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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kash_laddoo.anu

This is one of the sweetest and bestest oneshots I ve come across:))
Brilliant job girl loved it like anything awww poor shaopao😳😆

 
Thankyou very much for the very sweet comment...yes poor shaopao...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fri42911

amazing OS!!!

loved the dream sequence.
very hilarious!!!!!!

 
Thankyou very much for the comment...i am glad you liked it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan

hiii
awesome os
loved it
hilerious
loved shaopao
loved da revenge
thanks 4 da pm

 
Thankyou...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sacred shrine

This is an incredible work..all the time i imagined shaopao as someone else..some1 i reall hate...rfl..shaopao is such a villain...its was really sweet

 
Thankyou...shaopao has a devil's mind...but poor baby couldn't do anything...Thanks for the comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet

wowww loved it veryyy much

i was first confused all to who this narrator was but when i got to know i was laughing like hell
n loved the last scene when he saw another dog n ran there

 

oh god...

u started in such a way...

i thought may be armi left someone for the other..

n then understand...shaopao a dog...

that was just hilarious...

thnx for the pm...

that was super hilarious awwe poor shaopao!but i'm glad she found someone lols!

that was a very very cute OS..wow!!
keep writing more loved it!

thanks a lot for the pm!

love
komal

 
Thankyou very much for the comment...your response was what i wanted and i am glad you liked the os...thanks onceagain... 
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Posted: 12 years ago
ROFL it was such a different and amazingly written shot ramani ðŸ˜³ totally enjoyed reading it... do write more ðŸ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey ramani
this was sooo cute
loved it
omg shaopao the narrator lol
was real funny
at first when i read the first few lines i was trying to comprehend who the narrator is n then it striked me that may be its a dog n bingo it turned out to be shaopao
if shilpa reads this she would really enjoy it lol
keep writing girl!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: m4manju

ROFL it was such a different and amazingly written shot ramani ðŸ˜³ totally enjoyed reading it... do write more ðŸ˜Š

 
Thankyou...i am very pleased with the response...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey ramani
this was sooo cute
loved it
omg shaopao the narrator lol
was real funny
at first when i read the first few lines i was trying to comprehend who the narrator is n then it striked me that may be its a dog n bingo it turned out to be shaopao
if shilpa reads this she would really enjoy it lol
keep writing girl!!!

 
HI,
Thanks for the comment...i am glad you liked the story...well my aim was to let the readers first think of who the narrator could be...you know maintain some suspense😉😆...let them keep guessing and then when they realise the narrator i was hoping they would just have a blast...i am glad for the response i have gotten...i really hope shilpa would enjoy it if she ever reads the story😳...   Thanks once again
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Posted: 12 years ago
hahahaha Poor shaopao.. I wish you write more of this..:))