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Simply love...SS on MANEET part 5 pg 19 new upd:)

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                                      Simply love

A ss on maneet.

Maan: geet where are you?

Geet: arey I am coming'gimme a sec jaan.

Maan: hayeee'''after hearing this word in your beautiful voice..

I can wait for a lifetime

Geet: maan you drama king..stop bothering me.

Maan: geet I am waiting for u in khushi's room.

(khushi..maan and geet's beautiful 3 year old daughter.)

Geet: acha maan.

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Khushi's room   [IMG]]

Khushi is daddy's princess. Maan fold his hand on his chest and watch his 3 year old daughter holding a teady bear which was bigger than her. A smile crept on maan face when he saw her beautiful daughter talking to teddy bear oppss he meant talking to her teddu. Khushi was very strict when it comes to his teddy' name. A tear linger in Maan's eyes when he remember the day when doctor told that they can only save one between mom and baby. It was the moment maan felt so helpless. Like his life was literally ending. It was the first day maan singh khurana step into a temple and beg for geet and baby life. Doctors believed that it was nothing less than a miracle, that both baby and geet were fine. A slight bump shook him back to present,

Khushi: opps sholly daddy, it was not me teddu losh (push) me.

Maan: its okay princess, and teddu very very bad. Maan said that in strict manner.

Khushi chuckled at teddu. That was the smile maan always wanted to see on his princess face.

Khushi: daddy pickkk  me uppp.

Maan happily obeyed. Khushi kissed maan cheek and forhead.

Khushi was a replica of geet. Cute, sweet, beautiful and naughty just like geet.  Daddy where is mumma?

Maan: princess your mama is getting ready and I have to wait. Maan made baby face.

Khushi: awhhh my daddy. Daddy u love me more or mumma?

This question startled maan like he was not ready for this.

Maan: why princess what happened?

Khushi just telme. ( tell me) when it comes to gussa ufff khushi was totally like maan. She had the same attitude and anger like maan.

Afterall she is KHUSHI SINGH KHURANA.

Maan thought for a while and put khushi on her bed and sat opposite to her.

Khushi'daddy loves her princess the most. ( khushi was happy hearing this but was also sad).

Khushi: daddy u aall (are) meanie. U dont love mumma.

Maan smiled hearing this.

Maan: princess daddy loves princess the most cause you are just like your mom. There is another geet in you. For me you both are same.

And..( before maan could say anything more khushi stopped him)

Khushi..daddy princess sorry.princess know daddy love ma and mama both the most.

Maan smiled and hugged and kissed khushi.

Meanwhile geet was a silent spectator of all this. She couldn't help but smile and have tears of joy seeing her life in front of her happy. Maan walked up to geet with khushi in her arms and kissed geet on her cheek while geet closed her eyes, and khushi kissed geet on her nose cutely.

Both offered their cheeks and in return geet kissed both of them, and took khushi in her arms.

Khushi: mama appp lohat ( bohat) shenti ( senti) ho. ( she means geet is very emotional).

   Their cute little argument was interrupted by dadi. Dadi took khushi in her arms and said.. maan bete you both are getting late to roshni birthday party.

Maan: dadi we were just going.

Geet: yes dadi.

Khushi: mumma and daddy be home at 12.

Geet: khushi go to sleep at 8 and don't tease your grandmum.

Maan smiled as he know her princess, while khushi smirked naughtily and dadi make baby face.

Finally geet and maan left the house and were in the car.

Maan: waise geet you are looking hot and beautiful as usual.

Geet blushed.

Maan: hayyeee geet when u blush like that I feel like eating you up.

Geet: maan sharam karo u have a daughter and still.

Maan: still what geet?

Geet: maan be quiet and drive.

Maan: yes mam.

Maaneet arrived at roshni house.

Both were greeted in a special way.

Roshni was geet best friend and jey was maan best friend.

So it was double dhammal for them.

Maan and geet accompanied by their friends were sitting at separate place away from all other older members.

All were having fun and remembering their college days when they all first met, awhh it was the most beautiful day of their lives when they first met. Geet,maan, roshni, jey, nisha, Rahul and sameera. It was a different matter now they all hate sameera more than anybody can imagine, suddenly a silence crept up as sameera walked in. Maan could see the fire in geet eyes. Maan was angry as hell along with others.

Sameera shamelessly spoke, looks like most of you are not happy that I am here.

Roshni : what the hell are u doing here? Who invited you? Get out. She was all set to scratch sameera face, jey held her back.

Sameera: chill rosh, I am here to congratulate you that's all. Oh I didn't notice u were also here maan baby.

Geet could just kill sameera right there.

Maan: sameera stay in your limits and the name is maan. MAAN SINGH KHURANA.

Sameera: but i always called u baby. You didn't have problems before.

Maan: sameera, I never saw a shameless women like u before. Whatever u did, still u have courage to stand before all of us.

Geet: maan lets go from here.

Sameera: somebody felt bad,

Geet: what u want sameera? Why cant u leave all of us alone, specially me? Just get out of my life. I hate you sameera.

Geet left from there with tears in her eyes. Maan could kill sameera r8 now , he left behind geet. Everybody left from there giving sameera a dirty look.

Sameera: my plan failed first now it wont fail. I will make sure I destroy you all specially geet. I promise mom ( sameera look on the sky) I will destroy all of them. They all will beg me but that day sameera SINGH will torture them. I will make their lives worse than hell. Sameera smiled. ( evil music in the back)

''''''.

This was the first part.

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Even if u didn't liked it do tell me.

Thank you soo much for reading it and giving it your time.

And do tell me should I continue or not.

 


                                        index:)

part 1 on pg 1

part 2 on  pg 5

part 3 on  pg 9

part 4 on pg 14

 part 5 on pg 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
awh
beautiful part jaani
awesomeee
khushi and maan are cho cutee hayee
lol and such a flirty maan😆
i love how u explained the past
at geet's delivery time
maan stepped at the mandir for first time awh
uff evil sameera
i dont want sad ending lol
remember that jaan haha
amazingg
please cont toh banta hai
love it
thanks jaani <3
Edited by maangeetcrazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow awsum
luking 4ward 4 more parts. Upd soon. Pls pm me next time u upd
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awwh hotty:) nice job re, keep writing:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy

awh
beautiful part jaani
awesomeee
khushi and maan are cho cutee hayee
lol and such a flirty maan😆
i love how u explained the past
at geet's delivery time
maan stepped at the mandir for first time awh
uff evil sameera
i dont want sad ending lol
remember that jaan haha
amazingg
please cont toh banta hai
love it
thanks jaani <3

 awhhh thanks jaan:)
i am glad u liked it:)
hahah okies will remember no sad ending 🤣
awhhh u welcome jaan
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: tinu.jindal

Wow awsum
luking 4ward 4 more parts. Upd soon. Pls pm me next time u upd

thanks:)
sure i will:)
awhh ohk i will pm u:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: LavanyaUSA

Awwh hotty:) nice job re, keep writing:)

thanks hotty:)
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awesome 

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thanks :)
Posted: 12 years ago