Hi Shivani!! Your FF has really a nice start.. But why did it became a dream sequence.. I wanted it in real😳. No evil vamps.. so sweet!! Please add me to your PM list..
the dream will soon be real that too splendidly thanks for ur sweet comment i will sure pm u
awesome update. .
Even abhiya fight was superb. .ufff it was so romantic...
Piya ne to jeh ki class leli . . Aur bohat jaldi FEVICOL waale Alina ko sponsor karne waale hai . .
Abhiya- laila ko manao scene was full tu dhamaka. . Loved it.
Eagerly waiting 4 next update
thanx 4 d pm
continue soon .. Tc
Amazing piece of writing! The inner turmoils of Abhiya were so well described. The way Abhay apologized and made Piya understand his situation was touching. Continue soon! 😊
Pia is surely going through a lot yaar...When you get something with much difficulty, you fear that you might lose it.Same is the case with Pia. You have expressed their inner turmoil brilliantly.Loved it!Continue soon. Thanks for Pm.Good luck!👍🏼 Edited by prerna26 - 12 years ago
Superb shivani. Bechara jeh ushki toh bolti hi baand hogayi. Piya toh full to sherni bangayi thi loved it. Agree wid u alina...dreamy...fevicol... Gf ko manana toh koi abhay se shikhe...aww...that was so romantic.really loved it.thanks 4 d pm.
aww!!such a well-written part,shivani!!u described their inner turmoil perfectly..luvd the lil romance btwn them..eagerly waiting 2 c who the nw character is..keep it up n thanx 4 the pm. 🤗
wow awesome update abhiya fight was superb. it was so romantic..
The way you described piya 's feeling it was awesome and abhiya romance always awesome and piya ne to jey ki wat laga dali . thnx 4 pm and waiting 4 next ch.
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