Fan Fictions

India Forum Quick Login    

FF- Business Trip with a Twist? Part 4 on pg 27

Post Reply New Post

Page 1 of 36

Page 1
Page   of 36
Page 2 Page 36

Next Topic

Prev Topic

Idle AquaBluez17

IF-Rockerz

AquaBluez17

Joined: 23 June 2011

Posts: 7616

Posted: 03 October 2011 at 5:10pm | IP Logged
Author's Note: Hey guys! It's Mya here. So here is another one of our creations ( Mya n Aahana!) <-- powerful duo Smile Well we try Wink So here goes, anything to say AA?

Well I would just like to say that I hope people appreciate this as much as they did with our OS. Do comment and Like! We do read everything and it makes us write a lot more and much faster right MD?
Agreed hun! So here you go guys!
Pms are sent to those on my buddy list so buddy me if you would like one!!



Hey Devi Maiyya. Hum kaha phaas gaye hain?Yeh Lavanyaji bhi na. Khudko toh
bacha liya aur hume phaasa diya. Aur woh bhi kis kay sang? Yeh laad
governor ki sang. Dehko toh inhe . She turned to look at him, turning away quite instantly. HeyDevi Maiyya!,
she thought. Dekhiye toh! Kaise ghoor rahe hain. Lagtha hai ki aage ke
auto wale bahiyya ko khajayenge
, smiling slightly at the image of Arnav
going and eating the auto wala.


Ab
issey kya hua? Itna hass kyun rahi hain? Kahin yeh ladki mere upar toh
nahi hasse rahi hai? Arrey nahi. Iske itni himmat? How dare she! Iske
aukaat kya ha?
He
looked back at the road raising his eyebrow in slight irritation. Agar
mein iss auto wale ki waja se apne meeting miss kardiyi toh mein isse
chodoonga nahi, Arnav thought to himself while slamming on the horn. Aur
iss Lavanya ko bhi aaj he bemaar hona tha. Isko maalum tha na ki aaj
meri subse important meeting Agra mein hai. Meine usse kaha tha ki aaj
kuch bhi galat nahi hona chaahiye aur uss ne kya kiya?! Iss Khushi
Kumari Gupta ko mere sang behj diya! Ab toh mai apne meeting pe hi poch
jahoon toh kafi hai.

He looked up to see that the auto man had finally moved. Yeh
Delhi bhi na. Kaisa shehar hai? Kissine ek auto wale par hath utha diya
aur phir ussne kuch bola toh ekdum ladne lagte hain. Yeh bhi koi baat
hui? Chalo mujhe kya farak pardtha hai. Bas ab yeh hath gaya toh mein
jaldi se car chalata hoon
and with that thought he picked up the speed of the car pushing the
accelerator as hard as possible. He only removed his foot of the pedal
when he felt someone gripping his arm like it was a matter of life and
death. Turning around he saw a scared Khushi, her head buried into his
arm like that would make her safe. Smiling at her innocence he looked
back at the road, making sure he did not drive into something.


Arrey!
yeh laad govenor kya kaar raha hai! Hey Devi Mayiyya! Raksha karna
hamari. Pata nahi yeh laad govenor humaree jaan lene ke pheeche kyun
padha hai?
Khushi
squeezed her eyes shut as she felt the car go faster. The car was going
so fast, that the poor girl was rocking back and forth like a rocking
chair. Her seat belt was not helping to keep her glued to the seat and
she could feel herself go dizzy with fear.

Without
realizing what she was doing, she reached out and grabbed on to the
only thing she knew, subconsciously, that would never let any harm come
to her. She dug her nails in his arm, not caring about what or who she
was holding on to. At the moment, nothing mattered to her, she just knew
that she had to be safe and knew that Arnav will save her. Devi maiyya, yeh hume kya hogaya hai? Yeh laad governor kyun hume baachayega ?, but she knew even before finishing her thought that he always saved her, no matter what the situation was.

The
car swung to the right as Arnav made a sharp turn. Khushi, now
practically crying in fear, hid her head in his arm. Suddenly, a wave of
relief washed over her. It felt so right to have her head in his
arm;him being so close to her made her feel like she was at home.
Feeling the car slow down she looked up. He was not looking at her, but
she saw what she always dreamed about seeing, him smiling slightly.
Seeing him smile, she felt obliged to smile with him even with tears
rolling down her checks.


