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Aashna26

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 4:52pm | IP Logged
wow! so very real!!can imagint the whole seen as an eepisode update!! just wow!!! keep on updating!

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Nice one angel!!!
I really enjoyed reading this.
Thanks for the PM hun!!
Hope you write more gems like this!!
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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 8:42pm | IP Logged
Nahi Nahi Di!!Tongue Bodh khoobsurat tha!Day Dreaming

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Posted: 16 October 2011 at 3:20am | IP Logged
Originally posted by YPNHK_kiFANno.1

Originally posted by anodaksgfan

Originally posted by YPNHK_kiFANno.1

In no way is it silly! Especially for a first attempt amazing. You've got a really sweet Arnav and Khushi storyline running through it and even though you've got the CREEP in there, his descriptions, his actions are SPOT ON! I am so glad you took my advice and wrote. Arnav and Khushi moments are beautiful. I can totally imagine the caring, caring way he acts with her. I hope this happens now on Monday and the part where Arnav says, he is here and everything will be fine is so romantic and lovely! Keep it up girl! Wink So glad you wrote, it has helped pass the time right? LOL
 
thank u sooo soo much...Heart
i was sure that u would comment...Smile
was waiting to see whether u likd it or not??
bcoz i thought i should follow ur advice and pass time like this..and it surely helped...
thank u again..Hug

EmbarrassedHugNo problem yaar! Comment na karne ka toh saval hi nahi tha! Wink Mera abh dil kar raha hai tumhari lovely story par kar, khe ab mein bhi ek aur likhoon! LOL 
toh likho na..u write really welll...

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Posted: 16 October 2011 at 3:21am | IP Logged

@radhika27---thank u...

i kept the episode thing in mind and wrote it...
thank u for liking..


Edited by anodaksgfan - 16 October 2011 at 3:24am

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Originally posted by shilparoxx

Nahi Nahi Di!!Tongue Bodh khoobsurat tha!Day Dreaming
oh shilpa thank u sweets...

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Posted: 16 October 2011 at 3:25am | IP Logged
part  2

arnav went to the doctor...

the doctor was on his rounds..

doc-"oh hello mr.raizada"ap yaha kaise??"

arnav "i wanted to talk abt mr.gupta"..i want him to b given the best treatment..dont worry abt the money.."

the doc asked "is he related"?

arnav -"woh mai khushi se...(pause) .. dat is none of ur business..jitna kaha jae utna karo..."

arnav then got a call he said _excuse me" and left to talk on the side..

on the fone.."nahi kal subah ki saari meetings cancel kardo...mujhe koi parvah nahi ki loss kitna bhi ho..is waqt mere liye khushi se zada kuch important nahi hai..i mean uski family se.."

sashiji heard this as arnav was talking in front of the ICU door..(he gives a little smile)

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canteen

khushi thinking about babuji and crying...

arnav comes there.."chalo khushi tum kuch khalo..babuji thik hain..his health is improving.."

(anjali had send the tiffin from her house)

khushi sat there...arnav went close to her..opened the tiffin..and sat beside her and told her to eat..

she started welling up again..

arnav picked up one bite..and took it to khushis mouth and she like a child smiled in between her tears and ate it...

arnav felt really happy...

she asked him "did u eat anything?"arnav nodded no..

she said chalie ap bhi kha lijie.."

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anjali(on the fone)

ap kaha hain?

Shyam-mai kam se bahar hun rani sahiba..

anjali-woh toh ap hamesha hi rehte hain..apko pata bhi hai aj kya hua??khushi ji k babuji ko heart attack aya hai..hume unki boht fikr ho rahi hai"

shyam"rani sahiba sab thik ho jaega,apchinta kyun karti hain..waise bhi sale sahab hain na unke sath.."pause...(he realise his mistake..)

anjali-magar apko...

shyam-hello hello rani sahiba line me disturbance hai..hum apse bad me bat karte hain...

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next morning arnav took khushi to mandir after tellling her father about it...

---------mandir

arnav and khushi go there...

anjali is also there...(arnav and khushi dont see her but anjali does and is surprised to see her chote there)

khushi takes arnav to the same pigeon guy..and teels him that today she wants him to buy her pigeons for her dads health as the other day she did it for the little girl..

arna (shocked) wat the..??

khushi smiled like a little kid and bought all the pigeons..

and closed her eyes and started wishing foe her fathers health...

arnav gave a smile and for once closed his eyes wished for the same...

anjali saw this...and was extremely happy to see this change in her chote..

(if not these two other special people around them had starting realising their love..--->anjali and shashiji...

and our arnav and khushi without knowing the love they had for each other left the mandir ..

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Edited by anodaksgfan - 01 November 2011 at 11:43am

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Posted: 16 October 2011 at 3:51am | IP Logged
loved yr post .plz pm me  thnks

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