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At the court

The judge came in and sat down at his chair and the women's stood me at the box.
Judge: plez start the case
Lawyer: today's case it about Ms. Kripa Sharma who went to her friends house at middle of the night and murdered he best friend Ms. Mishti Chopra
K: (yelling) that's not true
J: order order…Plez continue
L: thank you… there are some evidence that shows Ms. Kripa murdered her friend.
They showed pictures of misty dead body on me and I was holding the knife which misty give to me
L: from this picture it shows clearly that Ms. Kripa Sharma has killed Ms. Mishti Chopra

after few mints later
J: From all the evidence it shows that she has been seen guilty.. The court gives Ms. Kripa Sharma 10 years in prison.
I was shoked and fainted there.

When I woke up I was in jail. The women that worked at jail came
W: so your finally awake its been two days since u passed out.
K: what? What happen? Than I remember the court saying I have to be at jail for 10 years.

Two weeks passed, in this two week I became more hurt. My family didn't believe me and they disowned me. I was really shattered . Every day I woke up and went to eat and stay quit and do what they told me to do.
One day like always for the passed two weeks I went to the small place were they served food. I was in line and got my food. I waked to the corner there was a small table. I sat in it, few mints later a girl came to me with food on her hand.
G: what are u doing?
K: eating what do u think
G: your not allowed to sit in this table
K: y not
G: the lady sits here only if she sees u she I will kill u
K: what are u talking about
G: oh god they are here
I was confused and didn't understand what she try to tell me

After few seconds I was eating with my head down. And someone came in front of the table and hit her hand on the table
G: do u know were your sitting at
K: (looked up) what do u want?
G: what do I want, your asking me that, this is my table and this is were I always sit .
K: is it your dads
G: got mad and hit my plat, and all my food fall on the floor
I got mad and got up tried to talk to her back when the police lady came
P: your time is over go back to your cell
I didn't say anything and just left. I was still hungry.

Next day it was time for lunch. I left and took my food and site the same place as I sat last time. Every one was quit and all of sudden a girl screamed. No on moved a bit like as if they know what is going on. A man came there wearing police uniform. He was a police man. He came close to a girl and started to fight with her. I didn't care I thought they might be fighting,. The girl started screaming "help me plez someone." but no one moved a bit they just watched her fight with the police man. I asked the girl that sit at other table.
K: why are they fighting , what's with her?
G: she is useless no matter how much she screams for help, no one will help her.
K: what do u mean?
G: she is not just fighting with him…she is trying to save her izat.
K: (was confused) what izat?
G: u see this police he is trying to rape her
K: (shocked) what?
K: how come no one is helping her?
G: they cant if they do they will get beat up
I watched her fight with him as he tried to rape her. I couldn't see her like that. I got up and went to them. I grabbed from back of the police shirt and pulled him, he fall down on the ground.
P: how dare u hit me
He raised his hand to slap me. When I caught his hand. He looked at me in my eyes. I knew exactly what he saw. He saw lots of anger that could kill him any mint if he try to fight with me. He pulled his hand back.
P: u know for doing this u have to pay a lot.
K: u don't have any rights to rape someone here.
P: who do u think u are? U think u could stop me? (He started laughing)
K: (angry even more) try to touch her again u will see. Just becz im a girl it doesn't mean I cant do anything to u.
P: no, I will not rape her, but I will do it to u.

He came close to kripa. kripa picked a danda of police that was laying in the floor. She smacked him in the head with that. He fall holing his head and blood started coming. She hit him again with the stick at his back. He fall and started screaming for "Help"
K: go ahead scream for your life, no once will be able to stop me. ( started hitting him again but this time harder)
Few other police came running and holed her. she tried to free her self but couldn't , she still started kicking him.
K: I will teach u how to treat a lady.. U ba***ed
They holed her and ambulance came , took the police man to hospital.
They throw her back to her cell. She fall on the ground. Instead of getting angry or cry she started smiling and laughing.

