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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 7:33am | IP Logged
plzzz update fast cant wait for the suspense plzzz post fast ASAP plzzz...
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Thumbs Upawsum updateClap ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,plz pm me
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WOAH!!!Wink



this is so sweet!!! 
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yaa i wil post it soonSmile
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baba kya promo tha and aur kya ho sakta hai yah to romance ya fir jagra tho PLEASE ROMANCE AND NOT JAGRA hhahahha
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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
wow yaar updt + promo
sooo awesome!!
i wish we could et a kryansh scene like that on show
n i laughed hard when krya said the meaning of photored..lol
cant wait 4 kryansh spending time together
continue soon
see yaaa =)
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Posted: 15 October 2011 at 10:22pm | IP Logged
 poojadworld - thanks a lot Smile
sweetapple2995 - thanks sweety but u have 2 wait to see watz nxt 
_monu_- hahaha rite n thanks a lot 

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New update-

(Finally after the college , kria went to get ready for reyz bday party , She wore a beautiful silk white short dress and was looking like an enchanting angel who was ready to steal reys heart , LOLZ , suprisingly she didnt see rey today at college and was very exited to meet him after their yesterdayz fire exit meeting )AT reys place 

imagine kria wearing this - http://www.google.com/imgres?q=white+silk+dress&um=1&hl=en&sa=N&biw=1024&bih=677&tbm=isch&tbnid=JTd_f4JYlclM2M:&imgrefurl=http://worldstylo.blogspot.com/2011/10

Kria- Yeh door khula kyun hai , and party mein itni shanti kyun hai ??(gets in) REY , REY aap kaha ho ?

Rey - (grabs her from behind the door and she falls in his arms , she was looking soo beautiful that he got engrossed in her charm AND OHHHooohHHoo , after the look look hawa hawa... ) Accha toh tum aa hi gayi meri baatcutter , ek baat kehni hai tumse , u look beeeaauuttifffuuull 2dae and winks

Kria -(blushes a little , she too is lost in rey as he was looking just perfect in black jeans and blue blazer , after a liitle while she moves apart from rey after realising the awkwardness) Thank u , aap bhi bahaut charming lag rahe ho ,vaise baki sab kaha hai , kya main jaldi aa gayi .

Rey - please dont kill me if i say u d truth ??

Kria - what truth ? sach bolo rey yaha kya khichdi pak rahi hai

Rey - woh kria actually mein tumhare sath thoda tym spend karna chahata tha isliye tumse jhooth bola , mera aaj bday nahi hai 

Meanwhile reys ke ghar ka watchman comes , as the lights are still off , he thinks that rey might have forgotten to lock the doors and so he locks the door , inside kria annoyed as rey lied to her and rey tryin to calm her down

kRIA -jhooth mat bolo rey , mein jaanti hoon ke yeh ek prank hai , college mein meri insult karke tumhara jee nahi bhara ki aap ne yeh sab bhi shuru kar dia , DISGUSTING !!!

rEY - Mein sach bol raha hoon baat cutter , mein tumhe date pe le jana chahata tha , par kya tum manti agar mein tumhe date ke liye puchta ? 

Kria - AAp muhe ek baar pooch toh sakte the , shayad mein maan jaati ( turns to the door to leave , tries to open it to leave but finds it lock ) REY , YEH DOOR LOCKED kyu hai !!!!

Rey - ohh shit , shayd watchman ne band kar diya hoga , wait mein phone karta hoon (opens his phone and tries to call)OHH shit no network !!!!

Kria - then landline try karo !!!

