Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani


Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani
Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani

AN ANGEL OF MINE chapter 5 updtd page30

shivanirajput Goldie

Joined: 13 February 2010
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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 6:41am | IP Logged

This is my first trial at writing something on this forum.Many of u might know me as a continuous and dedicated reader of their ff
I always wanted to write something but never had enough courage to do the same.But i can't hold anymore.i have this idea for quite a while now.iI have been thinking about it for all day i just want to pen it down now.It will be a mini ff where i will write what i exactly want to see now in the show after months of torture
My story starts after the party sequence. Remember i have not considered that part where someone kidnaps T. Here she is fit and fine ready for more bitching. There is no evil vampire concept here ie Abhay is not tracking anyone.Here other vampires are not living in Abhay's house but went to the countryside to track down Dippanita Khurana.

                                  CHAPTER 1 -  A HOPEFUL DREAM
here u go

It's a new morning sun is shining through the windows showering its light over a beautiful face making  it look irressistibly  pretty enhancing her natural beauty.That's Pia Dobrial sleeping peacefully in her room.Still smiling as she is dreaming about her beloved.

Abhay and Pia are at a secluded place. Everything is lush green the smell of roses is floating in the seems like a soft soothing natural music is playing in the background.Abhay is wearing a white shirt and blue jeans looking like someone out of this world even nature can't hold this much gorgeousness.A cute dimpled smile playing  on his lips is  giving his look  an irresistible touch.Pia is in a short white dress with a blue belt  around her waist.Everything around them is just so beautiful truly soulful.They are admiring each other and the nature whole heartedly thanking god for having each other in their lives,their hands are entertwined together,they are looking deeply into each other's eyes just to find immense love in those hypnotizing eyes.Suddenly abhay took her hand  and kisses  her temple gently.She gasps, closes her eyes to feel the moment.All this while she is sitting at the staircases of the beautiful lawn between his legs                                                            

Then he move forward to her shoulder and her bare back. He is now teasing her with his teeths.He gently turns her round, kisses her eyes,her forehead ,then both of her cheeks.She is becoming breathless now.He looks at her ,her eyes are closed,her lips are parted waiting in anticipation and he leans his head slowly towards her till his face is just inches away from her,till their breaths collates and then his hands leave her hands slides gently up her arms,his long fingers barely touching her naked arms and then finally got hold of her soft shoulders stroking them gently,she gasps.Then  he slowly brings his face closer till his nose touches her nose. He gently rubs it with hers making her chest heave up and down for air.She gently moves her head impatiently closer to his 'seeking his lips.

His lips curl in a seductive smile seeing her impatience for a kiss but he decides to tease her a bit more and move his mouth away evoking her.She finally whispers his name weakly.He gave in to the temptation.Their lips were about to meet when



 She sits in a jolt listnening to Misha's screams still reeling in shock and disappointment that it was just a dream. She just utters in irritation"what happened misha why are u shouting like world war 3 has started and America,s  headquarter is our home itself"she said frowning

Misha is equally irritated now "what's with u Pia why are u throwing these pj's at me this early morning especially when u r guilty yes don't look at me like that it's already 9 am we r getting late for the college and u r still in ur pink girly bed"

i m sorry"Pia meekly utters

Its ok.what's the matter ha.don't tell me that u r still thinking about last night.I know Jai behaved like an A class jerk .but I m sure that he will come back and apologize to u pretty soon.He can't stay away  from our sweet and hot Pia for too long"Misha says winking

Pia giggled nervously ,get up from bed and heads towards the bathroom to get ready.

Today Misha is so excited because she got a  chance to teach a real lesson toT and humiliate her in front of the whole college.She is planning to put the last night pics of T on facebook and also on college notice boards

Pia is  really nervous especially after that dream because now she can't see anyone else with Abhay anymore whether it is just an act or not she doesn't give a hoot to it.She has to confront Abhay today at any cost.


Here I finish the first chapter of my mini ff I know it's not that good but please hit the like button and do give me big comments like I do on ur ff's

The real story will probably start from next chapter with the introduction of a new character who is the heart of this ff till then keep smiling


Link to my abhiya ff  A MYSTERIOUS LOVE STORY



Chapter 2-  CONSOLING

Chapter 3- A NEW ARRIVAL

Chapter 4- THE CONCERT

Chapter 5-  REUNION

Edited by shivanirajput - 07 December 2011 at 11:45pm

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heena_mehta IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 6:49am | IP Logged

hey congrats shivani, for ur thread!!!

its reli a woowww feel seeing one of ur reader as a writer n of,course such a good writer!!!
dat was reli a nice start n for once i also forgot dat pia was dreaming, u wrote dat part reli beautifully!!!
do continue soon, would reli love to read more!!

Edited by heena_mehta - 02 October 2011 at 6:59am

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ilove99 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 6:50am | IP Logged
awesome!!!!!do continue!!

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--peehu-- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 6:52am | IP Logged
hey..i loved continue...and pm me when u update...

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-Ara- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 7:05am | IP Logged
Shivani ..!!
hi..!! awsum concept ..! the dream was awsum.. thank gawd no ebil vamps or T dead..!!


P.S. yeah i know u as an  enthsusiastic reader of my FF's  :)


Edited by tiger_lily - 02 October 2011 at 7:06am

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Saphira_flames Newbie

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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 8:29am | IP Logged
Amazing beginning! Looking forward to the next update Smile Please PM me when you update.

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Akshi0019 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged
hey awsum... cont soon n add me 2 d pm list...

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SheDevil IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 02 October 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
hey dear I love ur start so evn in dreams Abhiya lips were not able 2 meet.I m waiting 2 know wht's nxt in ur wish listEmbarrassed

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