Hellooo frnds...π€...
Here we are on the "R.O.L.I.T.S" new thread'''..after making you all wait for ages'.i did it'made this brand new thread... with A brand new update of R.O.L.I.T.S...π³
Don't you all dare to run away straight for the update'π...why???? Arre I have done so much hardwork on my thanx giving letter'.read toh karo'.π³
I shapt it's not lengthy and boring like my updates''.wink'ok now stopping not so funny jokes of mine lets come to the point...π.
Thank you so much for all the lovely comments you have posted on the last thread...i really appreciate all of them. '.your comments simply make my day wonderful''From the day i started writing R.O.L.I.T.S i never expected it to be such a hit as it was my first ff ever. I am glad that after one year & so many late updates still I am getting such amazing comments.
Thank you so much for making R.O.L.I.T.S journey so special for me. Keep reading it ahead and do comment because i love them all''..i hope R.O.L.I.T.S goes on and stays for many birthdays and it can be done only with your appreciation'
As many of you know or may be many of don't know'yes ''..it's R.O.L.I.T.S Birthday today'.no problem if you have forgotten that coz I m also one of you in this case'''ya ya I actually forgot my baby's birthday but thanx to R.O.L.I.T.S 2nd mom i.e Geet aka sweetdesire'she is only one who remembered this special day when I started writing R.O.L.I.T.S'.hayye rabba such dedicated reader''.(so the most devoted reader of R.O.L.I.T.S award goes to "Geet"'ππΌ...π'others don't be jealous'π.i will pakka host a proper R.O.L.I.T.S awards show for you all too'π₯³'.)though I m not fully satisfied with response of readers for R.O.L.I.T.S'π'..(I was actually hoping for this ff to be super duper hit'βΊοΈ')
As this ff is very close to my heart'so do try to make this journey more and more special''..by your breathtaking comments and remarkable support...i willy my best to entertain you all ...ad ya from now on R.O.L.I.T.S updates wil be with a heading or we say title...wid few more new changes...
Again Thank a lot and love you all so much...π
R.O.L.I.T.S is about to turn into a Thriller, Action, Romantic & full of Fun FF...π
COPYRIGHT :- THIS STORY IS COPYRIGHTED BY @ JANNAT(kiran) (jannat4ever)AND MAY NOT BE USED ,POSTED OR DISTRIBUTED WITHOUT MY PERMISSION...
A story about - Love, Passion, Action, Thrill, Wrath, Hurt & Truth...
A story about True Soulmates & Their Rhythm of Love...π
GROUP OF 8 FRIENDS'π
7 are together just like a Beautiful Rainbow
"7 colors of life'' All have different nature, different lifestyle, different wishes but always together 4 each other...one thing common b/w them their blind trust & love for each other...
But still there is one lope-hole RAIN IS MISSING
7 Friends living the best phrase of their life totally unaware of the biggest blunder just entered in their life's...
What happens when they cum to know whom they loved & trusted from the bottom of their heart is a big lier?? and was just using them...π ???
** RHYTHM OF LOVE IN TRUE SOULMATES **
"what happens when rhythm of love starts in b/w two people..."π
what happens when 8 true soulmates meets on earth???????
one truth can destroy their life but is it so easy to reveal a biggest truth of their life's?????
A truth which can take any ones life????
will d truth gonna destroy d rainbow group???
Or RAIN will save the RAINBOW at right time????
Story based on Arman-Riddhima , π
Siddhant-Shilpa , π
Rahul-Muskan , π³
Atul-Anjali π...
I would like to thank ALL my readers from the bottom of my heart for all the comments, all the support and most of all bearing my heart attacking suspense I have given in R.O.L.I.T...and loving my FF so much! I can't thank you guys enough...β€οΈ
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INDEX
Parts - Page No.
PART 23 -Commence of Fluctuations II - Pg 1
PART 24 -What The #*$% - Pg 14
PART 25 -What The ... - DOUBLES - Pg 17
PART 26 - Unpredicted Blow - Pg 29
PART 28 - Awaiting Confession & Outcome of Betrayal - Pg 38
Take Care...