Rey - but landline kharab hai ( makes an annoying face but he is actually very happy as he will get some time to spend with his baat cutter )

Kria - Agar maa ko pata chala ki mein ek ladke ke saath hoon toh... (starts weeping badly )(rey can tolerate anything in this world but cannot see her baat cutter weeping so he tries to calm her down)

Rey - Please mat rooee baat cutter , chalo khana kha lete hai , tumhe bhook lagi hogi

Kria- (in utter anger)please go rey , isse pehli ki mein aapka khoon kar doon, please GOO

Rey - ENOUGH , ENOUGH KRIA , tum toh aise baat kar rhi ho jaise yeh door maine band karvaya hoo, main toh tumhe bas ek date pe lake tumhare saath tym spend karna chahata tha isliye maine yeh sab kia , aur tum ... chodo , ab chup chap chalo mere saath , its already 9:00
(she gets a bit shocked and nods in agreement and follows him)
(they finally arrive to the room where rey had planned the date , everything was just perfect , the flowers , the music , the decoration the wine ,the candle , the ambiANCE , IT WAS JUST PERFECT  , she finally realises that rey actually wanted to spend some time with her and she felt guilty for how she behaved with rey )

(Rey serves her food and also starts eating but kria just keeps on staring him in guilt )
Rey- kya hua baat cutter , ab toh khana kha lo , kitni ziddi ho tum !!! ( goes to her and makes her feed witha spoon like a baby , awww !!!<3<3 she too eats quitely , after the dinner ...)

Rey- chalo baat cutter tum soo jao, ab watchman kal subhe paanch baje aayega and its already 11:00 , (takes her to the bed and covers her with a blanket and goes to leave )Mein samne wali room mein hoon , agar kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh wake me up(smiles to comfort her )

Kria -(as he goes to leave she suddenly grabs his arm and stands up and hugs him tightly and OHHHoooHHHoo) Pleasee rey kahi mat jaaoo , mujhe andhere se bahaut darr lagta hai ,agar app mere saath rahoge toh mujhe kisi bhi baat ka darr nahi lagta ( Grabs him more tightly , she feels secure and protected in his strong arms , soo protected that she dosent wants to leave him ) 

Rey  -(suprised by kria"s hug but then he too joins the hug , he makes kria sit on the bed with kria"s head still on reys shoulder  , kria holding him tight and rey stroking her hair to comfort her )mein kahi nahi jaa raha baat cutter , mein tumhe kabhi , kabhi bhi akele chod kar nahi jaaongaa , chalo abb soo jaoo

Kria - thanks rey , mein apke saath safe aur shurakshit mehsoos karti hoon . Aur aaj ke liye maaf kar do mujhe , saari galati meri thi , app toh sirf mere saath tym spend karna chahate the isliye yeh sab kiya aur main , maine aapke saath kitna rudely nehave kiya , IDIOIT HOON MEIN !!!

rEY -(both are still in the same position)sssHHHSSHHH , meri baat cutter ko aisa kehne ki tumhari himmat kaise hui , chalo ab soo jaoo ms.dehradun , kal jaldi uthna hai naaa(She sleeps on his shoulders with rey admiring her beauty the whole night , he didnt wanted  to miss this time with kria .)

(Finally the day arises and KriYansh wake up , they both feel awkward on realising that  they were sleeping on each others arms for the whole night , finally the watchman comes and kria turns to leave )

Kria- mein nikalti hoon rey , appse college mein milti hoon (smiles)

Rey - Par jhaansi ki raani kaa kya ?

KRia - just shut up rey , woh bas mere copyright hai !!!

Rey - sorry baba , but tumhari mom ka kya ?

Kria - woh mein momko keh dongi ki mein neha ke ghar pe notes complete karne gayi thi

Rey - theek hai but koi bhi problem ho toh mujhe zaroor batana , okk ?

Kria - theek hai (nods in agreement) okk byee

(kria turns to leave but stops at the door AND...)

Kria- UMMM , rey waise mujhe apni pehli date kafi acchii lagi (blushes sweetly and runs away , awww !!!)

Rey - (His eyes and mouth wide open after hearing this . He shouts like mad people after hearing this )

hey guys i am thinking of ending this FF , what say ?
Sooo guys howz it , did u guys like it doo reply , thanks for readingSmile






Edited by kriyansh117 - 16 October 2011 at 9:27am

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