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Posted: 14 October 2011 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Oh wow !!
This was mind blowing. Watta idea man. 
Loved it sooo much ! Wish you would continue this. Wonderful

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Posted: 14 October 2011 at 2:28am | IP Logged
gr8 job yaar...superbly written

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Posted: 14 October 2011 at 2:33am | IP Logged
wowClap Do continue

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Posted: 14 October 2011 at 2:40am | IP Logged
aww...itz a lovely OS.. Very nice..

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Posted: 14 October 2011 at 2:41am | IP Logged
oye hoye nayikaWink
i am flooredEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
i was imagining the last sceneDay DreamingDay Dreaming n i was like hayyeeeEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
never stop at one jalebiDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming
who can resist arnav huh..Wink
great job hunClapClap
loved it to the coreEmbarrassed
keep it upStar

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Posted: 14 October 2011 at 2:51am | IP Logged
I was about to go to sleep and only decided to read this when I read jalebi since there is a thunderstorm outside and I am craving some hot jalebis with milk during this weather.

I must say from what I have read, you are a good writer and I loved the light-hearted comedy of this story instead of make pregnancy something serious. I also liked how you kept the essence of the characters from the show and how even in the future they still retained some parts of their current personalities; like Khushi was still the same and Arnav though changed still kept some aspects of his personality like not being a religious man and still thought about his past. A job well done!

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Posted: 14 October 2011 at 2:59am | IP Logged
Superb
Thanks.

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