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loved the second part.. 

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Originally posted by prinky02

loved the second part.. 
3rd coming soon 

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Naddiya, that is awesome...pls continue and add me to ur PM list




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part 2 at 2

Arnav: shouted Call Dr  he just look at payal  to go out as he him self dont want to leave his hand,and Khushi side   . as he felt a strange kind of warm in babuji hands ,he just dont want that feel ends so quickly..

Payal ran out  and DR arrive  he ask everyone to leave as he was pumping him ,

Khushi : i will not go 

Arnav: just placed his hand on her shoulder "come with me" he just took her all weight on him and warp his arm around her waist..

(all in English as a read asked me )

buaji: where is this shyam? he should be here . as she was not at all  liking Arnav presence.

Arnav: ask Anjali to take care of Khushi . he walk to the Dr . LA and Akash reached hospital ...

Shyam: who was out side the hospital waiting for Arnav to leave. he received buaji call" where are you ?" she just shouted ."i am arranging money  can i talk to Khushi ji" buaji walk to Khushi and gave her phone 

Khushi: kon

Buaji: shyam babwa ...

Anjali just look at her 

Khushi: hello 

Shyam: please you dont worry for money i am arranging ..

Khushi: look at Arnav who was standing and talking to Akash and his eyes was on her "Arnav is here " she just cut the call as she thought her few words explain that she will not be in need of money now..everyone look at her as she took his name.

LA: chamkli 

Khushi: just hug her and cry..

Arnav: Lavanya  stop making her cry she is weak ..he just separate them

LA: look at him .. she was bit surprise at his reaction 

DR : came out .Khushi and Payal walk to him "i am sorry "

Khushi :just fainted before she collapse a strong arm grab her...and picked her up in his arms 

Payal started crying  hugging her amma.

Buaji: shashi babwa hum ko chor kar chal gai...

DR: just walk to Arnav  who was making khushi lay on the sofa .. "i want to talk to you"

Arnav: was just patting her cheek "yes i am hearing "

DR: some one mess up with his oxygen cylinder, and it is a murder case  

Arnav: what . he just took water from Akash hand 

DR you come with me please ,we have to call the police first 

Arnav: please check her first 

DR: she is in shock she will be fine soon  he just ask nurse to shift her in a room 

Akash : Dr i will come with you as he saw Arnav was not in a mood to leave Khushi side...

Arnav: Khushi  please open your eyes ... 

Anjali: she is in shocked chota 

Arnav: di iss ko bolo aankhe khula...

Anjali: chota 

Arnav:just  dont want any one around he just want to hug Khushi and cry ... 

Anjali: chota kya hogaya ha aap ko

Arnav: just didnot answer he just walk restless in room.

Anjali; chota hum na aap se aik baat kahni ha 

Arnav: kay

Anjali: i just remember i saw khushi father few days back with your jeju 

Arnav: di please .he just sat next to her bed and cup her face in his hands 

Anjali: ok hum aap se baad mein baat karta ha ... 

buaji:enter " what do you think of your self ? you have asked police "

Arnav: shhh aram se 

Buaji: kya arama se , you think we have murder him

Arnav: i didnot said that Dr asked  me i just gave permission

Buaji: who are you ?

Arnav: khushi's 

Buaji: shouted take your khushi and get out of here . i dont want to see her face, because of her my brother died... payal and amma was trying to stop her but she didnot listen 

Arnav just felt really bad he got hyper ,he just picked up her and walk out 

Anjali: kya huwa chota ..walk to him 

Arnav: akash chalo . he just walk out straight to his car .place khushi care fully on front seat and drive his car out of the hospital

Anjali : chota 

LA: Di yeh kya kar raha ha (what he is up to)

Anjali: hum ko nahi maloom you do as he says...

Akash: di kya huwa 

Payal buaji shouted at him and ask him to take khushi away. she started crying 

Anjali: i will see

amma: beta keep her with you i know buaji she is very angry right now she will just blame her ..

Anjali: dont you worry she will stay in our home.. 

amma: i lost a husband and a daughter today 

Anjali: your daughter is in safe hand dont you worry for her... they saw police coming out of the ICU and buaji again shouting

Payal: i think you guys should go or buaji will again take out her anger..

Akash; if you need help

Payal: hum call karlaga...

Akash walk out with Anjali an LA

Arnav reached home he just pick up Khushi and walk straight to his room.

Mami ji :yeh phati saari ko kya huwa ha

Nani chota khushi betiya 

Arnav: iss ka babuji kai death hogai ha   ... he just made her lay on his bed ...he just look at nani and mami ji "please ab aap log koi drama na kara please,let us live  "he just slam door .

comment quickly so i add more part 

Edited by naddiya26 - 15 October 2011 at 5:24am

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Hey naddie...I feel very lucky to have read Yesterday Gone, and that's why am blessed with more updates!Embarrassed
I am spellbound by your display of emotions and scenes, the way she collapsed and he held her safely, am just speechless!Star
Great job honey!Clap

Edited by -Murphy369- - 17 October 2011 at 9:46am




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WOW...loved the update a lot dear!!! Day Dreaming
thanks for the PM!!!TongueBig smile

eagerly waiting for next update!!Wink

Edited by RiyaDutta - 15 October 2011 at 5:30am

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oh it was nice dearSmile

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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 5:37am | IP Logged update...loved it...superb work...keep it up..!!
update soon

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