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ArHi-THe Beautiful hug...!!!!!!(updated part14)

anodaksgfan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 1:06am | IP Logged

guys im a rookie..pls bear with this amateurish attempt..

all guys have written it soo beautifully...

part 2 page 3..--
part 3 page 5..--
part 4 page 8..--
part 5 and 6 page 11..--
part 7 page 15..--
part 8 page 17..--
part 9 page 20..--
part 10 page 23..--
part 11 page 28..--
part 12 page 35...--
part 13 page 44..--
shashi ji in hospital..."shyam...khushii.."

the doctor comes in "pls let the patient take rest.."shyam is so relieved..

al the four ladies come out crying of the ICU...

after some time..shyam goes to buaji and khushis mother to go home and take rest and reassures the that he is there...after lot of persuasion they leave...

a smile on the creeps face..

then he goes in the ICU where payal and khushi are sitting next to their father and crying silently holding his hand..

shyam says" payal ji aur khushi ji ap dono ghar chale jaie...hum.."

payal interrupts.."shyam ji pls jab tak babuji bilkul thik nai ho jate hum yaha se nahi jaenge...

khushi looks at bauji again..she cannot control her emotions and runs out to sit on the bench..

-----------meanwhile in RM

arnav fighting with his emotions.."damn it...y did i behave like that wat is wrong with me..."

anjali comes to his room "chote tum aa gae...tumhe pata hai khushi k bauji ko heart attack aya hai..woh life care hospital me hai..are tumhe ye chot..??

arnav forgets everything..he takes his car keys and rushes to the hospital..

anjali.."chote magar suno toh..



khushi crying on the bench..suddenly feels his prescence...

on seeing him she runs towards him...and hugs him so tight..

arnav did not know how to react..whether to hug her back or not..he wanted to comfort her..stop the crying...but he went to his chain of thoughts again then was interrupted by khushis crying and hiccups...she said.."arnav ji..babuji.. babuji..

arnav pushes her that he could see her face..

he cupped her face with both hands.."khushi khushi,,rona band karo..main hoo na..sab thik ho jaega..

tum chalo mere sath..."

he took her to the canteen and gave her a glass of water..and asked her "did u eat something..??

khushi nodded no as a her mouth was filled with water and eyes with tears..

arnav(closes his eyes) FB 1-khushi feeding him jalebis

FB 2-khushi helpng anjali with the brace thingy..

FB 3-khushi dancin on the bed and enjoying..

FB 4-the hug..

he opened his eyes...(a small tear came down his eye..)

he wanted her own khushi backk..the smiling and the laughing one...

every litl tear of hers was like a needle piercing his heart..

he still did not know the reason...

he told khushi to sit there as he wanted to meet the doc..


shyam asks payal about khushi..

payal says that she doesnot know..

shyam goes out looking for hr and sees arnav cumin from the other side.."ye saale sahab yaha kya kar rae...??"

arnav who is lost in his thoughts does not see him..the crep escapes yet again...



a litl smile appeared on khushi face on thinkin how arnav comforted her when she needed him the most "ywe arnav ji itne bure bhi nahi hain"

the smile vanishes when she thinks about her father...

"hey devi maiiya,hamare babuji ko jaldi se accha kar dijie..."

pls guys.. do comment..

i know it is really silly..but my first attempt..

Edited by anodaksgfan - 04 December 2011 at 2:14pm

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SK_Love IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 8:10am | IP Logged
its really awesome dear

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anodaksgfan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kamalika..

its really awesome dear
thank u sooo much dear...
i was so disheartened that noone commented..
was just about to write it...
but u did..
thank u so muchhhHeart

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.Saraa. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 8:32am | IP Logged
its goood to kill time..liked it.

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shybabe IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 9:15am | IP Logged
for the first attempt...its good dear. Don't get dejected if you don't get comments...u should appreciate it that people have liked it...keep writing and watch the response u get.Tongue

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moon_mine IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 10:51am | IP Logged
nice one!!!!
lovd it!!!!

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mandira1 Goldie

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 10:55am | IP Logged
nicely written
(if anyone would like to read this beautiful poem )

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-SilverAngel- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Good work!!Thumbs Up

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