Jannat...
"Commence of Fluctuations II"
After
getting sleep of 4 hours here we are on the dona paula beach for the
party...party my foot...cant they just seat quietly but hell no
why they would do anything which can please me...they are born to take
opposite turns...
Armaan the arrogant jerk is playing with Muskan in water...why
β¦..well as Rahul is not interested in playing in water thats when Mr.
Main-Hu-Na came and pulled a saddy Muskan into water β¦...and now Mr.
Majnu aka Rahul is dreaming about his one and only beloved Muskan
β¦...watching her longingly...sach a majnu...but I like the way they
both look at each other, understand each other...completes each
other...and the worst Side no one needs a master degree to see the
love connection b/w them...
Sid and Shilpa are dancing on a pappy number...Anji is drinking
naahhh not the alcohol yar...its just damn lime soda...Atul
β¦.the most harmless creature on earth β¦..well he is trying to protect
the little plants which people are destroying while dancing
Sigh... I m telling you all β¦..they are paka sant mahatmas...i m
sure...always dying for each other...crying for each other...and even
ready to murder some one dat too for each other...but what I don't
understand is what the hell I m doing here...
for heaven sake I m not their mummy ji...they all are getting on my
nerves...some one please call me back...sigh...no chance...Miss
Riddhima...and now its time for me to get back on work...
Last but not the least ME...i m watching them like they are some cartoons and I m about to make some fab show on them
I m sitting little far from the water...as I m not interested in getting
wet...atleast that what I thought β¦..my thoughts broke by loud
laugh...of Sid...and I followed his gaze to find out the reason of his
laugh
Yeh Zindagi, Raftaar Se Chal Padi
Jaate Hue Raahon Mein, Humse Abhi Keh Ke Gayi
"Armaan sang while splashing water on Shilpa who came upto them to pull
them out of water for dance...but ended up getting wet as Armaan had
other thoughts and he splashed water on her with Muskanβ¦.Shilpa laughed
and tried her best to winβ¦"
Hamara Yeh Waqt Hamara Jo Ik Baar Gaya Toh Aaye Na Dobara
"Muskan twirled Shilpa and splashed water on Armaan with herβ¦β¦..he looked at her with his mouth open wide in mock surprise"
Samajh Lo Zara Yeh, Hawaon Ka Ishaara, Mere Yaaro
"Sid joined them in water...and helped Armaan to equal the scoresβ¦..both started splashing water quickly"
Apna Har Din Aise Jiyo, Jaise Ki Aakhri Ho
Jiyo Toh Iss Pal Aise Jiyo, Jaise Ki Aakhri Ho
"all four jumped up and down while hugging each other,β¦and danced in water"
Apna Har Din Aise Jiyo, Jaise Ki Aakhri Ho
Jiyo Toh Iss Pal Aise Jiyo, Jaise Ki Aakhri Ho
"Muskan pushed Sid into water who fell flat on his stomach making others laugh at his condition"
Whenever We Know, We Are Having A Blast, You Know It O O
Living Every Day, Like It's Your Last, You Know It O O
Living For Today, Letting Go Of The Past, You Know It O O
Give It Up, Give It Up, Everybody Say O O
"Muskan looked horrified at Sid when she felt herself being lifted from
the water and next second she joined Sid in water but glared at Rahul
who throw her in water..."
Hum Sab Jo Saath Mein Rahe
Khushiyan Sab Haath Mein Rahe
"Atul sang while coming in water...and joined "splash water" game"
Hum Se Bas Faasle Rahe Yun, Arrey Tu Ru Tu Ru
"Anji laughed and pulled Muskan up from the water..."