"Roh
liya? Ki abhi aur rohna dohna baaki hai. Hum ek business meeting par
jaa rahe hai Khushi. Titanic dekhne nahi, jo tum rohti ja rahi ho," he
sighed.

Ab yeh Titanic kya hota hai?, she thought to herself and as if he had read her mind he explained, " Titanic ek movie hai. Tum movie toh dekh thi hona??"

Irritated,
she responded, " Arrey hum toh hamesha movie dekh thi hain! Paatha hai?
Hum abhi thode din pehele Bodyguard dekhe the! Aur apko paata hai?
Salman Khan kitne acche lag rahe the?!?! Hayyee!! Hum toh bilkul mar hi
jaate hain jab unhe dekhte hain!," clapping her hands in excitement at
the thought of Salman Khan.

" Ohh you mean Sallu bhai?!," Arnav questioned through gritted teeth.

" BHAI? Woh apke bhai honge par humare..., " Khushi turned to look outside turning a bright pink.


Arnav watched her turn red. Look
at her! The nerve! Mere hote hui yeh Salman Khan kay bara mein soch
rahi hai? Himmat toh dekho. Kaise sharma rahi hai. Jaise Salman Khan
isse dekhne aaya hain!
He
cornered the car and then slammed down the break, making her jump out
and stop dreaming. Looking at her shocked face he felt satisfaction
creep up his spine. Good, at least she stopped thinking about him!, mentally putting Salman Khan now on his hate list.


"Yeh kya...?, " Khushi started but was rudely interrupted when the car made loud sounds and she heard Arnav groan.


Damn. Yeh saab iss Khushi Kumari Gupta ki wajay se ho raha hain!, he thought and stomped out of the car slamming the door shut.


Khushi
followed him out, wondering what had happened now. She saw him lift the
car and then slam it down in frustration. She understood now what had
happened, the car had broken down and they were both stranded in the
middle of no where.


Precap: Arnav started taking of his coat.

" Arrey! Yeh aap kya kar rahi haan?!," exclaimed a now stressed Khushi.


" Taking my clothes off! Kyun koi problem?, " he questioned smirking
when he saw Khushi turning pink and staring at him in astonishment.


Hope you guys this liked this! Do Comment and hit the Like button!

P.S. Thanks for liking our previous post!




Edited by AquaBluez17 - 28 November 2011 at 3:28pm

The following 143 member(s) liked the above post:

bertrockinggirl555sarika13chandnipatel123KaShluv4evabrajensanj12344shamagoyalRogerfederersankadevifurjadMerplalitha203pratikshanoelsunshineswirlsanayabarunfanlekshGiarvo17091996Mano2789gurukhushritika.123ranukamakshigoblinxyzw231priyaarshikausar1219truth1-1marishka.khanDiabolicAngelsuria1gagsyArmiRidz4everSuman786MissbantuMissbantuTrueMuskaanmana2lankanhillypal89711cutie13srmirjiniya_schandarani1PrasRasrsshreem-g19Suman_4_NivRenannie03Pinam3hemvbayesha786xxxsanjananrvkrmaghalakshmiHaniibeeshaheerdiwaniveds275pooh_91FAYKHAN29sruthirishiCrazySaRunianKaaminiJhaipkknd_gbdfanAmmmfazka2189mansinupsiiicupcakezasrkkg1tishma-Hope-CaskettpayalpencilPristineSoulniru273monkeydog18Honkytonk-sia-hkhb17Yazzy91cpervaizixrayme2youJasleentanya_viKaushalyaFanjessjazzgangsukajribarunsobtiapoorvaarnavArhiIPKKNDrashgirl000sreemeeraVsc94vaishali667sharneil92pinkpearlzrsk16Almost_KisslittlemoizafiDancingDiva.segad-veena.shona---softyy--007jindalSmileyfacedbr_kmichiI-love-dmgdevishree-Shobhu21-dyhardfan-shamima-shilparoxxFebruaryFlowerIPKKNDkaur92ushankitvcshypersonKrishnaluv94Minnie.moon_minecaskeranjaani07roops82malluangelbmtdluverdesigirl_18the_rainnyxxShell16KaShArHi_Krishibhaktiii-Fatz-Kamalika..newmoon2011SK1991themockingblue.Shree.NandaHansaN-.Preet.-shybabeRavishingSaRun-

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "FF- Business Trip with a Twist? Part 4 on pg 27" in Fan Fictions forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

