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Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 10 October 2011 at 2:37pm | IP Logged
wow..beautiful ending toraClapatlast alina brought peace among the two clans. sad tht she had to give her life fr tht. andabhiya togthr nwDay Dreamingand dear will wait fr anthr os d ff frm u . best of luck fr ur studiesBig smiletc. love yaHug

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Posted: 10 October 2011 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
Nice ending! I'm glad the werewolves and the vampires have maintained peace after Alina's death! And I'm glad Abhiya are together now with no obstacles for the time being! Awesome OS, good job Clap

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Posted: 10 October 2011 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
awesome ending but sad alina died. i am glad that between the supernaturals there is peace now. and abhiya are happy in the present. so now jaldhi se new OS/SS/FF write karo. n good luck on ur studies.  thanks for pm .

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Posted: 10 October 2011 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
Felt really bad for Alina.But looks like she holds a place in Abhays heart and also Pia's. And Jai had to learn thing the hard way. Why did he not wake up to the facts earlier he would have saved his sister then that was kind of sad.

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Posted: 11 October 2011 at 5:22am | IP Logged
awesome update
last part was gr8 where Abhiya come to Alina's grave

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Posted: 11 October 2011 at 5:33am | IP Logged
gr8 yaar Clap

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Posted: 11 October 2011 at 11:03am | IP Logged
"The price was too high" rightly said ToraCry
But the same price has brought about so many things that it will be always remembered fondly...
Why fret about the future when you can live in the present...
Abhay is right in doing that...
Their love story might be dark but with love in it, the story will always be beautiful and cherishable

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Posted: 11 October 2011 at 11:27am | IP Logged
sorry for late reply tora
but the ending was fab
alina died but this has brought everything right in place
such a fab piece of writing
thanks for such a lovely os

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