Chaahe Kahin Kisi Bhi Modh Par
Bhigde Gi Bhi Koi Baat Agar
Milke Ik Dujhe Se Kahe Yun
"Armaan twirled Anji and Shilpa...pulled them back in his arms"
Yeh Baatein,
Hai Chhoti Moti Baatein
"Shilpa sang and slapped Armaan on his left cheek playfully "
Yeh Aaye Jaaye Jaise Ki Din Aur Raatein
"Anji pulled his right ear...pointed at sun and closed her eyes to make the night sign"
Na Aankhon Se Lagana Kabhi Yeh Barsaatein Mere Yaaro
"Muskan hugged Armaan from behind and sang along with them"
Apna Har Din Aise Jiyo, Jaise Ki Aakhri Ho
Jiyo Toh Iss Pal Aise Jiyo, Jaise Ki Aakhri Ho
"Atul, Sid, Rahul sang, while moving their shoulders back & forth "
Apna Har Din Aise Jiyo, Jaise Ki Aakhri Ho
Jiyo Toh Iss Pal Aise Jiyo, Jaise Ki Aakhri Ho
"Muskan, Shilpa, Anji and Armaan joined them"
Living For Today, Letting Go Of The Past, You Know It O O
Give It Up, Give It Up, Everybody Say O O
"all made a group hug and swayed their lower body with the rhythm of music"
Duniya Matlab Ki Yaar Hai
Iski Aadat Bekaar Hai
"Armaan sang loudly while running for his dear life...from Sid...whom he had punched in ribs"
Iss Se Kum Rakhna Vaasta Tu,
Turu Ru Tu Ru Tu
"Sid pushed him on ground and set on his stomach while singing"
Apno Se Rakhna Dosti
Inn Se Poori Har Kami
Inn Mein Hi Dhoondh Raasta Tu
"all of sudden Armaan cried when out of blue he felt sudden weight on
him and his eyes widened when he saw one by one...Atul, Rahul, Anji,
Muskan and Shilpa falling on him and Sid..."
Na Jaana,
Yeh Tune Na Jaana
"i stared at them in aww...while they all were busy in their own world totally unaware of my gaze..."
Yeh Manzil Teri, Inhe Tujhe Hai Paana
Hai Maine Kaha Hai Jo, Uss Se Mile Zamana Mere Yaaro
"i looked at Atul who was dragging her towards others out of nowhere..."
Apna Har Din Aise Jiyo, Jaise Ki Aakhri Ho
Jiyo Toh Iss Pal Aise Jiyo, Jaise Ki Aakhri Ho
"Riddhima -Atul, Anji-Sid, Shilpa-Rahul and Muskan-Armaan danced β¦.boys twirled girls"
Apna Har Din Aise Jiyo, Jaise Ki Aakhri Ho
Jiyo Toh Iss Pal Aise Jiyo, Jaise Ki Aakhri Ho
"couples changed Sid-Shilpa, Rahul-Muskan, Atul-Anji and Armaan-me stood
in front of each other...others danced around Armaan and me we
just stared in each others eyes..."
Yeh Zindagi, Raftaar Se Chal Padi
Jaate Hue Raahon Mein, Humse Abhi Keh Ke Gayi
"Armaan looked away and pulled Anji in circle...and hit her shoulder from back with his shoulder"
Hamara Yeh Waqt Hamara Jo Ik Baar Gaya Toh Aaye Na Dobara
Samajh Lo Zara Yeh, Hawaon Ka Ishaara, Mere Yaaro
"all boys ran while girls ran behind them to catch hold of their necks
as they have pushed them all in water...and ran for their life's"
Apna Har Din Aise Jiyo, Jaise Ki Aakhri Ho
Jiyo Toh Iss Pal Aise Jiyo, Jaise Ki Aakhri Ho
"all girls pushed boys from back and they fall flat on their
stomach...except Armaan as Riddhima didn't pushed him but Riddhima
bust his bubble of dream by pushing him suddenly, Armaan who was more
then baffled by her hard push looked at her with wide eyes...Riddhima
smirked and joined the girls...all girls danced around
them..."
