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Posted: 11 October 2011 at 9:27am | IP Logged
are kya yaar bechare ko 8th floor pe chalna para...lol
just joking!!!...
it was great part ...so sweet flowers n chocolates
n she smiled...woooww
rey ki lottery lag gayy..!! lol
waiting 4 next part!!
see yaaa

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Thankz a lot goys 4 ur sweet comments and adorable likes !!! , Promise will update soon , but m nt gettin time due to college

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NEW UPDATE :

Rey comes to college early 2day , in search for his baatcutter . He searches for her in every nook and corner of the college but doesnt finds her . He finally goes to basketball cout and beguns to play .

Rey - Yeh baat cutter kyun nahi aye , will she ever forgive me , will i be ever able to get a place in her heart or she will always hate me , argghhh stop it rey . Kria aa jayegi . Just stop behaving like a kid .(Meanwhile vicky and nilesh come to the court ., rey is still very upset of what these pepul had done wid kria )

Vicky - REY mere dot mere bhhai kaisa hai tu , aur kal to rose party se plate mein se khane ki tarah kaha gayab ho gaya tha ?

Nilesh - Ohh juzt shut up vicky , kHANE KO THODE TYM KE LIYE TOH CHOD , aur tu bole rey

Rey - juzt Go guys , yaha se jao , isse pehle mein tum logon ko kuch aisa keh doon jo mujhe nahi kehna chahiye , juzt goo 

Vicky - Sorry bro , par humne kya kia , itna toh bole (tries to pacify rey )

Rey - Ohhh gr8 , naa hi tum logon ne kria ki insult ki , noo hi tum logon ne mujhse yeh baat hupai , naa hi kria ko bura laga aur naa hi kria ne mujhe slap kia ?? 

nilesh - (A bit scared) Sorry rey , main sacchi tujhse kuch nahi chupana  chahata tha , voh toh sharon ne naa bola tha isliye , aur kya farak padta hai rey uss weakling ki thodi se insult ho gayi toh aur vaise bhi tune usse kal badla le liya naa .

Rey - What sharon ne aisa kiya (nearly shouts ) , meri best frnd ne jabki voh jaanti thi ki main aisa kuch nahi kehna chahata tha (meanwhile sharon comes) (kRIA also is passing by the baskettball court and she sees all the drama )

Sharon - mein tum teeno ko kab se dhoondh rahi hoon aur tum log yahan hoo , aohh god tumhara kuch nahi hoo sakta guyz , abb chalo , follow me 2 d rehearsel hall

Rey (In utter anger ) FOLLOW U , wohi toh kar raha tha mein abtak sharon par ab nahi , u and ur bloody ego , just go to hell , I WISH KE MAINE TUMSE KABHI FRIENDSHIP HI NAHII KII HOTI .(he goes from the court without noticing kria )

Sharon - (SHOcKED AND STUNNED) kOI MUJHE BATAYEGA YAHAN HO KYA RAHA HA
( vicky n nilesh tell her d whole story , sharon gets stunned and gets broken into tears , kria gets to know the whole story and also that rey wasnt lying , She feels bad for rey , she thinks that all the dazzlers are with sharon to make her feel better but rey is all alone , she thinkz that she should try and b his support as he has always helped her , during the pranks , the team, formation during the auditions , always . she knows where she could get her chabilal and there she goes and as sum1 had guessed , rite its d fire exit but i have purposely made a twist over here )

Rey -(shattered and smashed ) 

Kria - toh yaha hoo tum , expected , vaise for a change mujhe tumse baat karni hai .

Rey -(he was so shattered and smashed that he didnt notice kria callin him tum  ) Kria pls go , mera baat karne ka mood nahi hai .

(we all noe tht our ziddi kria wont go tht easily )

Kria - Toh maine kab kaha mujhe aapse baat karni hai , mujhe toh mere dost chabilal se baat karni hai  , Chabhilal , chabhilal???

Rey - (suprised and touched by hearing tht finally kria wanted to talk to him , he thot tht atleast kria uski ek side ko toh pasand karti hai , he finally smiles bt he was too upset to get into his chabilal character ) arggh koi baat cutter ko kaise cut kar sakta hai ,Theek hai , bolo baat cutter ?

Kria - finally aapne smile toh kia , nahi toh ek sade baingan ki tarah baithe hue the , waise aap haste hue bure nhi lagte 

Rey - thanks 4 cumin kria , i needed sum1 ,toh tumne mujhe maaf kia ?

Kria - ek shart par , ki aap aise gussa hoke nahi baithoge aur sharon aur baaki dazzlers ko maaf kar doge ?

Rey - sorry kria par yeh nahi ho sakta , u knw naa ki usne tumahare baare mein kya kya kaha tha and tum kabse sharon ki side lene lagi 

Kria - Tab se jab se sharon se friendship todne par aapka yeh haal ho gaya .

(Rey was immensely touched by Kria caring nature for him and he hugs her tightly , He wanted that kria shud never leave him , no one understood rey , the real rey lyk kria and he thot tht wht wud be his life without her ) (Kria , inturn was a bit suprised by reyz reaction bt thn she too joined the hug AND OhhhOOOHHHOOhhOO)

Rey - Kria , mujhe kabhi bhi chod ke mat jana , kabhi bhi nahi , i need u , i am incumplete without you 

Kria -(breaking the hug ) appko kya lagta hai mein aapka peecha itni aasani se chod doongi (cutely grins ), never, but please aap sharon ko maaf kar dejiyega 

Rey - agar tum kehti ho toh theek hai ...

Kria - yeh hui naa photored wali baat !!!

Rey - PhOtored ???

Kria - Photo = chabhi , lal =red , get it ?? (Starts laughing sweetlt and as usual rey gets engrossed in hear laughing face and Ohohohohoo tune starts )
(After some time , rey starts thinking for an idea to spend 2moros whole day with kria and then he finally says ...)
Rey - Kria , umm 2moro is my bday , will u cum at my place to make me feel more special ?

kria - ohhh , really  rey , happy bday in advance but i wont b able to cum , u knoe naa weakings aur dazzlers ke beech kitni misunderstandings hai ?

Rey - Please kria mana mat karna , mere liye , pleaseee?

Kria - ummm ohhk rey , mein aaungi , toh aapse kal milti hoon byee (she goes)

Rey - BAATCUTTER maan gayi , yipppeee , kal ka poora din baat cutter ke saath(He starts dancing madly on the song YAHHOOO , CHAHE KOI MUJHE JUNGLEE KAHE , juzt imagine rey dancing on tht , sooo cutee naa )

So howz it guys , thnkz for reading
















Edited by kriyansh117 - 15 October 2011 at 6:57am

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wohooo 1st to comment kya baat well loved how kria cheered him up i WISH I WISH I WISH THIS WOULD HAPPEN IN SERIAL TOO I WOULD BE SOOO AWESOME!!!!!! AWESOME UPDATE YAAR

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Thankz a lot yaar , luv u guys <3 <3 <3

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woaa it was awesome plzzz update fast update moreee luved it plz post fast eagerly waiting for kriyansh scenes...

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woowww cant wait ria n rey to spend time togethr

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new update promo

The next day finally arises , after the college , kria gets ready for reys bday party , she wears a beautiful white silk dress and finally reaches reys place .sHE Is suprised to find rey alone . Guess whats gonna happen nxt , will update soon , 

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