After a hour latter the police lady came and opened the cell.
L: came here, u have to go to the court for injuring the police man
K: that bas** is still alive
L: yes he is .. Now get up

They took her to the court

The judge came
G: so Ms. kripa u are here again
K: (acting like kids) yes sir
G: y? what did u do this time
The lawyer got up to talk when he got interpret
K: shut up. I'm not done talking
G: order order… your not allowed to talk like this here
K: listen sir, if I don't talk like this they will never let me explain my self but they will put all the blame on me like last time.
G: what do u have to say
K: look, today I went to my lunch and I was eating when I heard a girl scream. That bas** man was trying to rape her. And I saved her. that's a good thing right
G: yes. But y did u beat him up
K: that bas***
G: no bad language
K: ok sorry sir…..I went to him and asked him y is he doing this to her and he tried to rape me. I didn't know what to do , so I picked up a stick and him with it.
The lawyer got up
L: that's not true.. I would like to call that police officer here your honor
G: ok bring him in
The man came there his head, hand bandaged. He stood at witness box
L: Mr. Kilash is it true that u tried to rape that girl at jail and then tried to rape Ms. Kripa to
Kilash: no sir, I was walking around when all of sudden she started hitting me
K: that's a lie, he is lying
L: there are some witness here that's says the same thing , Ms. Kripa did hit him for no reason
K: they are lying
G: order order.. Ms. Kripa do u have any prove that your right and he is wrong.
K: (thinks than get an idea)oh yea then ask him what was he doing in ladies jail. No man is allowed there.
Ki: I..I..
The time bell ring and its was 12
G: the court will continue after 15 mints of break.
They all leave out said but kripa runs to the judge.
K: wait I have to talk to u
Some police holds form her hand tries to stop her
G: what is it
K: I have a request can u do it plez, after this u will see the man is really guilty
G: what is it?
Kripa tell him something

After 15 mints

K: he hasn't answered my question yet
There was trouble going on in there and I got a call to go there.. I have some witness to
K: looks at judge
G: ok the witness come and if their witness becomes lie. They shall be hanged
The witnesses gets scared
They come to the witness box
W: (nerves)
L: tell them what is the truth
w: he is lying
Every one gets shocked
Kripa smiles
w: I don't want to die. He told us if we lie he will pay us but if someday our witness become lie I don't want to die
G: (shakes his head) im really disappointed on u guys that people who should protect our county are the ones…..
G: thanks to Ms. Kripa we give the right Justas
G: Mr. Kilash will be send to jail for 7 years and he shall be suspended

They take kripa back to jail

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Posted: 31 January 2006 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
Cry   Cry Aww thats so sad ...
plz cont soonClap
nottyangel Senior Member

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Posted: 31 January 2006 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
hey your story iz funny and sad too Cry
i realy lik it Big smile plz cont soooooooon Tongue Clap Clap that waz a fabulouse part Clap Clap