Apna Har Din Aise Jiyo, Jaise Ki Aakhri Ho
Jiyo Toh Iss Pal Aise Jiyo, Jaise Ki Aakhri Ho
"boys pulled them down with a hard pull...and the result... girls fall on
their partners with a thud...and the song ended with eye lock of 8 pair
of eye's...boys on their backs...girls on them..."
a
guy ran into a dark lighted pub...he looked around madly ...in
search...his eyes red in panic ...he huffed in annoyance ...but sighed
when he gaze fell upon a dark well built men sitting near the bar with a
glass in his hand...
"Did...did you heard???? She...she is back..."the guy stammered gasping for air..
"SHE????? now who's this SHE???? ohhh β¦let me take a wild guessβ¦some new
s**t in market???? "Other men turned and asked in bored tone...least
affected by the news...while taking sips from his drink
"Ri...Ri...Ridd...hima..gup...gupta" the guy whispered as if the name is acid or she herself is there to listen him...
"WHAT???" other men screeched... flabbergastedβ¦..clearly baffled by the news
"Don't you dare to play any game with me Kabir...how she can be in
Goa???" he roared in rage and still hoping for the news to be some
prank...
"How the fu** I would know that Jack???? We didn't heard a single news
about her in last 6 months...now all of sudden she is here...last
time she was in Mumbai" Kabir started in rage
"But that was 8 months ago damn it" Jack cut him off
"Yes...and now knowing that she is here...we should be alert...we
need to find why fuc*** she is here... " Kabir suggested in grave voice
"even after knowing about her...you think we can find any information
about that bitc** ???? forget it men ...she is from one of those bit**
who removes their own foot prints after walking ahead...she is back
that's it...it means nothing but end... end of bliss" Jack retorted
and walked out the club leaving Kabir no choice but to follow him
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RHYTHM OF LOVE IN TRUE SOULMATES #2...You know ,what it means to me...its just like,My dreams comes true...OMKS...I am so so so Happy for you.. Seriously...I always want ROLITS #2, 3, 4, 5 and so on...and I know Its going to happen...After all this story has everything yaar...Emotions,trust,love,fights,nok-jhoke,unsersatnding and the most important ingredients FRIENDSHIP...Do I have to say How much I love This ff...I think no...But still I will say...you know why...Because Jitna bhi akhu utna kam hai yaar...A very HUGE CONGARSTULATION My love for this new Thread...I really wish and want that May ROLITS have many many more threads like this...You are an Awesome writer yaar and I just love you to the death...and the most funny thing is that ...You already know this. Gosh you are a monster...Sachi...Kitna Tadpati ho yar Mujhe mere update ke liye...I so hate you for this...But again., Whenever You update all my gussa just flew from the window...Aur ye tumhe bhi pata hai that's why you always use this trick..Huunn...so not fair...Now stop grinning like this...OK...So where I was yaah...ROLITS...Ekksss..I am sooo happy...Sachi muchi...Cahlo lets see why I love this ff So much...hmm the most Important reason toh you already know...Right? So I will mention the secondary one...but hey they are also very Important...First of all toh its Title...So appropriate and attracting...Whenever I read this name, my heart filled with Pure warmth...Its story and the way you describe each and every thing...you know I am the biggest fan of ur writing.. (ye mera ek secret tha jo aaj meine disclose kar diya hai because I am so happy today par hey jayda hawa mein udane ki koshish mat karma...RAINBOW...I just love each and every member of this group...I know ki mein hamesha Angel ki hai babt karti hun but hey isme meri kya galti hai we both know ki Angel have that effect on me or we can say on WE...But I love RAINBOW as a whole...ATUL...So innocent and sweet...ANJALI...Full of attitude still gold-hearted...RAHUL...The mature one in the gang and always do things for the betterment of his friends...MUSKAAN...todhi si wired and clumsy but Sweetest person on this earth...SID...Best friend, anyone can wish for, stupid but cute...SHILPA...My favorite person in RAINBOW ( Of course after Angel,,,,ye bhi koi kehne ki baat ahi yaar.)...Innocent like a small kid, Caring and cutest thing on this earth...RIDDHIMA...hmm mysteries girl...Good at heart but still hard to understand...Really looking forward to this character...That Princi...Or I can Say The world's best Princi...totally gone-case...And last but certainly not the least...In fact The most Important part of ROLITS and My Life also...THE ARMAAN MALLIK...Hayeee...ab iske bare mein kya khaun...jitna kahun kam hi hai...toh kuch nahi kahungi because If I started toh Jitna abhi tak kaha hai wo bhi kam lagega...So I have to say just one thing...JUST LOVE HIM TO THE CORE,AND WILL DO TILL MY LAST BREATH...
