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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by laduprav

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
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Part-1
 
The story begins from the yesterday's scene' when Ram and Ashwin came face 2 face to each other in office.
 
In the night, Ram sitting on bed working on laptop' suddenly he remembers Ashwin and thinks mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai kii mai usse pehle mila hu' and was thinking trying to remember and in this thought he goes to sleep with laptop on his lap'  Awww laptop ke saath hii golu so gaya how sweet!Embarrassed

then enters Priya with his milk' she comes close to him taps on his shoulder and hands him the milk. He takes the glass and places it on the side table and again starts working' She was still standing close to him' he notices it and says ab kya hua'.. she says aaj afternoon mai aapne mera phone disconnect kyu kiya Mr. Kapoor' he says heyy pls' mujhe bahut kaam hai' to abhi nahi'.

She frowns I can imagine Priya's reaction well!LOLand says vat do u mean by abhi nahi' he says mai jaanta hu jab tak tum mujhse jaghad nahi leti tumhe neend nahi aati par aaj nahi' she says Mr. Kapoor aap kaam hi aisa kyu karte hai kii mai aapse jagadu' he gets up' directs her with a finger saying 1 minute' and goes to her dressing table' takes the cotton and puts it in his ears and comes to her and makes an expression with his hands saying ab tum bol sakti ho'

She makes a expression of Aww.. (how dare you) comes close to him closes the laptop and takes it with her' now he makes the same expression' he says yeh kya hai' priya says no more work its already late now' so pls sleep or else u'll end up taking 3-4 pills' which I don't want'

Ram: priya don't behave a wife lyk Parvati bhabhi and give me my laptop back' she says no' and turns to her wardrobe keeps the Laptop and locks it' he sees these and gives a look'. She in turn also gives a sturdy look' LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLNice one priya!

this tym Ram thought no use' aaj toh yeh maan ne wali nahi hai' so takes the pills bottle and was abt to have it'. Priya comes and stands near him folding her hands' he looks at her' then puts all the pills back and hands the bottle to her' and starts having milk' she smiles'. He tastes the milk and says yukk isme sugar nahi hai' she says haan' he says tumhe pata hai toh'. She replies aaj doctor kii report aayi hai' as per which ur sugar level is high so'. And turns towards her couch'

He makes some ugly faces and says tumhe kya lagta hai tum nahi dogi toh mujhe sugar nahi milegi' he gets up and intercoms and asks for sugar' bansi kaka comes and says sorry sir sugar nahi milegi Priya mam ne na kiya hai' he says kya' aapki mam ne kaha hoga ab mai keh raha hu na leke aayiye' he looks at priya, Priya nodes in a negative sense'. So bansi kaka replies Ram sir dadi ne kaha hai kii aab se priya mam jo kehegi vo hi hoga toh'. Ram gives a angry look to her' bansi kaka leaves'.Daadi ke messenger Bansi kaka u rock!ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap

Priya says kya kaha tha'.mai nahi toh'.. with a smile that express her triumph'

Ram interrupts and says haan haan thik hai thik hai' ab shaadi ke after effects bhi toh jhelne hi padege' par thik hai' jab tumhe jhel sakta hu toh' ek toh'.. and drinks the milk in one sip and both goes to sleep'

Priya on couch and ram on his bed' Priya informs him that Dadi has told her to tell you to call all ur frnds with their wife for Karwa Chauth function day after 2mrw' he says okay' she says maine VikHa ko inform kar diya hai'

He says okay' Priya tum bhi tumahre frnds ko bula lo' I'll also meet them' she says no' he says y'. before she could say' he says yaa I know' u r afraid they'll tell me ur secrets' she says nothing lyk that' she don't have any secrets' he says joke apart' I remember u were missing your best frnd in our marriage' she surprised nd asks how u' he says I overheard u and Ayesha talks' she says yaa' he says then call her for this function I'll also meet her' she thinks Shruti toh thik hai par Ashwin!!! So she says no'..

Ram: Okay ur wish'. and takes a turn wishing her gud nite'. After some time he woke up and says yes'. That guy in Office was the one to whom I met near lift' yes' Priya's frnd Ashwin'

Here even she wasn't able to sleep' and that incident again shattered her completely'

Next Morning

Priya reminds Ram for inviting his frnds'

Ram: Priya ur' he suddenly stops' as he remembers the lift incident and the teary eyes of Priya' and says to himself' nahi us din bhi Priya ka mood kuch Off tha aur priya ne us din jis tone mai Ashwin se baat kii' as far as I know her' she don't talk to anyone in that tone except me' (and smiles a bit) no specially to a friend no-way' I'm sure there was some issue b/w them' and yes ashwin didn't even came to our marriage nor to our reception'

Priya: Mr. Kapoor aap kuch keh rehe the' he don't responds as he was lost in his own thought' Priya again calls him Mr.Kapoor' he says haan' she says aap thik hai na' he says haan kyu' she says no' you just stopped while saying something'.

