*RAYA* THE EXPLORER(updated 8th jan ) pg 11 - Page 5

Posted: 12 years ago
nice updates๐Ÿ˜Š!! Please updates soon..
Posted: 12 years ago
Hay sammy where r u?it's been a long time u havn't updated plz plz plz update the next part im waiting @ plz pm me also
Posted: 12 years ago
hey hi and sory for not updating as i first had practicals and now have preboards that too 3 lined up till mid feb but ya now as u are insisting i'll try to give a special update on sunday as i have bio and thnx for liking my ff and sory for hanging up in middle๐Ÿ˜Š
Posted: 12 years ago
 hey this was too goo  today i read all the parts...  i  fell in love with this  plz  dont stop it   in middle .. plz dnt make us wait  too  long  ...  update soon and do  continue plzzz
Posted: 12 years ago
 
Originally posted by sammy_108


hey friends hi sorry could not update for a long time got injured well now i am fine and even have a week's vacation due to commerce fest in our school (cool๐Ÿ˜Ž) ๐Ÿ˜ƒ so will update regularly
anyways now the next chapter enjoy :
r= arre meri ma kha lo plz have it
p = wese mr. kapoor how did u manage to prepare the sargi aur whare r we going ? at this hour ?
r= ohh god priya tum mere sath kbc kbc khelna band karogi plzz and yes i got the sargi prepared from one of the punjabi lady  chef at hotel
p = at midnight but how ??
r = ooh don't even ask that lady she was worse than the hitler  and glared at me as i was of her enemy who killed her soldiers and would sweetly like to slaughter me up with the butcher's knife at midnite , but (smirking) he said as u know i am RAM KAPOOR and my one kiss and she happily hopped around and prepared it happily .
p = what (angrily) u and ur kisses agghh what do u think of urself sum smooch guru ??
r = ahh priya u still not over with my emraan hashmi act god wommen, but didn't u like my kisses? where they that bad ??
p = (โ˜บ๏ธ)  amm woh i !!
r = (surprised ) priya what was that ??
p = kyya kya hua (arranging herself)
r = o.m.g. priya u blush ? i mean normal ladies do but u too wow!
priya ; hitted him hard with her bag(big 1 that ladies carry which needs mini search engine to search out the things and ek jor ka hit and admi๐Ÿคข well suits ram๐Ÿ˜†)
r = ow ow priya stop that lagta he i am driving (well remembered? they r in the car) and well that lady was apprx dadi's age and u should have no issues with my emraan and vidya o.k. ?
p = now calmed a bit o..k. so where are we heading towards ?
r = ahemdabad 
p = but it's flight  are available only during the day
r =  ha that must be of normal people but for me it's an exception โญ๏ธ
p = aah ram u r so much full of urself can't u be jst normal for a day ?
r = can u quit that thinking cap of urs can u no na ? so it's the same with me
(they took a private jet and landed and took a hotel (no elaboration))
r = priya i'll get fresh first as we'll not be going anywhere
p =why , and how we'll be able to see
r = cutting her in between ya ya i know dwarikadheesh temple , the old caves etc. etc.
p = surprised , hey how do u know that??
r =  amm woh priya me i
p = ram just ah how dare u touch myy diary without my permission ??๐Ÿ˜ก
r = priya woh i am sorry it slipped from ur bag in the flight at mumbai to chandigarh and i couldn't stop myself from reading it i am sorry
p = u are so much possesive of ur own things than how could u touch mine ,give me my diary back
r = no plz wait tumhare topic 20 places to visit before i die ka india wala last paragraph is left let me complete it and get the next bookings done please
p = no never (tried to catch it from his arm as he was trying to take it out ) and moved forward and tiptoed to reach his height but missed her  balanced and both landed up on bed with priya on top of ram
ram held her waist securely and gazed into her dark shiny eyes which reflected jst pureness and innocense , priya too gazed as his adam's apple moved back and forth (due to their close proximity) both kept staring at each other until ram broke the silence overcoming with the desire to kiss her there and then and make her his, but he had already read the dillemma which she was facing in her expressive eyes and broke apart
r = amm priya i know u are very light but still u are blocking my way
p = out of her daze now oh i am sorry and blushed on those thoughts going in her mind
r = (god this girl would kill me 1 day with her smile) priya i have kept a saree for u plz. wear it and be in ur room and sharp at 5 car will cum to pick u up be ready i have an important meeting here ,and he left saying this
priya was now on the 7th cloud feeling all light abd pondered over the thought that why was ram doing , was it coz he loved her or was it just to act nice?? she than got fresh and changed into a red saree(sry don't know sarees material or type) with a lit bit work at it's borders ,the minute she draped it around her she fell in love with it's soft silky material and red whine shade , than she adored herself with bangles and etc. for kc and she didn't knew why but for today she liked to get ready at her best and look bautiful and presentable .
