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KriYaansh - 2 lIVES , 1 WORLD PARt 6 Updated 19/12 (Page 8)

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Posted: 30 October 2011 at 3:14am | IP Logged
Promo was tooo good. Update jaldi karo na pls...
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Umm actually i m ending this FF , bt i have started a new oneBig smile
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Posted: 31 October 2011 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Pl continue!!!!!!

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Posted: 31 October 2011 at 10:22am | IP Logged
are kyu baar baar ending ki baat kar rahi ho aap...???
plzzz plzzz plzz...continue karo na...!!!!

-Saumya

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Posted: 31 October 2011 at 10:39am | IP Logged
omg mahi kab update karegi...
m waiting plzzz jaldi kar yaar
after the promo suspence sai na marjau...

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oye...end na kro...contnue...hum kriyaansh fans kabhi unka the end nahi dekh sakte/..pls continue./... 

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Ya dude continue it's damn interesting

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Posted: 04 November 2011 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Hey guys thankz 4 ur Immense appreciation n adorable comments Embarrassed, it really inspires me a lot . Sorry for late update ,actually ,I was going to end it bt have updated it on ur requests. This upd8te iss a thanks to all u lovely people who appreciate my work , Love u all Embarrassed.n Guyz  Hope u like this updateSmile !!!!


(After some time they both reach home...)

After kal raat ki romantic date , rey was contantly thinking about kria Day Dreaming, At college ...)

Rey - Baat cutter , THE UNIVERSALLY ACCEPTED BAAT CUTTER ko mere saath apni pehli date acchi lagi !!! Par kya woh saachi wohi feel kar rhi hai jo mein feel karta hoon uske liye !!! Kitni pyaari hai meri baat cutterEmbarrassed !!! Uski paagal kar dene wali smile, uski hamesha muskurati  hui aankhen , uske lips ..., Day DreamingHayyeee( Rey was fully lost in kria"s world Day Dreaming , imagine the song - gulabi aankhen jo teri dekhi sharabi yeh dil ho gaya for this sequence  )

KRIA KAA HAAl

After going home , kria dressed up and got ready to go to college  after yesterday ,She was constantly thinking of rey that how he cutely lied to her to go for a date , so passionately made the arrangements , how caringly made her eat the food , how sweetly stayed made her stay in his arms for the whole night to make her feel secureEmbarrassed ...It was only and only rey who made her feel like this , his closeness made her give chills down the spine . His charm was something that she would die for , his smile was like a candle in the darkness And...Blushing

Kria - Bass Jhaali bass , kitna aur sochegi rey ke baare mein . Kahi aisa naa hoo ki voh tujhe use kar ke chala jaye , but kal jo maine uski aankhon mein jo care aur affection mere liye dekhi kya woh nakli thiDay Dreaming ...KRIA , wake up , get grooved up for the college mood , rey ko bhool jaa aur apne pehle aur akkhri pyaar dance pe dhyaan de

(Kria goes to the rehearsel hall , she ffinds that someone was singing - Tu jaane naa , the voice was filled with serenity and calmness , it made kria think about rey and her last night"s date , and OHhhooo(female version) , after some time she was back into her senses and...)

Kria - Kaun hai yaha peConfused , actually yeh weakling kaa tym hai 4 rehearsels ??

A Voice - Acchha jeeTongue , 6 mahine kya hoge dehradun se gaye hue , Ms. Cracker apne Best Buddy ko Bhul Gayi ??

( n suddenly A Young , Handsome n a charming boy as of the same age of kria appears . Meet ARJUN , Kria "s Best buddy since school days who is a talented singer and a stage performer . He cares for kria a lot is is over-protective for her . He is the exactly opposite of kria. Unlike kria he is cool , Calm and always composed . He was a heart throb in Kria"s old college same as our dear rey )

Kria - Cracker ? Big smile...Yeh toh mujhe duniyaa mein sirf ek hii insaan bulaa sakta hai . OMG ARJUNBig smile!!!!! tu yahan ??? N dont u dare call me by that Name...

(Gives him a tight ,Playful hugHug )

Arjun -  Ohhha , toh Ms. Cracker , Toh mujhe mumbai aane ke liye teri permission leni padegi haan , Yahan bhi apna "K"  effect chala liya tune haan??

Kria - Noo re u stupido , u knw wat i was missing u A LOTEmbarrassed  , I wish u wer here wid me!!!! Yahan toh problems hii problems hai , haar ek din sunrise see kam , , misunderstandings see zyaada shuru hote hai ...Disapprove
(she makes a sad expression as all the hard feeling replays in her mind , suddenly a tear drop falls from her eye , Arjun could never see kria crying even when They were in KG , when a boy too kria"s fav.  chocolate he had hit the boy hard n he himself started crying wid kria(AwwwEmbarrassed)!!! He Adored kria  A lotEmbarrassed(as a friend ) He knew how to make her feel better , He just hugged kria tightly)

Arjun - Aww cracker Disapprove, Please rona mat , nhi toh mein bhi emotional hoo jaonga

(Suddenly rey comes in the rehearsel hall , In search of kria , He was Literally Burning of jealousy on the site of Kria hugging some1 else , He was like mujhe toh kabhi smile bhi nahi dii aur ISKO arrghhhAngry)

Rey - KRIA !!!! Yeh tum kya kar rhi hoAngry? (Bites his lips on saying that)

Kria - WhatConfused ??

Rey  - UhhhOuch , Woh mein , I mean , tum yahan kya kar rhi hoo , ohh yaa rite , mein tumhe kabse dhoond raha honn , woh RDX ne humein naye events kii list banani thi

Kria - Ohh , sorry rey woh rehearsels kaa time tha naa isliye ...

Arjun - Cracker (puts his hands on kria"s shoulder)Yeh kaun hai?

Kria - He is rey , dazzler team ka captain aur Iss collge ka G.S.

Rey - (Rey was on the verge of killing ArjunEvil Smile , he wanted to say that pehle meri Baat- cutter ke shoulders koo TOUCH karna n now usse Nickname dena ,woh koi CRACKER nhi hai u CRACKPOT , WOh meri baat cutter hai , sirf meri BAAT CUTTER HaiAngry !!!!! But he controls himsellf and forcefully stretches his hands forward ) Hii Arjun , nice to meet u, Toh Kria chale kya ??

Arjun - hii rey , bahaut taarif suni hai cracker ke muhh se tumhare baare mein(Kria cutely blushedBlushing as arjun said this but rey was too busy to see kria blush , he was busy making plans for having ARJUN TANDOORI tonightEvil Smile)

Kria - Haan rey , mein aati hoon...(arjun cuts her off)

Arjun -CRACKER Disapprove!!!! Noo tumhe aaj tumhe mere saath poora din spend karna padega , afterall hum kitneee time baat mille hai(Make a puppy face which kria cannot resist to agree)


Kria - Theek hai Fine!!!! Rey sorry arjun mujhe chodega nahii agar main uski baat nahi mani toh , mein aapse atrium mein shaam lo 7 baje milti hoon  Byee reu(Both Arjun and kria leave the hall )

Rey -(red of anger and jealousyAngryAngryAngry) BAAT- CUTTER , tumhare saath EK baar date pe jaane ke liye kitne mehnat karni padii n this IDIOT Arjun !!!!!! He just asked u once n u agreed... thtz just not fair , ARJUN !!!!!!!!!


Soo guys hwz it , please do comment and thanks a lot for reading :)Big smile





Edited by kriyansh117 - 04 November 2011 at 12:01pm

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