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priyani143

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Big smileHiii everyone...m Priyani...i was a silent reader in this forum...while reading all the ff/ss/os a idea came to my mind...& thought to start a ff...well, m not a good writer & now m going to prove it..LOL bt ll try my best..its my first attempt so, plz share ur views & hope u ll like itSmile

 LOVE IS FRIENDSHIP

 

ITRODUCTION

 

The KHANDELWAL family

 

SHAANTANU KHANDELWAL is a very handsome,goodluking & charming man, proud of his look & popularity ..recently joined their family bussuness after completing MBA, The Khandelwal Group & Co. Mostly known as Shaan

 

SUNIL KHANDELWAL(Shaan's dad) is a well known business man, also very family person

 

MADHAVI KHANDELWAL(Shaan's mom) is a house wife, luvs her family a lot & a sweet mom of Shaan & Akshay & Khusboo

 

AKSHAY KHANDELWAL(Shaan's elder brother) works under his dad, & a very dear frnd of Shaan


 

KHUSBOO KHANDELWAL(Akshay's wife & Shaan's sweet bhabi) works 4 a charity.

 

 

The KAPOOR family

 

KHANAK KAPOOR a interior designer, papa's darling & mom's caring daughter, very beautiful & attractive, cheerful & bubbly girl.

 

Dr. ANIKET KAPOOR(Khanak's loving dad), a famous heart specialist, loves his daughter & family a lot, both papa & his daughter share a great bonding

 

KAMINI KAPOOR(Khanak's mom) is a house wife, luvs her family a lot & always take care of them


Tanushree Malhotra(Tannu)- a fashion designer


Arpita Grewal(Arpi)-works 4 a charity( same charity whr khushboo works)


Khanak(Kanks) , Tannu & Arpi r bestest friends. they always share theirs secrets, thiughts & hang out together






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dnt know whether u like it or not Confused...plz feel free to comment
 
Intro       pg1
part 1A- pg 2
part 1B- pg 5
part 2-    pg 7
part 3-    pg 8

part 4-    pg 9
part 5-    pg 10
part 6A-    pg 11
promo-  pg  12


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sounds interesting...do continue with it
waiting 4 the 1st part

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Hey the intro looks nice. Not many characters-which is a good thing because:
a) focus should be ShanakEmbarrassed
b) too many characters make the story confusing usually

What story-line are you going to follow? 
And always remember that sometimes its only us who think we're not good because we've never taken the leap of faith to prove ourselves otherwise. Now you've taken that leap of faith which you should be proud of since many capable people don't take it. I wish that your FF will be a success and will be liked by many. Personally what attracts me to any FF is if it has proper English written, without any abbreviations or short forms 'lyk dis'...it makes the story look more mature and real if its written with full words. Don't worry, just try your best Smile


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hei priyani,
a warm welcome to u to the forum..
finally u decided to break the silence with FF..
characters r gr8..looking forward to ur update..

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loved d characters...Tongue continue soon...

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Welcome to IF Priyani... interesting characters.. waiting for the first chapter..

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wowww priyani

welcome to the forum

keep writing

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