at 5 the car came and escorted her to a far distant place almost like a deserted land she got a bit tensed but kept calm soon she reached the venue aprx at 8:30 and as she stepped out she saw ram in a black siut sans tie and looking calm and waiittt dashing
ram took her hand and led her through a carpet of red roses between silver coloured barren land (yht car zoomed off only leaving them both behind alone and no one seemed to be there no vegetation no living things sign nothing) she held her gaze up only to be mesmerized by the beautifyl moon glittering like a silver ball reflecting its color on the far distant barren land  of kutchh (gujarat) not so far there was a table set carrying the ritual plate and dinner N wine , priya could do nothing but just gape at the natural beauty in front of her the pool of silver formed in front oof her eyes shimmering and glittering it's color
r = broke her gaze n asked her did u like it?
p = could say nthng but jst nod
r = came closer to her and whispered so whats the plan ma'am ? (she stood confused) he said i mean the moon is here ur hubby is here don't u wanna break ur fast?
priya jst nodded and picked up her thali and performed the rituals without breaking her gaze
ram (unexpectingly) : he kneeled down in front of her and took a flower from the vase on the table
and said : p i know our marriage was based solely on compromise , but i still don't think so i think our jodi was made in heaven just to be bonded together and here i am at my feet proposing u to be my life partner wholeheartidly will u accept it?
p = YESS!!
r = got up and immediately insereted a platinum band in her finger witha capital PR engraved with diamonds
they had their dinner in complete silence without breking teir gaze but suddenly she coughed and choked on her morsel and panicked for water
r = got up and handed her the glass but it got spilld as p was fretting like
he dammed himself and took the wine bottle and made her have large sips until her throat relaxed  but she took the whole bottle and drank the whole liquid from it in
r = oh w.t.h.p are u alright
p = (hiccup) ya i am (hiccup) fine dont(hiccup) worry , suddenly after saying priya's vision started to blur out and everything became hazy even her head felt so much light she said; mr. kapoor u know aj ki sham bahut acchi thi i enjoyed it so much
r = ya ya (making her steady) i know now let's go
p = no first i want to kiss u
r = whatt , no priya u are not in ur senses u are drunk
p = no i want to be lady emraan hashmi and savour the taste of ur those soft lips
r = priya no way we are going to sleep and thats an order
p =o shut up mr.kapoor u blabber to ,much now cliutching the lapels of his coat , she tiptoed and
brushed her lips on hers and clutched him tightly for support
r = god this woman she is truly drunk and even looks so tempting in her red saree and her lips(ram!!! control) but if she regrets it later
p = now in a calm husky voice mr kapoor
r didn't respond
p = ram
he reacted on heaing his names from her mouth just so magical it was he never knew
p (again) ram plz make me urs. forever and ever plz
this was i ram lost all his control and scooped her to the blue coloerd huge tent he had arranged
seeming like an oasis in midst of the barren land he walked with long strides and pushed the curtains of the tent away and laid her down on the bed as he was taking off his shoes p came from behind and encircled his necks with her arms and whisperd : golu u know what ur s** appeal is raised just coz of ur chubbiness and i love it she stood right in frnt of him and said ki
ram i love u and would always continue to do would u love me ttoo?
r didn't reply but instead came for picked her above the gound and kissed her hard on her lips which priya replied well she encircled her arms around his neck and moved closer to him leaving no gap btwn them he laid her down and removing hid coat and shoe slowly and tenderely  kissed  her forhead , gave a peck on both her cheeks and started nuzzling in the nape of her neck until he heard herd her moan and take his name, he smiled on the new life he was gonna start with her life partner and blowed out all the earthenlamps and only the moonlight seeped in the only spectator of two beautiful lovers entwined into each other with both their body and souls as 1
t.b.c. thnx do comment plz took me hell of pain to write 
precap:raya have a fight regarding making ram agree to wear dhoti for visiting a templeโญ๏ธ
plz do continue this  sammy๐Ÿ‘ it was awesome update...    its damn  boring   this week end

