Joined: 13 February 2010
This is my first
trial at writing something on this forum.Many of u might know me as a
continuous and dedicated reader of their ff
I always wanted to write something but never had enough courage to do the same.But i can't hold anymore.i have this idea for quite a while now.iI have been thinking about it for all day i just want to pen it down now.It will be a mini ff where i will write what i exactly want to see now in the show after months of torture
My story starts after the party sequence. Remember i have not considered that part where someone kidnaps T. Here she is fit and fine ready for more bitching. There is no evil vampire concept here ie Abhay is not tracking anyone.Here other vampires are not living in Abhay's house but went to the countryside to track down Dippanita Khurana.
CHAPTER 1 - A HOPEFUL DREAM
here u go
It's a new morning sun is shining through the windows showering its light over a beautiful face making it look irressistibly pretty enhancing her natural beauty.That's Pia Dobrial sleeping peacefully in her room.Still smiling as she is dreaming about her beloved.
Abhay and Pia are at a secluded place. Everything is lush green the smell of roses is floating in the air.it seems like a soft soothing natural music is playing in the background.Abhay is wearing a white shirt and blue jeans looking like someone out of this world even nature can't hold this much gorgeousness.A cute dimpled smile playing on his lips is giving his look an irresistible touch.Pia is in a short white dress with a blue belt around her waist.Everything around them is just so beautiful truly soulful.They are admiring each other and the nature whole heartedly thanking god for having each other in their lives,their hands are entertwined together,they are looking deeply into each other's eyes just to find immense love in those hypnotizing eyes.Suddenly abhay took her hand and kisses her temple gently.She gasps, closes her eyes to feel the moment.All this while she is sitting at the staircases of the beautiful lawn between his legs
Then he move forward to her shoulder and her bare back. He is now teasing her with his teeths.He gently turns her round, kisses her eyes,her forehead ,then both of her cheeks.She is becoming breathless now.He looks at her ,her eyes are closed,her lips are parted waiting in anticipation and he leans his head slowly towards her till his face is just inches away from her,till their breaths collates and then his hands leave her hands slides gently up her arms,his long fingers barely touching her naked arms and then finally got hold of her soft shoulders stroking them gently,she gasps.Then he slowly brings his face closer till his nose touches her nose. He gently rubs it with hers making her chest heave up and down for air.She gently moves her head impatiently closer to his 'seeking his lips.
His lips curl in a seductive smile seeing her impatience for a kiss but he decides to tease her a bit more and move his mouth away evoking her.She finally whispers his name weakly.He gave in to the temptation.Their lips were about to meet when
She sits in a jolt listnening to Misha's screams still reeling in shock and disappointment that it was just a dream. She just utters in irritation"what happened misha why are u shouting like world war 3 has started and America,s headquarter is our home itself"she said frowning
Misha is equally irritated now "what's with u Pia why are u throwing these pj's at me this early morning especially when u r guilty yes don't look at me like that it's already 9 am we r getting late for the college and u r still in ur pink girly bed"
i m sorry"Pia meekly utters
Its ok.what's the matter ha.don't tell me that u r still thinking about last night.I know Jai behaved like an A class jerk .but I m sure that he will come back and apologize to u pretty soon.He can't stay away from our sweet and hot Pia for too long"Misha says winking
Pia giggled nervously ,get up from bed and heads towards the bathroom to get ready.
Today Misha is so excited because she got a chance to teach a real lesson toT and humiliate her in front of the whole college.She is planning to put the last night pics of T on facebook and also on college notice boards
Pia is really nervous especially after that dream because now she can't see anyone else with Abhay anymore whether it is just an act or not she doesn't give a hoot to it.She has to confront Abhay today at any cost.
Here I finish the first chapter of my mini ff I know it's not that good but please hit the like button and do give me big comments like I do on ur ff's
The real story will probably start from next chapter with the introduction of a new character who is the heart of this ff till then keep smiling
Link to my abhiya ff A MYSTERIOUS LOVE STORY
Chapter 1- A HOPEFUL DREAM
Chapter 2- CONSOLING
Chapter 3- A NEW ARRIVAL
Chapter 4- THE CONCERT
Chapter 5- REUNION
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hey congrats shivani, for ur thread!!!
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