NEW OS:A Night to Love, A night to Lose(pt4,pg-24) - Page 21

Really nice ending. felt bad for Alina. good work.👏

Beautful endng.thnx 4 pms.nd plz keep on writng...

it was soo sweet. poor alina😭 but i'm glad that she end the enimity between 2 clans

Nice ending Tora... poor Alina...she has to give her life for the rivalry  

wow..beautiful ending tora👏atlast alina brought peace among the two clans. sad tht she had to give her life fr tht. andabhiya togthr nw😍and dear will wait fr anthr os d ff frm u . best of luck fr ur studies😃tc. love ya🤗

Nice ending! I'm glad the werewolves and the vampires have maintained peace after Alina's death! And I'm glad Abhiya are together now with no obstacles for the time being! Awesome OS, good job 👏

awesome ending but sad alina died. i am glad that between the supernaturals there is peace now. and abhiya are happy in the present. so now jaldhi se new OS/SS/FF write karo. n good luck on ur studies.  thanks for pm .

Felt really bad for Alina.But looks like she holds a place in Abhays heart and also Pia's. And Jai had to learn thing the hard way. Why did he not wake up to the facts earlier he would have saved his sister then that was kind of sad.

awesome update
last part was gr8 where Abhiya come to Alina's grave

"The price was too high" rightly said Tora😭