So This leave me to say Heartily Congratulations My bestest friend...you truly deserve it...I have just one request...Plzzz yar..Plzzz do update on time...It's my humble request to you...As alwazzz My Comment turned into A speech. But can't help it sweetheart...Itni excited jo hun...And you have to bear this excitement...Now scroll down for My comments on latest Installment ...Take care
Lots of Love
GEET
(ur jaana)
Edited by sweetdesire - 12 years agoAwww you refer me the second mom of ROLITS βοΈβ¦.It seriously means a lot to meβ¦..And you also give the most Dedicated readers award,β¦.well wo toh mein hun hiπβ¦..So you are planning to held an award ceremony β¦..Its of no use my jaanπβ¦you know why because saare awards toh mijhe hi milengeβ¦Confused?β¦.ok let me explained it to youπβ¦..First Awardβ¦Fastest reserved award goes to meπβ¦β¦Longest comment award also goes to meπ³β¦..Most Awaited comments awards goes to meβ¦.The most Impatient readers Awards goes to me as well..β¦Dekha Jab sab mujhe hi milna hai toh why Award ceremonyβ¦..See I am so modest na?π€£β¦..oyeee Stop Grinning like foolβ¦..And read my Comment on latest installmentβ¦good humesha mujhe main point se Bhatka deti hoπβ¦.So Updateβ¦Hmmmβ¦..First you tell ki tumne mere dreams pure krne ka contract liya hai kyaβ¦.goshβ¦you know jab se ROLITS came to my life I alwazzz Imagine RAINBOW Acting and Dancing to this Particular song.. "ye Zindagi"πβ¦..Whenever I heard this song only one thing came to my mind and i.e RANBOWβ¦.And you describe all the masti an fun So beautifullyβ¦..You knowβ¦..Mazza aa gaya..But that Ridzyβ¦arrgghhπ‘β¦.I so want to kill herβ¦Kyae k khoon kar sakti hun main?π...Why she is doing all this yaarβ¦On side toh she is feeling guilty and on the other side she is targeting Atulβ¦ATUL?π²β¦Is she mad or what?β¦.Armaan was so rightβ¦Atul Is more nave than Shonaβ¦.But what got into Sid and Anjaliβ¦.why they said all that rap in first placeβ¦.I know they must be playing around but Stillπβ¦.I feel so bad for Atulβ¦He is so heart broken yaarβ¦But you know I have full faith on Our AmmyβΊοΈβ¦I am sure he will fix this problem soonβ¦And that Ridhimaβ¦Girl, She is Something I tell youβ¦Why the people of Goa scared of her ?β¦.Really looking forward to more so you better update soon β¦.nahi toh you know recently I achieved a degree on Spammingβ¦jiska small sa trailer tumne kal dek h liya thaβ¦So I am Warning you my jaanemanππβ¦.you better update soon other wise Me my My Spamming gang member force you to open the 3rd thread of ROLITS very soonβ¦and you that I mean itβ¦.Chal ab daaro mat aur lagjao update ki preparation meinβ¦.Muuhaaπ€
Lots of Love
GEET
(Ur jana)
Edited by sweetdesire - 12 years ago