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Recap: After sending Niharika n Trio to jail, Ram with Vkram was on his way back to Goa, to be with his wife Priya who is still hopspitalized recovering after being attacked. On reaching hospital, Ram-Vikram comes to know that Priya is on hunger strike (lol… not actual but is refusing to eat, drink and even no to medicines…) and reason was absence of Ram and is also very angry on ram…

Ch 28

Dadi come out and seeing Ram shouts: oyye golu kaha chala gaya tha priya puttar ko chhodkar… pata hai usne jidd kar li kii jab tak tu nahi aayega… vo na kuch nahi khayegi na kuch piyegi…

Shipra: haan ram beta dekhona… kal toh kisi tarah saline chhada ke sari medicine or glucose diya hai… par kab tak…

Ram; aap dono chinta mat kijiye mai aa gaya hu na… voh apni jidd chhod degi…

Dadi; golu Priya tujse bahut naraaz bhi hai…

(Dadi and shipra goes to sit)

Vikram: oohh shit… Ram ab kya karega…

Ram: smiles bataya toh tha tujhe…  and moves towards Priya's room

Vikram with a confused look also follows him to see vat his best frnd is upto… not without murmuring, mujhe bataya kab… and den looking upwards, aajkal yeh kehta hai aur kya karta hai iska pata toh shyaad aapko bhi nahi hoga… (and chuckles)

Priya's room

(Ram has just stepped in room followed by Vikram but stopped on gate to see the childish antics of his sweet wife…)

Priya has just changed into a new gown with help of Neha… then too she was completely drained out… but still refusing for juice offered by Neha…

Neha: Priya pls thoda sa pee lo… dekho Ram aata hi hoga… he cant stay away from you…

Priya: I know but cant he give me a call… or a message… u know neha I haven't seen him from 40hrs… (remember 24 hrs of ram's owe… and other 16hrs= he left her while she was unconscious and before leaving for Mumbai and now frm comng to goa) , aur woh hai kii…

Nahi kahungi jab tak voh khud nahi aate…

Neha: arre Priya pls maan jao na… fatty tumhari responsibility mujhe de kar gaya hai… plss achha chalo aisa karte hai tum kuch kha lo… phir hum dono mil kar fatty kii class lenge… (Priya nods in negative) arrey aise toh tumhari tabiyat aur kharab ho jayengi…

Priya: Hota hai ho jaye… kyaa hoga jyada se jyada marr jaungi…

Priyaaa…

Both Priya and Neha jolted with sudden booming voice… as soon as they recovered they were shocked to see Ram standing close to Priya with a raised hand… (as in was about to slap her) and in no seconds Priya's eyes was filled wit tears,,, which calmed Ram's anger in blink of eye…

Before Vikha could react, they see Ram sitting on bed near Priya… trying to ssshhh her… rubbing her tears… and Priya  still crying with tears flowing from her eyes… mumbling something… which was not less than alien lang to Vikha…

By now Ram has taken Priya in his hug… and was swaying to-fro soothing her with his words in her ears… caressing her hair with his fingers… but vat all vikha could hear was sorry coming out from ram's mouth

Neha who was tanding close to vikram: Darling yeh Priya kyu ro rehi hai… aur fatty sorry kyu bol raha… jaha tak maine dekha… fatty ne toh sirf haath uthaya tha… mara toh nahi… then …suddenly turning towards.. vikram.. ofcourse usne  maara tabhi toh Priya itna roh rehi… and now she holds him with collar… how dare fatty slap her… samjte kya ho tum log humhe… haann..

Vikram: darling Maine kya kiya… mujhe toh chhodo…

Neha: tum sab aise hi ho…

(at the same time… Ram-Priya)

Ram still hugging Priya close to his hearts, rubbing her back was able to calm her down and both of them were still hugging lost in each other bt was soon disturbed by almost choking voice of Vikram…

Neha: tum aise hi ho… bechari Priya dekho kaise ro rehi hai… vo dek… ho… her voice trail as they were shocked to see Ram-Priya still in each other embrace looking at Vikha with a smile on their face…         

 Neha's grip on vikram's collar got loose… they walked to priya's bed… Priya u okay na… and u fatty how dare u to slap her… and punched 1 on his shoulder…

Ram:ouch…

Priya was laughing… says Neha well I did cry but Ram didn't slapped me nor he could never…

Vikram: den those tears.!!!

Ram: arrey vo… vo toh isliye kii mai is pe gussa hua… isliye…

Vikram: aur sorry….

Ram: wo bhi isliye kii maine joe se chhilaya…

Vikha: oohhh humhe toh laga kii… anyways… chalo accha hai… Priya ab toh kuch kha lo…

Priya suddenly remembered that she was angry on ram for not coming… Priya broke the hug…

Ram: kya hua Priya…

Priya: Neha keh do inse mujhe inse baat nahi karni… agar inhe mujhse milne kii fursat nahi toh mere paas bhi nahi… mujhe bahut neend aa rehi hai…

 Samhajte kya hai… yaha mai kitna pareshan thi aur yeh ek phone bhi nahi kar sake… aur jaana hi that oh mujhe batake jate… mujhse milne ke baad chale jaate… mai kaha hi rok leti… ek note hi likh kar chhod dete mere paas…. Par nahi… kuch nahi kiya aisa… kuch bhi toh nahi k….

Her words were never completed as Ram suddenly has taken possession of her mouth by his mouth in a kiss… Priya tried to struggle, to break the kiss… but the warmth and pleasure of ram's closeness was making her thoughts foggy… and soon she lost all control and started responding to Ram…

(Vikha who were now standing with mouth wide open… couldn't believed vat ram has done… and soon they recovered and were embarrassed to death to see Priya-Ram lost in each other, kissing on hospital bed… and in seconds were out of room… Neha made sure to lock the room... once out they shared a look and soon broke into splits of laughter…  and were soon shutted by the nurse… with a stern look… )

Do let me know ur comments... good or bad... all are welcomed...



Edited by fan_forever - 17 June 2012 at 10:37am

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Wow! Wonderful update! Clap It was super-cute! Heart

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Posted: 17 June 2012 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Awww sp atlast his wish fulfilled ..WinkWink

the last part vik convo become true in this update haha
loved it .thank you

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(Vikha who were now standing with mouth wide open… couldn't believed vat ram has done… and soon they recovered and were embarrassed to death to see Priya-Ram lost in each other, kissing on hospital bed… and in seconds were out of room… Neha made sure to lock the room... once out they shared a look and soon broke into splits of laughter… and were soon shutted by the nurse… with a stern look… )

rofl...ROFLROFLParty...

i just couldnt stop laughing...ROFL...
vikha fight was awesome...poor things they had to witness raya romantic moment...lolROFL
great update kakul dear...thanku...


Edited by sss283 - 17 June 2012 at 11:18am

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that is so Big smile

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Posted: 17 June 2012 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
ohh wow yar it was awesome
par itna short kyu tha!!
fab... Awesome

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Posted: 17 June 2012 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
So lovely & awesome update...very cute & Romantic...

Loved VIKHA convo...funny & cute...
and Loved Ram's way of making Priya silent...embarasing moment for VIKHA..Big smile
you are an amazing writer...Clap Clap Clap




Thanks for the update & will be waiting for the next one eagerly...Big smile


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khullam khulla pyar karenge hum dono..wah wht a move by ramji bolne ka chance hi mat do ... pehle baju me bithne se bhi sharam aati thi aur ab ajubajju koi hai iska bhi dhyan nahi wow ..please update soon

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