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Posted: 12 years ago
part  2

arnav went to the doctor...

the doctor was on his rounds..

doc-"oh hello mr.raizada"ap yaha kaise??"

arnav "i wanted to talk abt mr.gupta"..i want him to b given the best treatment..dont worry abt the money.."

the doc asked "is he related"?

arnav -"woh mai khushi se...(pause) .. dat is none of ur business..jitna kaha jae utna karo..."

arnav then got a call he said _excuse me" and left to talk on the side..

on the fone.."nahi kal subah ki saari meetings cancel kardo...mujhe koi parvah nahi ki loss kitna bhi ho..is waqt mere liye khushi se zada kuch important nahi hai..i mean uski family se.."

sashiji heard this as arnav was talking in front of the ICU door..(he gives a little smile)

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canteen

khushi thinking about babuji and crying...

arnav comes there.."chalo khushi tum kuch khalo..babuji thik hain..his health is improving.."

(anjali had send the tiffin from her house)

khushi sat there...arnav went close to her..opened the tiffin..and sat beside her and told her to eat..

she started welling up again..

arnav picked up one bite..and took it to khushis mouth and she like a child smiled in between her tears and ate it...

arnav felt really happy...

she asked him "did u eat anything?"arnav nodded no..

she said chalie ap bhi kha lijie.."

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anjali(on the fone)

ap kaha hain?

Shyam-mai kam se bahar hun rani sahiba..

anjali-woh toh ap hamesha hi rehte hain..apko pata bhi hai aj kya hua??khushi ji k babuji ko heart attack aya hai..hume unki boht fikr ho rahi hai"

shyam"rani sahiba sab thik ho jaega,apchinta kyun karti hain..waise bhi sale sahab hain na unke sath.."pause...(he realise his mistake..)

anjali-magar apko...

shyam-hello hello rani sahiba line me disturbance hai..hum apse bad me bat karte hain...

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next morning arnav took khushi to mandir after tellling her father about it...

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arnav and khushi go there...

anjali is also there...(arnav and khushi dont see her but anjali does and is surprised to see her chote there)

khushi takes arnav to the same pigeon guy..and teels him that today she wants him to buy her pigeons for her dads health as the other day she did it for the little girl..

arna (shocked) wat the..??

khushi smiled like a little kid and bought all the pigeons..

and closed her eyes and started wishing foe her fathers health...

arnav gave a smile and for once closed his eyes wished for the same...

anjali saw this...and was extremely happy to see this change in her chote..

(if not these two other special people around them had starting realising their love..--->anjali and shashiji...

and our arnav and khushi without knowing the love they had for each other left the mandir ..

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Edited by anodaksgfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved yr post .plz pm me  thnks
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow.. it was so good...
Loved it.. Keep Rocking Friend...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh wow man! Another wonderful installment to the story! πŸ˜ƒ So Shyamwa is up to his old tricks again 🀒 You've kept all the characters so perfectly in line with the drama, it's great πŸ˜‰ My most favourite part has to be the mandir and the pigeons!! I so so wish this part especially comes in the drama, it'll come full circle! Nice one! πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good one..
Keep writing sme more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: YPNHK_kiFANno.1

Oh wow man! Another wonderful installment to the story! πŸ˜ƒ So Shyamwa is up to his old tricks again 🀒 You've kept all the characters so perfectly in line with the drama, it's great πŸ˜‰ My most favourite part has to be the mandir and the pigeons!! I so so wish this part especially comes in the drama, it'll come full circle! Nice one! πŸ‘

even i love that pigeon wala part and so want to see it happening...
and thanks to u i did try my hand on writing this OS..
and as its my first um tryin to keep it as simple as possible..
πŸ€— 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Bindani

Good one..

Keep writing sme more

thanks a lot..
i am so happy u guys liked it..
and i will surely try to write more..will pm u too..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice os...
it was good...
i dont know why but i also wanted kushi's father to know about thier love in serial...
atleast it came true in ur os
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rocking OS!!!
i can't wait til the next part
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
wicked 2nd part. arnav is sooo cute!
xx