*RAYA* THE EXPLORER(updated 8th jan ) pg 11 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey friends hi sorry could not update for a long time got injured well now i am fine and even have a week's vacation due to commerce fest in our school (cool😎) 😃 so will update regularly
anyways now the next chapter enjoy :
r= arre meri ma kha lo plz have it
p = wese mr. kapoor how did u manage to prepare the sargi aur whare r we going ? at this hour ?
r= ohh god priya tum mere sath kbc kbc khelna band karogi plzz and yes i got the sargi prepared from one of the punjabi lady  chef at hotel
p = at midnight but how ??
r = ooh don't even ask that lady she was worse than the hitler  and glared at me as i was of her enemy who killed her soldiers and would sweetly like to slaughter me up with the butcher's knife at midnite , but (smirking) he said as u know i am RAM KAPOOR and my one kiss and she happily hopped around and prepared it happily .
p = what (angrily) u and ur kisses agghh what do u think of urself sum smooch guru ??
r = ahh priya u still not over with my emraan hashmi act god wommen, but didn't u like my kisses? where they that bad ??
p = (☺️)  amm woh i !!
r = (surprised ) priya what was that ??
p = kyya kya hua (arranging herself)
r = o.m.g. priya u blush ? i mean normal ladies do but u too wow!
priya ; hitted him hard with her bag(big 1 that ladies carry which needs mini search engine to search out the things and ek jor ka hit and admi🤢 well suits ram😆)
r = ow ow priya stop that lagta he i am driving (well remembered? they r in the car) and well that lady was apprx dadi's age and u should have no issues with my emraan and vidya o.k. ?
p = now calmed a bit o..k. so where are we heading towards ?
r = ahemdabad 
p = but it's flight  are available only during the day
r =  ha that must be of normal people but for me it's an exception ⭐️
p = aah ram u r so much full of urself can't u be jst normal for a day ?
r = can u quit that thinking cap of urs can u no na ? so it's the same with me
(they took a private jet and landed and took a hotel (no elaboration))
r = priya i'll get fresh first as we'll not be going anywhere
p =why , and how we'll be able to see
r = cutting her in between ya ya i know dwarikadheesh temple , the old caves etc. etc.
p = surprised , hey how do u know that??
r =  amm woh priya me i
p = ram just ah how dare u touch myy diary without my permission ??😡
r = priya woh i am sorry it slipped from ur bag in the flight at mumbai to chandigarh and i couldn't stop myself from reading it i am sorry
p = u are so much possesive of ur own things than how could u touch mine ,give me my diary back
r = no plz wait tumhare topic 20 places to visit before i die ka india wala last paragraph is left let me complete it and get the next bookings done please
p = no never (tried to catch it from his arm as he was trying to take it out ) and moved forward and tiptoed to reach his height but missed her  balanced and both landed up on bed with priya on top of ram
ram held her waist securely and gazed into her dark shiny eyes which reflected jst pureness and innocense , priya too gazed as his adam's apple moved back and forth (due to their close proximity) both kept staring at each other until ram broke the silence overcoming with the desire to kiss her there and then and make her his, but he had already read the dillemma which she was facing in her expressive eyes and broke apart
r = amm priya i know u are very light but still u are blocking my way
p = out of her daze now oh i am sorry and blushed on those thoughts going in her mind
r = (god this girl would kill me 1 day with her smile) priya i have kept a saree for u plz. wear it and be in ur room and sharp at 5 car will cum to pick u up be ready i have an important meeting here ,and he left saying this
priya was now on the 7th cloud feeling all light abd pondered over the thought that why was ram doing , was it coz he loved her or was it just to act nice?? she than got fresh and changed into a red saree(sry don't know sarees material or type) with a lit bit work at it's borders ,the minute she draped it around her she fell in love with it's soft silky material and red whine shade , than she adored herself with bangles and etc. for kc and she didn't knew why but for today she liked to get ready at her best and look bautiful and presentable .
at 5 the car came and escorted her to a far distant place almost like a deserted land she got a bit tensed but kept calm soon she reached the venue aprx at 8:30 and as she stepped out she saw ram in a black siut sans tie and looking calm and waiittt dashing
ram took her hand and led her through a carpet of red roses between silver coloured barren land (yht car zoomed off only leaving them both behind alone and no one seemed to be there no vegetation no living things sign nothing) she held her gaze up only to be mesmerized by the beautifyl moon glittering like a silver ball reflecting its color on the far distant barren land  of kutchh (gujarat) not so far there was a table set carrying the ritual plate and dinner N wine , priya could do nothing but just gape at the natural beauty in front of her the pool of silver formed in front oof her eyes shimmering and glittering it's color
r = broke her gaze n asked her did u like it?
p = could say nthng but jst nod
r = came closer to her and whispered so whats the plan ma'am ? (she stood confused) he said i mean the moon is here ur hubby is here don't u wanna break ur fast?
priya jst nodded and picked up her thali and performed the rituals without breaking her gaze
ram (unexpectingly) : he kneeled down in front of her and took a flower from the vase on the table
and said : p i know our marriage was based solely on compromise , but i still don't think so i think our jodi was made in heaven just to be bonded together and here i am at my feet proposing u to be my life partner wholeheartidly will u accept it?
p = YESS!!
r = got up and immediately insereted a platinum band in her finger witha capital PR engraved with diamonds
they had their dinner in complete silence without breking teir gaze but suddenly she coughed and choked on her morsel and panicked for water
r = got up and handed her the glass but it got spilld as p was fretting like
he dammed himself and took the wine bottle and made her have large sips until her throat relaxed  but she took the whole bottle and drank the whole liquid from it in
r = oh w.t.h.p are u alright
p = (hiccup) ya i am (hiccup) fine dont(hiccup) worry , suddenly after saying priya's vision started to blur out and everything became hazy even her head felt so much light she said; mr. kapoor u know aj ki sham bahut acchi thi i enjoyed it so much
r = ya ya (making her steady) i know now let's go
p = no first i want to kiss u
r = whatt , no priya u are not in ur senses u are drunk
p = no i want to be lady emraan hashmi and savour the taste of ur those soft lips
r = priya no way we are going to sleep and thats an order
p =o shut up mr.kapoor u blabber to ,much now cliutching the lapels of his coat , she tiptoed and
brushed her lips on hers and clutched him tightly for support
r = god this woman she is truly drunk and even looks so tempting in her red saree and her lips(ram!!! control) but if she regrets it later
p = now in a calm husky voice mr kapoor
r didn't respond
p = ram
he reacted on heaing his names from her mouth just so magical it was he never knew
p (again) ram plz make me urs. forever and ever plz
this was i ram lost all his control and scooped her to the blue coloerd huge tent he had arranged
seeming like an oasis in midst of the barren land he walked with long strides and pushed the curtains of the tent away and laid her down on the bed as he was taking off his shoes p came from behind and encircled his necks with her arms and whisperd : golu u know what ur s** appeal is raised just coz of ur chubbiness and i love it she stood right in frnt of him and said ki
ram i love u and would always continue to do would u love me ttoo?
r didn't reply but instead came for picked her above the gound and kissed her hard on her lips which priya replied well she encircled her arms around his neck and moved closer to him leaving no gap btwn them he laid her down and removing hid coat and shoe slowly and tenderely  kissed  her forhead , gave a peck on both her cheeks and started nuzzling in the nape of her neck until he heard herd her moan and take his name, he smiled on the new life he was gonna start with her life partner and blowed out all the earthenlamps and only the moonlight seeped in the only spectator of two beautiful lovers entwined into each other with both their body and souls as 1
t.b.c. thnx do comment plz took me hell of pain to write 
precap:raya have a fight regarding making ram agree to wear dhoti for visiting a temple⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
ram kapoor in dothi nice thought
nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey sammy nice one...
 
