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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 3:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DreamyDeepz28

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sry.Didnt understand

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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 4:01am | IP Logged
I thought this was one scene of a story!!!! LOL 
 
Just saw this '...Ab toh mukthi mila mujhko tarika se...'.
 
Look, many of us are not too fond of her, but some are...but I don't think Abhijeet would ever say this about her. It's not like she's after him and pestering him...I would say unfortunately they are showing it the other way round...he's flirting with her and she seems oblivious to his presence.
 
 


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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 4:57am | IP Logged
no he wont say thiis about anyone
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I have edited the post thanx for telling meSmile


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NSPO... if i m not wrong... U are the LATE STORY WRITER in STORY CONTEST 4th... sorry missed the TITLE... but i think the STEMP COLLECTING idea put in UR storyErmm...
buddy I read this one as well... the NARRATIVE STYLE was GOODThumbs Up... cz still me unable to write anythin in that STYLEUnhappy... but i think the RECENT STORY was TOO much SHORTUnhappy... it required bit LENGTH cz the IDEA was SUPERBStar...
jus STRETCH the STORY... it will going beyondThumbs Up... like sum funny CHATS b/w DUOWink...
baaqi HATTS OFF BUDDYClap!!!
really GOOD but SHORTClap...

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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 4:50pm | IP Logged


Bas thoda or dialogs add karke usse or impactfull banate toh or acha lagat
 
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Nice,different,good n short n sweet story..yaar.. Lovely...:)

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