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Posted: 12 years ago
no he wont say thiis about anyone

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Posted: 12 years ago

I have edited the post thanx for telling me😊
Edited by nsapo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

NSPO... if i m not wrong... U are the LATE STORY WRITER in STORY CONTEST 4th... sorry missed the TITLE... but i think the STEMP COLLECTING idea put in UR story🤔...
buddy I read this one as well... the NARRATIVE STYLE was GOOD👍🏼... cz still me unable to write anythin in that STYLE😔... but i think the RECENT STORY was TOO much SHORT😔... it required bit LENGTH cz the IDEA was SUPERB⭐️...
jus STRETCH the STORY... it will going beyond👍🏼... like sum funny CHATS b/w DUO😉...
baaqi HATTS OFF BUDDY👏!!!
really GOOD but SHORT👏...

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Posted: 12 years ago


Bas thoda or dialogs add karke usse or impactfull banate toh or acha lagat
 
BTW
gr8 attempt
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Posted: 12 years ago
i liked the plot...
i read ur ist one ..i think khoon shadi ke mandap main
u hv sharp writing skill..
try to write long stories...
keep it up👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice,different,good n short n sweet story..yaar.. Lovely...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice message about blindly following anything to get some sort of profit out of  it 👏.    It was really short story would love if you increase length of story.

Just didn't understand----

Doctor.Woh shayad ...pata nahi
daya threatens him.He says the family did not want females so they left them in the backyard to die. He thought he will give them to a orphanage but the babies disappeared after one day.so he thought somebody is adopting them.

Was doctor so careless or I misunderstood.

Edited by sunnyp1414 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: gadhadada


NSPO... if i m not wrong... U are the LATE STORY WRITER in STORY CONTEST 4th... sorry missed the TITLE... but i think the STEMP COLLECTING idea put in UR story🤔...
buddy I read this one as well... the NARRATIVE STYLE was GOOD👍🏼... cz still me unable to write anythin in that STYLE😔... but i think the RECENT STORY was TOO much SHORT😔... it required bit LENGTH cz the IDEA was SUPERB⭐️...
jus STRETCH the STORY... it will going beyond👍🏼... like sum funny CHATS b/w DUO😉...
baaqi HATTS OFF BUDDY👏!!!
really GOOD but SHORT👏...


Thanx for everything,but  i havent participated in the story contest.Wrong guess buddy!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: nsapo


Thanx for everything,but  i havent participated in the story contest.Wrong guess buddy!😉



oops SO SORRY BUDDY😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Apoorva put your name in the title of the thread