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Posted: 30 September 2011 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
part 28
wow that was awesome...
i did find some scenes sentimental...
wow Dileep is thinking how Maan became so ruthless...
good joke...
hes forgetting he is his father...
some traits Maan sure had to get...
now Maan will his ways without any meddling or interference...
wow Pratap felt Maan will one day meet up to his expectations and Maan sure did...
the last scene was fantastic...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 30 September 2011 at 3:06pm | IP Logged
congratulations on your new thread...
loved the update...little emotional  part...
waiting to know the next...

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Posted: 30 September 2011 at 3:58pm | IP Logged
Great one again!! Loved the convo between Pratap and Maan, Maya and Maan, and the sweet suprise for us at the end  Embarrassed
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Posted: 30 September 2011 at 5:44pm | IP Logged
Woot! Woot! New thread! Shaheda di, not fair!! Tongue Haha.. 

Great update, Sookie! That meeting with Maya was unexpected, but touching. That Venkat is a fishy character, who was he talking to at the very beginning of this journey. Maan's keeping him out of the business is a smart move. The end of this chapter... LOVED it! Can't wait to read Geet's reaction and what she thinks about Maan's rationality. 

Thanks for the update, Sookie! 

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Posted: 30 September 2011 at 5:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Krishnaluv94

Woot! Woot! New thread! Shaheda di, not fair!! Tongue Haha.. 

Great update, Sookie! That meeting with Maya was unexpected, but touching. That Venkat is a fishy character, who was he talking to at the very beginning of this journey. Maan's keeping him out of the business is a smart move. The end of this chapter... LOVED it! Can't wait to read Geet's reaction and what she thinks about Maan's rationality. 

Thanks for the update, Sookie! 



Krish...my girl...where are you?  You are like a morning star...

All is fair in love and war Girl friend? Wink LOL
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Posted: 30 September 2011 at 6:25pm | IP Logged
Congratulations for the second thread Party

Loved the impromptu lunch between Sr. and Jr Khurana ..Man Dileep got the shock of his life...His son is far more ruthless than him.LOL...The student becomes the master Tongue

I loved the contrast you brought between  Dileep and father figure Pratap...who knew 'Son' Maan's capabilities better than the one who sired...

Maan must be a a very good BF Tongue...he even advises Satya on relationships LOL...Thanks for the kiss...waiting to see how Geet reacts ...Fab Update Sookie Thumbs Up




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congrats 4 da new thread
amazin update luvd it
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