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Posted: 31 January 2006 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
wow love your story but where is anagd Cry pls cont soon LOL
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Posted: 31 January 2006 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
anagd will come soon LOL not yet
sorry u guys Smile Cry
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Kripa was sleeping when the door opened and a girl fall in. they closed the door back
L: this is were u will stay after now on
They left
The girl sat on the corner and start crying
Kripa gets annoyed form her crying
K: (gets up ) listen u don't need to west your tears no one will hear u or help u so y don't u stop crying or if u cant just shut up and cry low so I could sleep.
Kirpa felt bad for being rude but that's how she has to be to do something, no one there was nice so why would shebe thought kripa
In the morning they all woke up. Kirpa saw her still in the corner sleeping hugging her knees and shivering form being cold. Kripa went to her and put her blanket on her and went back to her side. After few mints latter she woke up and saw blanket on her, she knew that kripa give her the blanket becz they were the only ones in the cell. She went to her and stood in front of her. Kripa had her head on her knees. She looked up.
Girl: (handing to her, her blanket) thanks
K: keep it u will be cold again
G: how about u, wont u be cold to
K: nahe im ok I will figure out another way.
G: my name is Priya
K: nice name, im kripa
K: y u standing , sit down
P: thanks ( she sites next to her)
K: your new here
P: (shaking her head) yes
P: people in her are really mean
K: (laughed ) u bet
K: u will get use to it
P: how long have u been here
K: don't really remember ( scratching her head) will um.. I think about 3 weeks
P: oh .. may I ask y ur here
K: (looks at her) for murdering my friend (she laughs)
P: (gets little scared)
K: (laughs more) I knew u would get scared hearing this, don't worry. Im not a murderer
P: but u just said u killed ur friend
K: in front of the world I am a killer but in front of god im not
P: (confused)
K: (tells her about her self)
P: that's really sad
K: laughs
P: y are u laughing is there something funny
K: see I don't cry now becz it wont make any different so y not make my self happy by laughing
K: so y are u here
P: my story is similar to urs. My parents passed away when I was small. My uncle and aunt brought me up. When I turned 16. They tried to seal me for some money. (Starts to cry) I loved them like my own parents and they…they took me some kind of place I didn't know. And all of sudden a man came and closed the door behind me. I tried to call for help but no one was there. I picked up a vise and hit it in his head. He fall there. So I run away form there. Police chased me and caught me and blamed me for murdering. But no one believed me when I said he is alive.
K: how do u know if he is alive
P: I saw him talking to my uncle by the court.
K; listen how many times should I tell u not to cry. Ok forget what ever happen
P: how could I forget that
K: I don't mean forget what ever happened with u but at least forget it until ur here. After u get out of jail than deal with it right now there is no use for this things.
The police lady comes
PL: it lunch time get up
They all leave to lunch.
Priya gets her lunch and was about to leave when a girl comes and takes her bread.
P: hey that's main
G: so
She was about to leave when kripa holds form her shoulder. And faces her
K: give her bread back
G: what if I don't
K: (smiles and hands her plat to priya) hold this plez, priya
kripa slaps hard the girl in the face and she falls down on the ground. Every one looks at her shocked
K: listen every one, will I make this clear
K: no one dears to bug her or me. If u wish to bug us than plez do it becz I need to practice on my punching skills.
K: so who is next , anyone else want to bug us
Everyone moves back to their work. They are really scared of her becz the way she hit the police and others.
The girl gets up
G: im sorry (hands priya her bread)
K: get lost
G: (she runs of)
P: thanks kripa
K: lets eat im really hungry
They site at were kripa always sites

4 years passes
Kripa and priya were great friend. No one in this 4 years dared to even come close to them or some girls would try to bug priya and when they see kripa they just run of. Kripa every day became more and more strong but out said she was looking innocent.
One day a new police women got a job at jail. She was really mean, she beat up girls for no reason.
Priya was cleaning the floor when her hand hit the bucket of water and all the water spilled at floor.
The new police lady came and saw that
PP: what the hell did u do, clean this mass faster
P: yes I am (she started cleaning but her hand hurts so she cleaned slow)

