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this was awesome...

amazing marvee di

wow!at the beginning i was litl bit scared..

Awesome i had tears at their separation happy that they came together in the end..geet had the courage to talk to her father..and her father wanted her happiness..

awesome marvee 😊
loved it 😊

super awsmmm os...
loved it...

superrb but i have one complaint..will your OS writing habit take away your FF writing time?..if that is so i dont thiunk im gonna be okay with the situation..i prefer your FFs czo i can thinkabout them long after you have updated..you know FFs leave me sth to rue about..unlike OS where thiungs already happened..nothing to look forward to...

that was a beautiful story...marvee

That was beautiful Marvee...I loved it...

Maan -Geet's eternal love...

her father was so understanding...he let her go to Maan...

thanx for pm

I realy love it it was great story