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Posted: 16 October 2011 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sandyuk

Please continue soon!
will do,thanks for your support!


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Originally posted by vaasanthi

Thumbs UpFANTASTICClap ....waiting 4 da continuationDay Dreaming
update it as soon as possible
Thankkk you very much!Smile


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Part 2:

It had been 3 weeks since Gopi left and MM was gloomy and sad,it felt like there was no happiness left.Kokila was upset and depressed,Hetal was sad and the men craved for Gopi's cooking,Raashi had improved,she was taking the responsibility of the work as Hetal and Kokila were depressed but the person most affected by all of this...Ahem.
Ahem was angry,cross,sad,he was confused,lost,why was he constantly thinking of Gopi?Why did her thought not leave his mind?,How was she?,Where is she?,Does she miss me?,these thoughts were tearing him up inside.He managed to supress his emotions by working overtime.He was working so much his phone was hot and it was on the verge of breaking.He needed a break..and he needed one now.
Ahem was in his car drivng past,his knuckles sqeezing the wheel and in anger,he banged his fists onto the wheel.
"Oh god!,i need to meet Gopi once,just once,i need to see how she is,arghhh why am i so restless to see her?!"
Ahem got out of the car when suddenly he heard a familar voice.
"Arreh,Chiku,you've become really badmaash,theek hai,here"..the pretty,young girl kissed the small boy on the cheek.Who was she?,she was opposite Ahem but she sounded...sounded like...Gopi?!
She looked back,she thought she heard her Ahemji,no it can't be!?
There was Gopi,in her purple sari (MODERN,LIKE RASHI WEARS IT) and her hair unpinned and there was Ahem,staring at Gopi with his mouth opened.Oh how he missed her.
Ahem smiled and Gopi's eye's gleamed,her smile was wide when suddenly she remembered Anita and her eye's went teary.
"Gopi..Gopi,i've missed you soo much"..Ahem whispered.
Gopi wanted to hug Ahem,she walked slowly towards him and he just smiled and held his arms out for her when suddenly..
"Gopiji,aap yahaan?,come we have work to do,we've been given an order for our sari's and we have to make 50,congratiolations,ever since you've joined our company,we have just been profiting,thank you god Smile" said a voice..


So how was it?!
I wonder if you guys can guess the mystery persons voiceWink
will be back soon on Friday to update!
Like's and comments welcomeSmile


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loved it very nice great begin

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Posted: 18 October 2011 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Great update!!!
 
Can't wait til Friday hope Gopi and Ahem get together soon!!

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Posted: 18 October 2011 at 1:13pm | IP Logged
Part 2  Awesome  Can't wait to read the next part~!

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Posted: 18 October 2011 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
Clap I'm not sure what the quotations in hindi mean, but I can get the gist of it. Really good story!

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very Nice lovely !!!!...Clap

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