Idle AquaBluez17

IF-Rockerz

AquaBluez17

Joined: 23 June 2011

Posts: 7616

Posted: 03 October 2011 at 5:10pm | IP Logged
The Pm list is our Writing Center. If you would like to be on the Pm list like Aahana's post on our center. Hint it says " Pm List " Smile

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1892587

Index:

Part 1- Pg 1
Part 2- Pg 9
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1901618&TPN=9
Part 3- Pg 18
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1901618&PID=47917149&#47917149
Part 4- Pg. 27
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1901618&PID=49622368&#49622368


Edited by AquaBluez17 - 28 November 2011 at 3:29pm

The following 13 member(s) liked the above post:

LoveToDreamparvaizbkFAYKHAN29nupsiiiPristineSoul-sia-batgirl67pri12areeba_blossom-.Preet.-themockingblue.SK1991RavishingSaRun-

Idle shybabe

IF-Sizzlerz

shybabe

Joined: 05 June 2006

Posts: 13040

Posted: 03 October 2011 at 5:42pm | IP Logged
Awesome yaarClap

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

Aahanaxx11AquaBluez17

Idle FebruaryFlower

IF-Dazzler

FebruaryFlower

Joined: 17 July 2010

Posts: 3128

Posted: 03 October 2011 at 6:01pm | IP Logged
Mya and Aahana!!
A fab part. I really enjoyed reading it my lovelies!!
The whole Salman Khan piece was brilliant.
Precap looks super interesting!
Thanks for the PM!!
Smile

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

Aahanaxx11AquaBluez17

Idle desigirl_18

IF-Rockerz

desigirl_18

Joined: 28 October 2006

Posts: 6604

Posted: 03 October 2011 at 6:51pm | IP Logged
Mya and Aahana girlies u r tooo good!!! OMG i had soo much fun reading it and could imagine it all!! and my fave part was Khushi talking bout Salman Khan and Arnav feeling jealous..i wasROFL Khushi totally loves her Salman Khan jeeWink Great going, keep it up u two!!Hug

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

Aahanaxx11AquaBluez17

Idle nyxx

IF-Rockerz

nyxx

Joined: 09 June 2009

Posts: 7202

Posted: 03 October 2011 at 7:59pm | IP Logged
Fab start you guyss!
Youre FF's are always different and yet, unique with that Arhilicious touch ;) The precap does sound interesting. Continue soon!
 
Oh and thank you for the pm :)


Edited by nyxx - 03 October 2011 at 7:59pm

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

Aahanaxx11AquaBluez17

Idle arhi-fan

Goldie

arhi-fan

Joined: 15 July 2011

Posts: 1954

Posted: 03 October 2011 at 8:10pm | IP Logged
It was a awesome update and precap sounds interesting

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

Aahanaxx11AquaBluez17

Idle Almost_Kiss

IF-Dazzler

Almost_Kiss

Joined: 12 August 2011

Posts: 2776

Posted: 03 October 2011 at 8:57pm | IP Logged
I'm loving this ff already...it was great...loved it when Arnav got jealous...hahaha, he put Salman Khan on his hate list...the precap sounded interesting...please continue soon

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

Aahanaxx11AquaBluez17

Popular Search Terms:   business trip with a twist

Post Reply New Post

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Topic Starter Replies Views Last Post
A LOT LIKE LOVE#2-part 40 pg 128(LAST PART)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 149 150

barkha_90 1198 382588 05 May 2012 at 11:35am
By TANVI_SEXY
AR love story Part 23 P. 73- LAST PART

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 79 80

..Mira.. 634 226480 17 January 2012 at 6:30pm
By chcolaty
FF:Chance pe Dance last part..(part 22) (pg.36)END

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 39 40

ArushiLuvs_AnYa 312 45912 26 May 2011 at 11:19pm
By sweetnandu
may be(mayur ff)part last part-page 27

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 29 30

adi_gupta 233 65115 06 September 2009 at 11:13pm
By Yoshita0411
LOVE - AA ff PART - part 9 updt pg8

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

*~sneha~* 76 18918 30 August 2008 at 10:08am
By teenorchid

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category

Active Forums

Limit search to this Forum only.

 

Join India-forums Today!

Be the part of India's biggest discussion portal.

It’s easy to Join and it’s free.

Here's why members would love to be a part of India-Forums.com:

Register now while it’s free!

Already a member? Close this window and log in.

Join Us           Close

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.