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Posted: 14 October 2011 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
She buries herself within
his calm strength.
He closes his eyes.
Let me wash away your worry
Let me shield you
from the familiar loss
we share.
Let me be the ocean

to swallow all of your tears.


Absolutely brilliant!! Clap

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Posted: 14 October 2011 at 10:46pm | IP Logged
Hey momma!
Fantabulous post.
The word with that he can only bear her pains and tears now was so very true.
The poem was the best ever.
Love it!

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Posted: 14 October 2011 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
Let me wash away your worry
Let me shield you
from the familiar loss
we share.
Let me be the ocean
to swallow all of your tears.


Arnav is going to be her pillar of strength. They are like two sides of a coin. . well written postClap. waiting for Monday 

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Posted: 14 October 2011 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
very nicely written!!
fantastic job!

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 12:42am | IP Logged
@ Momma...A Fantabulous post with beautiful lines etched.
 
If we waited for the hug for 4 months...then I guess we have to wait for another 4 for the love to be confessed by either of them.
What a hug...hai...absolutely awesome ..free of inhibitions...to get some solace in those arms.
 
I would agree with @ poppy..it might be , Khushy is shocked that her marraige got arranged by Brainless bua...in the midst of her bauji's condition.She would be too confused and what better place to get some peace & comfort ..those arms.Which hurt her yet comfort her.
 
And yeah... after the marraige gets fixed ..Bauji goes into coma.And thats the time we would see Arnav's full realisation...followed by Shyam's revealation just before the marraige and then Arnav's impulsive decision to get married to Khushi.
 
Gautamji's part a total ROFL!!!!
 
 
Ash.
 

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Anu that poem is fabulously writtenClap  I 100% agree with you - 

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 1:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by momma1128


She rushes to him
an open wound 
on the run
towards her only
steady pillar

He lets her grasp
hold of his rooted
confidence
He will anchor her to his shore
He will keep her afloat
far from the abyss of despair

She buries herself within
his calm strength.
He closes his eyes.
Let me wash away your worry
Let me shield you
from the familiar loss
we share.
Let me be the ocean
to swallow all of your tears.

(Yes, I know, Arnav means ocean - it was intentional)

*Edit* - all of this holds true even if it's a dream - but if it is a dream, I am coming after you Gautamji - and don't go hiding behind any Gopi Vahu's paloo neither


Beautiful poem Anu. Simply sublime.
I am curious about the hug too and anxiously waiting for monday. Will he hug her back or control himself and push her away? Both Khushi and ASR refuse to acknowledge or even try to understand their feelings for each other.
Their relationship has come a long way for Khushi to feel comfortable enough with ASR to go running into his arms for solace and support.
The beast - Shyam just grossed me out yesterday and today. How long will he keep getting away without being caught?

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 2:37am | IP Logged
That was CLASSStar
 
 
and the analogy to the ocean..brilliant..Clap
 
 
He lets her grasp
hold of his rooted
confidence
He will anchor her to his shore
He will keep her afloat
far from the abyss of despair

She buries herself within
his calm strength.
He closes his eyes.
Let me wash away your worry
Let me shield you
from the familiar loss
we share.
Let me be the ocean
to swallow all of your tears.
 
 
@ bold..LOVED the analogy of him being the vast massive ocean who will absorb all her tears...Beautifully said..
 
As I said written from the heartClapClap..
 
The HUG is itself is a GIANT STEP (as going to the moon..the moon in question reaching the depths of Aranv Singh Raizada) ..for Khushi..a girl to fling herself on him..is an indication of her deep trust..her bond forged without any words..If he hugs her back it is as good a confession as any...
 
And also this hug will completely change the equation between them..I don't think they could go back to be where they were however hard either of them tries..too much WATER *pun intended* under the bridgeLOLLOL
 
 
ROFLROFL@ GOPI GAAWAR...that was  like moving from the ocean to the jellyfish...All Bubbles but no speech...ROFL
 
 
PS KEEP them coming ANU..you are au naturel..Big smile Make this a continuous thread..


Edited by current - 15 October 2011 at 2:41am

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