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Wow mahi I just found out that ure name was Malika u taught it was mahi :P oh hahah lol loved the starting please continue and pm me(:

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CHAPTER- 1


   Nidhi & hr 4rnds filled more colour in mehndi functn by deir dancng skills. da place echoed wid laughter whn nidhi actd as shy bride in hr jeans & pink top. for act shrya fixd red chunri on nidhi & smild on hr naughty sister.

dadi loudly: dhyan se , mehndi khrab ho jay gi.

ye galyaan ye chubara
yahan aana naa dubara

ye galyaan ye chubara
yahan aana naa dubara

hm to chle pardes . .k tera yahan koi nhi
tera yahan koi nhi

mr. verma voice stopd hr dance: nidhi beta , guest aa gaen hen . tum ne parkng check kr li thi. nidhi hit hr head: g papa.
she immediatly ran to back stairs , suddenly hit wid rock chest & lost hr balance. she closd hr eyes in fear bt soon she felt strong, protectv arms instead of hard floor. she opnd hr eyes slowly & lost in hs deep eyes whch were too starng her. relzng hr wet mehndi on hs shirt , he pushd hr away.
nidhi sadly lukd hr mess mehndi.
he angrly: mera suit khrab kr dya ? r u blind ?
she angrly: agr yahi sawal men aap se puchun ?
hearng fightng noises deir father tk back steps to door. mr.verma: nidhi. .ye ashutosh hen , newyork se.
nidhi: to ? bt stopd realzng she wasnt fightng wid anyothr bt hr soon te be jiju .
mr.verma cntnus: ye meri choti beti hai, nidhi.
nidhi gv hm a slowl smile, bt ignorng hr , he lukd away.
ashu: baba mujhe chnge krna hai.
mr.verma interuptd: aap aaey men aap ko guest room dekha deta hun.
baba wsper to ashu: calm down.
nidhi mumrd: karwa krela.
he gv hr a angry luk. instead of lukng away she too gv hm a angry glare. mr.verma coughd: aaey.
he followd dm quietly.
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pandit: pheron ka muhrt hogya hai , aap kanya ko le aai.
nidhi & dadi happily went to shreya room bt deir smild vanshd whn dy found da room empty. deir doubt turnd into belive whn dy found 'rajeev (hr x hushbnd) no. in rcvd & daild call'
dadi worridly: shreya ne phir bewakufi ki ?
nidhi fall on bed in shockd: hr sistr again ran away?
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aftr 4 hours, shreya was cryng badly huggng hr bride sister. happines atmosphere had chngd into sorrow & griefs.
shreya: men to rajeev ko sirf ye kehne gai thi k hmare bech men ab sb khtam hogya hai, men jo bhi krungi apne papa ki khushi k lye krungi . wapsi pr aate hue mera chota sa accdnt hogya , hosh aate hi men wapis aagai. . . .aur aap sb ne ye kya krdya.
she shook dadi: aap ne bhi nhi roka ? aap ne meri jga nidhi ki shadi kradi ? us ki zndgi barbad krdi ? aap aesa kese kr skte hen ?
mr.verma: tum hoti kon ho ye sb puchne wali ? tumhe jo krna tha , tum ne kya . ab hmare matters men intrfare krne ki koi zrurt nhi hai.
shreya got up wipng hr tears: men aap ki jhutti izzat , rasm o rivaj k lye apni 18 saal ki behn ko ek 3 saal k aadmi ki biwi bn kr newyork nhi jane dungi. hm nhi , aap hmari life men intrfare na kren.
mr.verma quitely lukd at dere 'baggi' faces : ab smjh men aaya , beti k paida hone pr log rote kyun hai.
nidhi lukd up teary eyes. da pain , disapntmnt , embarsmnt on hr fathr face stabd hr heart.
he quietly went upstair , closd da door.
nidhi got up & went upstairs heavy steps.
shreya shoutd: ruk ja nidhi . . .emotns men aa kr apni zndgi khrab mt kr. . .
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aftr 2 days , in newyork ,baba: aao andr aao beta. .ramu kaka saman le aao.
she entrd inside da bunglow , its interior & exterior designs wr proof of hs perfctn. barng weight of hr jewlry she sat on a cmfrtble couch.
kaka: men ne unhe phone kr k bta dya hai, aap aagaey.
suddnly she jumpd in horror as da ball hit her. little boy ,age of 3 ran to hr & wrapd hs arms around hr legs : maa. .help me. .giggles. .wo aunty mute tng kal li hen.
she lukd hm shockd. baba pulld hm away: raj apne room men ja kr khelo.
he huggd hr again : men maa k shat kelu ga. .
she pushd hm in horror: men tumhari maa nhi hun.
