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Just friendship or is it love (RTMC ff) (Page 8)

Nandini25 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 November 2011 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shona_rtfan

awesum update di

thanx sooo much shona

Nandini25 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 November 2011 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shruja

sorry for late comment
beautiful update
loved prince n how pari wok him
but he spoiled her mood
waiting for next update

no worries 
its absolutely fi9 Wink
thanx sooo much
will b updating now
Nandini25 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 November 2011 at 11:59pm | IP Logged

Veer muttered under his breath: "Mar gaya yaar. Yeh toh naaraz ho gayi. Beta veer tu toh aaj gaya kamse. Juban pe break nehi laga sakta kya? humesha anabshanab bakna jaruri hain. Chalo pehle car ke andar jaata hoon. Gusse ka intensity kitna hain napna  parega."

He timidly got into the car in the driver's seat and found that Ananya was looking right out side the window, facing the other side.

Veer (in his mind): "uh oh damage control needed."

He gulped and then tried to start a conversation: "Pari.."

But he was cut in between by an angry Ananya: "Veer chalo humein der ho rahi hain."

Veer gulped again and thought: "Oh no isne mujhe veer kaha, prince nehi. Matlab kaafi gussa hain yaar. Jab serious ho jaati hain ya gussa ho jaati hain tabhi veer bulati hain. Kuch soch Veer beta, jaldi soch. Isko jaldi mana. I just cant bear her anger."

Veer (in a kiddish voice): "chorry!" [sorry]

No answer

Veer tried again: "chorry!"

Again no answer

Veer: "cho chorry! [so sorry]

Once again no answer from Ananya's side. However this time Ananya silence met with a complete silence. Anaya frowned and then turned to face Veer, just to see why he was so quiet which was so uncharacteristic of him, only to witness a heartmelting sweet scene. Veer was sitting there quietly holding his ears with a cute, innocent puppy face. As she looked at him, he gestured through his eyes to her to look at the front desk of the car. As she turned to look at the front desk, her face split into a sweet, enchanting smile as her gaze fall upon a box of her favourite chocolate. She again turned to look at veer who was looking at her with expectant eyes and the same puppy face, still holding his ears. She could never remain angry with him as he always knew what to do and how to pacify her and this day was no exception. Her soft smile slowly turned into a soft giggle and she lightly pulled veer's cheek and said in a kiddish voice: "Awe! Cho chweet!"

Veer sighed in relief: "Thank God."

Ananya giggled and grabbed the box of chocolates immediately. If Ananya pampered Veer limitlessly, Veer was no way lagging behind. He could just do anything for his best buddy.

Ananya remembered with a jolt that they were getting late and glanced at her watch: "oh no! Prince jaldi chalo yaar. We r getting late."

Veer chuckled: "Accha ji, toh ab khayal aaya ki hum late ho rahe hain. Tab nehi socha tha jab ruthke baithi thi. Tumko manane mein hi itna waqt gaya."

Ananya giggled: "Toh! Galti tumhari thi toh bhugatna bhi tumko hi parega na. Aur ab hum late nehi ho rahe hain. Ab chalo bhi Prince, jaldiii!!!"

Veer saluted her: "Aye aye Ma'm!

And soon the car joomed at a high speed and crossed the threshold of the mansion within moments.


 (Maurya National Institution of Business Manangement - MNIBM)

The black car joomed through the lavish and colossal entrance gate of the institution. As soon as the car entered the crowded campus of MNIBM, there was a loud cheer among the students as mostly all students know Veer and Ananya and were great friends of the duo. As the door to the driver's seat opened, stepped out the most handsome guy of the institution with his dark brown shades on and his jet black hair flowing back. He had a smirk playing in his lips as most of the girls were drooling the moment he stepped out and he pretty well was aware of the effect he had on them. And there opened the other door of the car and stepped out the most beautiful and gorgeous girl of the institution, after whom almost every guy of the college was crazy. However, unlike Veer, Ananya was totally indifferent to the attention she usually got from the guys. Though these two were perhaps blind to their natural chemistry and the fact that they make the most beautiful and adorable couple, others were not at all blind to the fact. They could see the fact clearly and this made the guys jealous whenever they saw Veer with Ananya and vice-versa.

As soon as Veer and Ananya took a few steps towards the entrace to the college building, a girl came and tapped on Veer's shoulder from behind. Veer turned and smiled seeing her.

Veer: "Hey Swati! How are you doing beautiful?"