Posted: 12 years ago
hey fresh update to be served within two hrs.๐Ÿ˜‰
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by sammy_108


hey fresh update to be served within two hrs.๐Ÿ˜‰


wow  sammy   ur such a sweet heart ..  โค๏ธ
 thanks for the  reply  so soon ...
 ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
Posted: 12 years ago
was eagerly waiting for ur update... ๐Ÿ˜
Posted: 12 years ago
hey evey1 thnx a lot for all ur comments alnd liking my ff and sorry i left in between , anyways here's the next part hope u like it๐Ÿ˜Š
the rays of sun seeped in thru the tent trying to make the two sleepers arise , ram was the first one to wake  , he opened his eyes only to witness a serine and calm face deep in sleep holding him by his arm and cuddled up close to him the scene bought a big vibrant smile to his smile but soon was replaced by a frown , what if she didn't remember anything ๐Ÿ˜•, she was drunk the only thought made him serious and angry for melting in front of her drunk wife , but she was sooo..., he got up wore his coat and went out to grab sum fresh air , meanwhile priya woke up and the last night's incidents lingered in her mind and brought a blush to her face , ram gathered sum courage and went in he saw priya awake and then after winning the battle in his mind asked her
r = priya do u ammm remember about last night 
p=(now understood his mind and decided to play with him) yes mr. kapoor it was a wonderful dinner and i had so much fun thnx ...
r = his frown now grew deep on hearing her address him as mr. kapoor once again , priya kya tum i mean hum dono ke beech kal raat i mean u don't remember ๐Ÿ˜•
p = chuckeled a bit and and said mr.kapoor now don't repeat this prank again as i know we had a great dinner and after having some drinks *accidentally* went to sleep 
r couldn't take it much now and grew angry and asked her to come out as the cab will come to take here any moment , p nodded (supressing her smile on seeing his sulky face ) and went to sit in the cab , the drive till the hotel was in silence ram was all in a grumpy and frustrating mood so with long strides walked in the lift whereas priya literally had to run to catch up with him and managed to enter the lift the lift was sumwhere around the second floor when with a loud thud sound it halted and the lights went off , priya being claustrophobic  started sweating and when ra tapped on her shoulder she threw her arm around him tightly and closed her eyes , this is sooo perfect thought ram but he pacified her a bit and in s slow voice asked her
r = priya don't u remember anything of last night i mean we
p = now was blushing hard but managed to say in a husky voice , yes i do remember my chubby sweetheart and winked ๐Ÿ˜‰
r 's jaw were dropped as this was the name she called him last night , he looked down towards her to see her smiling and then it seeped into his mind what happened r : u remember i mean u were drunk and u lied to me arghhh
p smiled and replied = i was drunk but not dead and how could i forget the most beautiful moment of my life jst coz of a drink naa never 
r gave a big grin and gave her a kiss on forhead and whispered i love u too her and until then the lift started and reached their floor , they got fresh and headed towards an ancient temple , while entering the temple a gate man stops ram and says that without wearing a traditional dhoti he couldn't enter the temple ram tried to convey him or even suggested of going thru the vip route bit no the man was strong headed one and said the vip route is closed and would be open only at the night r got pissed off and wanted to return back but
p = ram we should not return back from god's gates back as it's a bad omen , ram after a lot of pestering from her agreed and went to one of the shops to get one dhoti , p buyed one for ram and asked him to wear it in the trial room and come , a few minutes later r called priya and said he couldn't tie it p entered the room to see ram had wrapped it around like a towel she moved forward and started tying up and secured it with a knot across his waist ram was still unsure about it ๐Ÿ˜›
r = what it gets untied or what if i stumble on it 
p = ram it's jst like a saree and see i wear it regularily and see it never comes out 
r = hey but i'll like it ๐Ÿ˜‰
p =( in anger) at public 
r = oh i'll hate it and i never thought about it and from now on no sarees for u 
p = come on ram don't change the topic and it think the shirt of ur's doesn't siut and u sould be in vest and dhoti it will be more appropriate 
r = cluching his shirt tightly shook his head and said  a big nooo
p = oh come on ram no one his gonna physically harass u 
r = sighed and said kua biwi mili he 
p= suits u and went out 
r = few minutes later ram came out with his one hand clutching the knot and walked towards her but during the walk he stumbeled twice and said grate know i have started walking like u 
p = raised a brow and said very funny and walked out 
r = tried to catch upon her with small steps when a boy came and asked for spme alms but ram didn't listen so the boy started pulling his dhoti 
r = shouted and immediately knelt down and said to the boy : arre mere baap kyun meri izzat utarne me lage ho jane do
the boy understood and asked for money r quickly took a 100 rs. note and handed him but saw p was nowhere
t.b.c  enjoy do comment plzzz... 
next part U ME aur SCOOTY
Posted: 12 years ago
Sammy dear... me 1st๐Ÿ˜ƒ

hahahaha... the dhoti scene is really funny... laughing my head off!! i can just imagine how Ram would look in dhoti n that too stumbling very very well written yaar btw where did Priya go??๐Ÿ˜•  n the lift scene was.. haaiiyyeee...
don't disappear this tym... n update soon...Edited by Anamika163 - 12 years ago

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