Ram: now tries to cover up' and says nothing'

Priya : vat do u mean by nothing' u said u want to say something to me'

Ram: mai bhul gaya

Priya: Smirks and says dekha isliye mai keh rehi thi sab pills chhodke sirf yadaast ki pill liya kijiye' and leaves.LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLThat is sooo like priya!Clap

Ram still thinking kuch toh hua tha' us din Priya aur Ashwin ke bich mai' uski condition dekh ke toh aisa lag raha tha kii vo bahut gusse mai thi' aur kal Ashwin ne bhi jab mujhe dekha toh ek dum darr gaya tha' par kyu' then suddenly he says mujhe kya karna hogi koi baat Priya jaane why I'm bothering' and starts reading newspaper but again he says nahi' par aisi kya baat thi' kyunki Priya toh itni jaldi roti nahi aur nahi usse itna gusse mai kabhi dekha'  definitely Ashwin se hi'!!!

kya karu priya se pucchu kya!!! but on second thought says nahi' As far as I know Priya woh toh kuch bolegi nahi aur Ram tujhe batayegi bhi kyu'???

He calls his manager and asks about the Ashwin' the manager says sir he was working in a some XYZ firm and yesterday only he joint us' ram says okay now he thinks' if he was joining our firm y didn't priya told me' may be she don't knew abt it' but y didn't Ashwin talk to me yesterday' I saw a kind of fear in his eyes yesterday' and gets up and saying hmm something is wrong' and I'll have to find it out' that what was bothering Priya that day' I'll try to figure it out from Ashwin' haan yehi thik hoga'Wah wah well said golu jiiWink

Very nice update! Plzzz add me to pm list!Tongue
ohh my god... u almost pasted my whole update... and just loved the highlighted part... thnks for liking my work... will surely pm u...
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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shaaranya

Very nice!! Hope ram supports priya!!
Update soon and add me to your PM list
thanks a lot shaaranya...
next update coming soon... will surely PM u...

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by M_n_h

Gr8 update w8ing for the next part thanks
hey thanks... gr8 u like my work...

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by haribol79

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shamma92

Great start! Waiting for the next part! Smile
thanks shamma...
ur wait over dear...
here comes the next part

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged

Part-2  "Ram confronts Ashwin"

Ram: calls his manager and enquires abt Ashwin

Manager: he joint us yesterday, previously he was working with XYZ.

Ram: ends the call and thinks if he was going to join us y didn't Priya told me… may be she wasn't aware of it… but y didn't Ashwin talk to me yesterday… I also saw a kind of fear in his eyes yesterday… and gets up

Ram to himself: hmm something is wrong… and I'll have to find it out… that what was bothering Priya that day… I'll try to figure it out from Ashwin… haan yehi thi hoga…

Priya comes with his break-fast… as he was in hurry he says he don't want to…

Priya: with a edgy look comes close to him, places her hand on his forehead

Ram: kya kar rehi ho…

Priya: dekh rehi hu… kahi aapki tabiyat toh kharab nahi… he says kyu…

Priya: nahi vo aap Mr. Kapoor aur khane ke liye na… and smirks…

Ram: ha ha ha very funny…

Priya: anyways thoda sa hi kha lijiye… maine tok diya hai aur aise ghar se jaana nahi chahiye…

Ram: Priya tum aur tumhare yeh concepts… tok diya hai to matt jayo… jakar aata huu… and all…

Priya gives a stern look…  

Ram: okay okay… and they had breakfast…

Office

Ram enters the office… all staff wishes him gud mrng… Ashwin too… Ram takes a hault to look at Ashwin's reaction…

Ashwin: sweating seeing Ram looking at him…

Ram: saw his changing gestures but suddenly moves towards him…

Ashwin: getting bit conscious (as if he was afraid of him)

Ram: intentionally raises his hands and brings it near his cheeks…

Ashwin: closes his eyes

Ram saw his each gesture keenly… suddenly takes a file from the cabinet that was behind Ashwin…

Ashwin: opens his eyes…

They both a share a look… Ram left after giving a fake smile… As soon as Ram left Ashwin took a sigh of relief… Ram saw his shrug… and moves to his cabin….

Ram: hmm… mai sehi tha… kuch toh baat hai… Ashwin mujhe dekh kar hi ghabhara jata hai… aaj bhi, kal bhi aur us din bhi… par kyu…

Ram called his secretary and says no phone calls and no disturbance for next 2-3 hours….

Ram sat on his chair and kept on thinking… par kyu… why Ashwin starts behaving oddly whenever Ram is around him… and saw Ashwin from his window…

After some time… kahi aisa to nahi kii Priya aur Ashwin ke bich koi baat hui… Ashwin ne kuch galti kii aur usse laga kii Priya ne mujhe… par galti!!! Hmm ho sakta hai us din Priya ka gussa dekh kar toh yeh hi lag raha tha…

So now he determinedly sat on his chair and picks the intercom to call Ashwin and confront him directly…

But suddenly hang the receiver again and says nahi… agar aisa kuch hai toh… agar maine Ashwin se kuch pucha toh he'll understand that Priya hasn't told me… and he may… so stops himself…

After some time he calls some one...

Ram: mai Ram bol raha hu… Can we meet today its urgent… and yes Pls dont tell anyone… and nobody should come to know about this…

Ends the call… and says hmm ab mujhe sab pata chal jayega… and left the office to meet that person…

to be continued...

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Great update dear!!
Hope the person ram is speaking to is someone from priya's family!!
Plzzz next update ASAP

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