Swati blinked her eyes quite unnecessarily: "Do you really care handsome?"

Veer chuckled: "Well actually I don't."

Saying this he clasped his hands with a giggling Ananya and ran to save their neck as they were really getting late for their classes, leaving behin a confused and sad Swati.

While walking, rather striding alongwith Veer, Ananya asked him: "Why do you keep doing this with the poor girls? Cant you get one for you who willl just fulfill each and every criteria of your dream girl? Don't you get tired of chasing these good for nothing girls?"

Veer laughed: "Oh come on Pari. You know me right! These all are just for the sake of fun and nothing serious. Kya tumhe sach mein lagta hain ki yeh larkiyan mujhse saccha pyar karti hain? Then you need a reality check my Angel. In larkiyo ko toh pata bhi nehi ki saccha pyar hota kis chiriya ka naam hain, usko khate hain ya pehente hain. (he laughed making Ananya giggled) Yeh sab sirf infatuations hain pari and nothing else and I can guarrantee you that once they get a more handsome man than me, they wont even take minutes to forget me. And hey hey hey! What did you say? I chase those girls? For the last time Pari I don't chase them…"

Ananya giggled and cut him in between: "Ya ya I know. The girl chase the great emperor of the world Veer Singhania. Right?"

Veer:  "My Angel can never be wrong."

Ananya: "Accha! Waise na tum decide karlo ki tumhe mujhe angel bulana hain ya pari."

Veer: "ek hi baat hain dhakkan."

Ananya's mouth fell open: "Huh! Tumne mujhe dhakkan bola, fir toh tum..uh..tum..haan tum fir muhjala peepa ho."

Now it was Veer's turn to get astounded: "What? Yeh hota kya hain? Aisa koi cheez hain bhi ya tumhare wild imagination ka instant made creation hain?"

Ananya: "Oh hello! Mr. know it all, agar tumhein kuch nehi pata toh matlab wo exist hi nehi karta? Waise muh jala peepa ka matlab hain jab ek khali tin ke dabbe ko laath par laath marte jao toh uska jo haalat hota hain wo."

As soon as she said this she burst into fits of giggle. Veer was shocked to know the meaning and after a moment, which required the meaning to sink in him, he retorted: "Pari ki bacchi teri toh main…"

And with this he began to chase Ananya who started to run to save her neck. They both kept running and chasing each other till they reached the class. Ananya first reached the class.  She was panting due to the exertion. She found out that the teacher had already arrived and was sitting at the teacher's desk and was about to check the attendance.

Ananya (panting slightly): "Ma'm…may…I…come in."

The professor turned to look at her and smiled warmly. All the teachers of the institution like the two top students – Veer and Ananya- very much and hence they ignore minor faults of the two friends.

Professor: "Come in Ananya. Where is Veer?"

Ananya was about to reply but even before she could reply, someone bumped into her, pushing her inside the class while the person too had entered the class due to the sudden force.

The Professor shook her head while Ananya turned back to find Veer who was panting slightly.

Veer turned to look at their professor and smiled sheepishly: "Umm…actually….Oh forget it! Sorry Ma'm. May I come in?"

Professor smiled: "In case you haven't noticed yet Veer you are already in."

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Krishna_Sourav IF-Addictz

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 12:15am | IP Logged
awesome part
loved it

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sanyogitaprc Senior Member

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 12:26am | IP Logged
loved this part...both r so cute...they both know each other so well...loved their bonding...they r perfect for each other...

as u said their natural chemistry is really awesome...well wondering who will realise this as love first...looking forward to to see their journey from friendship to love...

thanks 4 pm...eagerly waiting for next part...upadate soon...

Edited by sanyogitaprc - 09 November 2011 at 3:18am

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shruja IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 1:33am | IP Logged
liked the whole part
both know each other well
so y din't they realise they r made for each other
waiting for next update

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Rukmini13 Groupbie

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 1:52am | IP Logged
Nice update...oh prince u r cho cho chwet...u knw vry well hw to made her mood...luv there cute cute fight...angle,pari thik tha but dhakkan nd wht she call him muh jala dibba...:D:D:D:D its vry interesting to see hw there friendship turn in to luv...update soon dear...

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samikshachauhan Senior Member

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Posted: 09 November 2011 at 3:39am | IP Logged
wowww loved this part!!!!!!!!!
their frndship is so cute.
dying to see them falling in loveWink

plzzz plzzz update sooon...


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