was worrying for so many things at a time kunal came from his room.

raj:'kunal...tum...'before he could complete...

kunal:' mai thaykta hun...' he said with no expression on his face, pushing his feet in chappals.

seema:'kunal bhaiya...chatha...' she came running with an umbrella.

by the time kunal reached thakral's office it was 6:30pm. the climate was very chill... it was unusually dark due to grey clouds. as soon as he reached the main gate the gate keeper rushed to him.

gate keeper:'saab ...aap!Big smile achcha hua aap aagayeh...kab se bolraha hun mai ma'am saab ko ghar jane kay leyeh...' he opened the gate and took him in. from distance kunal can see siddhi in one corner of the entrance of the office, sitting on a step folding her legs up with a big box on her lap.

kunal:'siddhi...Shocked' he walked fast towards her.

siddhi:...Cry

kunal:Ouch...he went close to her and stood hesitatingly beside her.

siddhi:Cry...she was looking some where as if she did not realize his presence.

kunal:'siddhi...'

siddhi:...Cry

kunal:' siddhi...' his feeble voice did not reach her.

siddhi:'Cry...'

kunal:'siddhi...chalo...'

siddhi:'Cry...'

kunal:'siddhi...'  he realized that his low tone is not reaching her. he slowly extended his right hand to touch her shoulder...and very next second he pulled back his hand.

kunal:'...Ouch'he bend down, folded his legs, sat on his toes in front of her, facing to her.

kunal:' siddhi...'

siddhi:Shocked...Cry...' she looked at him and tried to get up.the box from her lap slipped down.before it could reach the floor kunal hold the box.

siddhi:'yeh mera hai...AngryCry...' she snatched the box from his hand.

kunal:'Ouch...Shocked'he wonder what is special it that? 

siddhi:'Cry... 'she started walking with the box without caring him. kunal followed her.he thought of helping her by taking the box from her but the way she was holding the box tightly with her while walking , prevented his thought.

siddhi and kunal started walking on the road ...siddhi with the heavy box kunal with a heavy heart. the heavy clouds who were shadowing them started pouring. quickly kunal opend the umbrella and hold it above , protecting from rain both siddhi and the box. in his attempt to sheltering siddhi and her box he could not protect him self from rain. by the time they reached home kunal completely drenched with rain water.

seema:' bhaiya...Shocked...'she was shocked to see kunal dripping with rain water from top to bottom in spite of having an umbrella. 

siddhi:Cry... without saying any thing she straight away went to her room with the box.

kunal:' ...'he gave the folded umbrella to seema and followed siddhi.

seema:Confused she too followed kunal. 

siddhi" Cry...'she sat on the bed and kept the box beside her.

seema:'siddhi...kya hua?Unhappy...tum teek tho ho na?Confused...kunal bhaiya ne kuch kaha kya?Confused' with multiple questions she came to her.

siddhi: Cry

seema:' ek minute ruko...i will bring hot tea for you...i think you are feeling cold...' she went out.kunal came out of the wash room after changing his wet dress in to his usual white pyjama kurta.

kunal:'i knew itOuch...zaroor wo kamina thakral ne tumai kuch kaha hoga...Angry...issi leyeh maine mana kiya tha...Angry...' after a long time he deliberately broke the silent.

siddhi:Cry...'

kunal:' lo...' he pulled few tissue papers from the box and gave it to her.

siddhi:'Cry...without taking the tissue papers from him she got up from the bed and went to wash room to wash her face.

kunal:Ouch...'he stood hurt looking at her back with tissue paper in his hands.

seema:' siddhi...Smile'she again came with hot streaming tea.

kunal:Ouch...'

seema:'what is this box ?Smile...' she kept the tea and opened the box .


seema:'Shocked...she stood frozen looking at anand's left outs.

kunal:Shocked ...he got traumatized when he saw the anand's things inside and could understand why she snatched that box from him. how long they stood still... they are not aware.when they heard siddhi coming seema rushed out of the room , not to show her emotions in front of siddhi.

siddhi:'Confused...she looked at the opened box and then kunal.

siddhi:'Angry...how come you touch my personal things... haan?...Angry...' she suddenly screamed at kunal looking at the open box.

kunal:' Ouch...Shocked...' he stood dumb understanding her emotions.by arguing with her he don't want to kindle her feelings.

siddhi:Cry Angry...keep away from my personal things...Angry..Cry...keep away...Cry' she cried without realizing that anand's belongings are not her personals. 

kunal:Ouch...Unhappy...'

seema:'siddhi...chai thandi hogaye hogi...mai doosri chai lati hun...till than you have this hot pasta...Smile' she came in.

siddhi:CryAngry...' she quickly tried to close the box hiding her tears and anger.

seema: Confused...while taking back the tea cup she notice that.

kunal:Ouch...he went back and sat on the half birth beside the window.


seema:'sorry...maine galati se tumara box kholdi...Unhappy'

siddhi:'Shocked ...aap ne!'

seema:' sorry...mujay nahi pata tha...Ouch' she kept a small bowl of pasta with a spoon on the bed beside her.

siddhi:'Shocked...'

seema:' ...pasta kunal bhaiya ne banaya hai...Smile'she passed that information while going out.she turned and looked at kunal ...but failed to catch his sight.he was looking out side the window.

siddhi:Ouch ...she took the pasta cup looking at kunal's direction. 

kunal:Ouch...he was looking outfacing his shoulder to her.

siddhi:'...pasta achcha hai...Approve'she said while putting a spoon full of pasta in to her mouth.

kunal:Shocked ...kunal quickly turned back and looked at her.

siddhi'...pasta achcha hai...Approve..' she said the same and had one more spoon, which brought a ray of smile on his face.

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Edited by shumi. - 26 February 2012 at 7:13am

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Posted: 16 October 2011 at 4:25pm | IP Logged
really good! please pm re: next update

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Originally posted by hkhb17

really good! THANKS Big smile please pm re: next update SUREBig smile

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Posted: 16 October 2011 at 6:47pm | IP Logged
Shumiji Congrats on the the very FIRST SiNal FF on the forum Party.

Need I say I want a pm on updates?Wink But I shall say it anyway. Pm me, thanks.Big smile 
And jaldi se dena next part. 

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Posted: 16 October 2011 at 9:58pm | IP Logged
Shumi great writing skills, loved it and please do continue.

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Posted: 17 October 2011 at 1:20am | IP Logged
nice one shumi,actually i was about to ask you to write FF for parichay forum when you said that you used to write them in kasturi forum.lagta hai telepathy connection hai hamare beechWinkLOL

do come up with more ff's for our forumSmile

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Posted: 17 October 2011 at 2:52am | IP Logged
First of all expalin to me what is FF???
 
And Second Very Good shumi ji..i alson want to try this

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Posted: 17 October 2011 at 5:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by neeme

First of all expalin to me what is FF???
 
And Second Very Good shumi ji..i alson want to try this

FF is short for fan-fiction which is a story that you have written your self, this one is based on Parichay. So its about SiNal.Smile

Hope that helped a little (:.

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