raj innocntly: aap mele papa ki wife ho. .to meli maa hui naa !
realzng hs wrds , hr head shook & she faintd.
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she opnd hr eyes, found hrself on huge bed. she instantly sit up & lukd around da grand room , whch was empty . bcoz of da extreme silence dere she cud heard da loud cnvrstn in nxt room.
baba: beta meri bat smjhne ki koshish kro .
ashu: kya smjhun ? pehle aap ne mujhe apne lye , raj k lye emtnaly blackmail kya, shadi k lye force kya. aur us din mandp men bhi men aap ki wja se chup rha . aur ab , its enough. aap us larki ko sath kyun laye hen?
baba: ab wo larki , is ghar ki malkn , meri bahu , raj ki maa aur tumhari patni hai.
ashu unblvly shook hs head: majburi kbhi rishte nhi bnte . rishte thopne se pehle aap us ki umer ka to khyal kren . aap ne meri hi nhi, us ki zndgi bhi barbad krdi.
nidhi huggd hr knees & brust into tears. .hr each sob cursng hr cruel fate.
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nxt night , ashu came 4rm office , tk out hs coat.
baba signald 2 kaka. kaka: khana lga dun.
baba: nhi mujhe bhook nhi hai.
ashu shook hs head on hs old technique.
kaka: dulhan ne bhi kal se kuch nhi khaya hai. . .he lukd to ashu: aap k lye khana lga dun ?
ashu noded in yes & went upstair. he knockd at da half opnd door of hs bedroom , bt ddnt gt any response.
hs eyes open wide in fear: wht , if she had did smthng ?
he rush inside , hs room bcm a mess , nt a thng on place. hs lukd 4 her , atlast hs eyes fall on her. huggng hr knees ,she was cryng in da corner of room. notcng hm she quickly got up , hr wet face , massve hairs , red eyes tellng hr pathetc story.
he lowrd hs eyes: dekho. .
she startd cryng loudly.
he wntd to ran away 4rm dis awkwrd situatn: jo kuch bhi hua. .
hr cried volume raisd more.
he frustatd yelld at her: nidhi ! !
she instantly pausd in horror. he felt guilty lukng hr big innocent eyes.
ashu: jo kuch bhi hua galt hua. .nhi hona chahey tha...pr hm ise bdal to nhi skte. . .he lukd at her: tum smjh rhi ho naa ?
she was starng hm quietly.
ashu : men yeh nhi keh rha jo ho rha hai hone do. . . .lekn rone se kuch bdal to nhi skta .
he again lukd at her bt got no response.
he sat on bed exhaustd: tumhe india wapis jana hai ?
she quickly nodded in yes.
ashu: men tumhe india waps chor aaunga lekn abhi nhi. . .abhi jana tumhari life ko aur bhi mushkl bna dega. . .he lukd hr innocent face , tum nhi smjho gi. . tum hr rishte se azad ho . . .tumhari life ab bhi wese hi jese pehle thi. . .men is shadi ko nhi manta. . .lekn jb tk tum yahan , apne dad se dur ho , tum meri respnsblty ho. . .sirf ek mehman ki trhan. . apni life ki , apne faislon ki khud malik ho . . . . is lye tum ye rona bnd kr k khana khalo. .men ramu kaka ko bejh kr yahan ki sfai kra deta hun. .
he got up & went to door bt stopd hearng hr sweet voice.
nidhi: aap mujhe mere papa k pass wapis chor aayenge ?
he turnd & lukd in hr innocent eyes : haan .
he turnd back,
nidhi: promise ?
he again turnd to her :hun. .promise.
she innocntly wipd hr tears: god promise ?
he sigh: god promise . he turnd bt stopd : admisns ki date hai. .apne certifct de do. . .farig reh kr tumhara dimag aur bhi khrab ho jayga. . .
he left , closng da door at hr hopefull face.

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Posted: 18 October 2011 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Wah Mahi, what a start
 
hmmm, the storyline is tooo good
 
nidhi bumping on ashu, shreya missing during the pheres, nidhi taking shreya's place to keep up the family honour - everything has turned out very well
 
haha, u have brought in RAJ - I luv raj mahi
but raj would have been an utter shock for nidhi - at the age of 18, she has been given the responsibility of a mother of a 3 year old - pity her
 
where is ashu planning to get aru admitted - i mean is he planning to make her study further
 
keep going mahi - will wait for ur next update
 
CONGO ONCE AGAIN ON UR NEW FF
 
 


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Loved the update Mahi but im missing my Arjun in all of this Ouch

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