The lady got irritated
PP: clean faster
P: im trying
The police lady kicked her in the side and she fall
PP: I said hurry up
P: (crying) cant u see I am
PP: how dare u talk to me like that
She pulled from priyas hear and stood her up.
PP: I will teach u how to talk to me after now on
She started hitting priya with her danda around her back and shoulders. Priya screamed from pain.
Kripa was working out said cleaning when a girl came running to her.
G: kr…kripa..
K: first take ur breath than talk
G: The new police lady is hitting priya
K: what?
She run from there fast. She reached the room. As the lady raised her danda to hit priya again, kripa cought form her danda.
PP: how dare u stop me
K: y the hell are u hitting her
PP: its non of ur biasness
K: it is my business
PP: oh so ur her relative
K: yes (throw her hand away)
PP: she made a mass and she has to get the punishment it's a rule…if u don't want me to hit her than u should get the punishment instead
K: just don't u dare to touch her again
PP: As u wish …now bent down
K: what?
PP: u want to take her punishment or not
K: looks at priya and then to the police lady
K: yes I do
Kripa bents down on her knees. The lady walk around her and all of sudden she hits her from the back really hard. Kripa falls on the ground , she gets really mad and gets up to hit the lady back
PP: remember if u do anything back then she has to take the punishment twice harder. So just site there and let me hit u for about 5 mints and u shall not make any sound. Do u agree
K: (anger) some day u will pay for this really hard
PP: smiles and starts to hit her
Kripa gets really bad hurt but she doesn't make any sound. 5 mint passes
PP: (laughs) its been 5 mints . I hope u learned ur lesson
K: her face was in the ground and her back was bleeding.
K: I will sure remember this day
PP: pick her up and throw her back at her cell
Some other ladies comes and picks kripa up and takes her to her cell. Priya was about to go to her but the lady gives her another work and doesn't let her go to kirpa
After 5 hours later priya comes to the cell and sees kripa there laying . She goes near her
P: kripa
K: hi what's up ( acting like nothing happened)
P: ( cry's) im really really sorry u had do go thro this becz of me
K: forget it im ok now, u go ahead and rest , u know that ur sick so go and rest
P: how could u say that, ur worse than I am
K: You know me im fine I already bandaged my back and im feeling batter
P: were did u get the bandage from
K: u owned some lady in her she helped me
K: now go to sleep

Few months later

The next day the police lady come.
P: hey u kripa get up
K: what is it
P: there is the judge here who want to see u
K: to bad I don't want to see her or him
P: its he and so u batter get up
K: what if I don't
P: y u
Someone comes there
S: stop it, I will talk to her here
P: yes sir ( she leaves)
S: hi kripa
Kripa looks up and sees him
K: hi ur the one dude wait let me think.. Ummmm…. Oh yea the judge right
J: yes its me
K: what is it now
J: im here to tell u something
K: im listening
J: 4 years ago u helped us a lot in here
K: yea so
J: according to the rules we cut some of ur time that u should be in jail
K: what do u mean?
J: will since you helped us a lot we decided to instead of u going to jail for 10 years u will be here for 5 years
K: what? (shocked and happy)
J: yes and ur almost here now about 5 year, so u will be out in few days
Kripa looks at priya who was still sleeping.
K: can I ask u for one favor
J: sure what is it
K: u see her (pointing toward priya) I cant leave her alone in here, so can u see and tell me how along is she going to be here.
J: oh her I know her very will, yes she is here about few more months
K: can I get out of the jail the same day when she does
J: y is that?
K: now she is the only family I have I cant leave her here alone so I want to be with her until she gets released
J: (smiles) very will if that's what u wish , we own u a lot for this passed 4 years u helped law a lot and we are really thank full of u… and yes I know that u didn't do the murder
K: (looks at him)
J: yes I could tell that u didn't do the murderer of ur friend, there are allots of cases in here happend that first they stay in jail for long time then after they get released or get hanged we find out that they were innocent. And im sure something like that happen to u too.
K: after when I get out of here, I will find the real murder
J: ok very will, I have to go. And I will see u the day when you get released which is after 2 months
K: thank you
J: (smiles) god bless u my child(leaves)
K: (goes to priya)
K: get up lazy
P: common u wake me up every day like this
K: u have to get use to this now get up we have lots of work to do
P: my troth is really dry and we don't have water
K: wait here
K: (yells) hey get me some water here
The new police lady comes and sees her and smiles evilly
P: u want water don't u
K: yes
PP: will in here I make new rules and that is if u want to get something u have to pay for it my way
K: how long again
PP: how many glass of water do u want
K: one
PP: then one mint
K: finish it faster
Kripa gets in her knees and the lady starts to hit her again for about a mint
This is how she been since the new police has been hired
K: now give me my water
PP: don't u get tired of this, its been about 5 months and I beat u up every day, and all that is for this girl that u protect
K: just do job and I will do what I have to do

Two month passes by and it's the day when they both gets released

Hope u guys like it

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Posted: 01 February 2006 at 12:53am | IP Logged
awesome part
cont soon
dat idiot police
i hope kripa pays bac for wat shes done
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