pls continue soon...
looking forward for RAYa's fight over the dhoti issue...
 
and Ram in dhoti😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was a nice one...worth a wait.. continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesum yar luvd the way of ram proposing her on kc @ precap sounds intresting update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi sammy
fabulous updates
this is the first time am reading all ur updates at one go
loved it
chocolate nd strawberry scene- too good👏
polar bear to panda-very funny🤣
do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part sammy
w8ing for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sammy_108


p (again) ram plz make me urs. forever and ever plz
this was i ram lost all his control and scooped her to the blue coloerd huge tent he had arranged
seeming like an oasis in midst of the barren land he walked with long strides and pushed the curtains of the tent away and laid her down on the bed as he was taking off his shoes p came from behind and encircled his necks with her arms and whisperd : golu u know what ur s** appeal is raised just coz of ur chubbiness and i love it she stood right in frnt of him and said ki
ram i love u and would always continue to do would u love me ttoo?
r didn't reply but instead came for picked her above the gound and kissed her hard on her lips which priya replied well she encircled her arms around his neck and moved closer to him leaving no gap btwn them he laid her down and removing hid coat and shoe slowly and tenderely  kissed  her forhead , gave a peck on both her cheeks and started nuzzling in the nape of her neck until he heard herd her moan and take his name, he smiled on the new life he was gonna start with her life partner and blowed out all the earthenlamps and only the moonlight seeped in the only spectator of two beautiful lovers entwined into each other with both their body and souls as 1

precap:raya have a fight regarding making ram agree to wear dhoti for visiting a temple⭐️


my God yaar... that was one hot update😉 specially the above part very magical n very well written... i could actually visualize it just wish Priya was not drunk... how ever... it was hell romantic eagerly waiting for the next update
Edited by Anamika163 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


my God yaar... that was one hot update😉 specially the above part very magical n very well written... i could actually visualize it just wish Priya was not drunk... how ever... it was hell romantic eagerly waiting for the next update*ahem ahem* ya i'm sure some1 did asked for it isn't it?
[/QUOTE]AANMIKA DII?😆
Edited by sammy_108 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ooo la la la... wow... amazing... ☺️