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Mokkai Zamindar - A comedy thriller (FF)

_Manpreet_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 11:37pm | IP Logged
~Mokkai Zamindar~
A mokkaiful Village story
Writer's Note
Amidst our busy life, we come across very interesting characters, who brighten our lives in many ways.  This is a story of new school students who aspire to win Nobel prizes for their Mokkai on Mokkai Sangam.  Their characters in the story in no way depict their real personality and are written solely for entertainment purpose.  I hereby welcome you all to this thread and have a Mokkai-filled time Big smile, with no expectation!
Writer's Note: This portion of the story will be written entirely in English to stir the imaginary minds!  However the remainder of the story will consist of moderate amount of Tanglish!  Apologies in advance for any inconvenience. 
Beautifully crafted mountains outline the outskirts of Lake Bhemaani. Tidal waves dance their way towards the shore, as the breeze wafts through the surrounding in excitement.  The early morning mists covering the greenery sparkle at the sight of sunlight rays through cracks of clouds.  Birds croon to nature's symphony welcoming their beloved master. 
At the heart of this beautiful scenary lies Pannimettupuram, a land of Sus scrofa domesticus, more commonly known as domestic pigs.  There exists a long histroy behind the name of this village.  The evolutionary profile shows Pannimettupuram to have initially housed the Hominidae Family lineages.  
Through the process of evolution and the theory behind 'survival of the fittest', a small percentage of the Homo sapiens lineage, known as the Homo sapiens mokkaipiece strongly populated the land.  Given their intellectual capabilities, agriculture became their survival methodology.  This is when they began to cultivate S. scrofa species, eventually leading to the place being named after domestic pigs (Panni). 
As technology developed all across the globe, so did the minds of various H. s. mokkaipieces of Pannimettupuram.  Many of them opted to leave their hometown for a better lifestyle.  However one family, who ruled the entire Pannimettupuram, continued to remain in the village as mokkaipieces... never to change Wink!  They were none other than the Mokkai Zamindar Family members. 
Friends, this story revolves around Mokkai Zamindar and the events that would take place there afterwards! 
~Teaser One~
A man in his late teens sings along with the latest sensational song from kodambakkam, as he rides his vehicle, a cart attached to two pigs.  A few miles away, a pair of eyes keenly observe this young man! 
Voda Voda Voda Thooram Korayala
Paada Paada Paada Paatum Mudiyala
Poga Poga Poga Onnum Puriyala
Aaga Moththam Onnum Velangala..
Freeya Suththum Bothu Figure Illayae
Pudicha Figurerum Ippa Freeya Illayae
Kaila Baturukku Baalu Illayae
As his lips twitch and eventualy curve downwards, blood droplets slowly flow down his greasy skin.  The innocent pigs who could bear the weight of the grown up teenager could not stand the kappu vaadai CryCry.

Life Poora Intha Thollayae..
Ulagamae Speeda Odi Poguthu
En Vandi Punchur Aagi Nikuthu
Mokka Piece'su KoVoda Kindal Pannuthu
Saami Enna Bangam Pannuthu..
Crack'ka Maaritaen.. Joker Aayitaen..
Gundu Chattila Rendu panni Vandi Oaturaen..

The pair of eyes watching this ever so sad scenary recall the past of Mokkai Zamindar!
Memories to Begin... 6 months ago Before
To be continued...
Note: Character Sketch will not be given right away, as I wish to develop each character along with the story Big smile!
Please do comment, and for anyone who wishes to lift this FF and present as their own, I can promise you right now that there is nothing special in this FF for anyone to even think of plagiarising, as its full of Mokkai LOLLOLLOL, and may not even make sense Wink
~Thank you~

Edited by MP_Radha - 28 September 2011 at 11:48pm

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_Manpreet_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 September 2011 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Reserved for Character Sketch and Chapter Update List

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hopper_ocean IF-Veteran Member

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 2:25am | IP Logged
Nalla introduction kannamaClap. Very creative and excellent starterStar LOL Waiting for the appetizer next (cast list Tongue) ROFLROFL

sattiyama indha story ennadhu illai daa... copy right edhuvum pannamatten

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lavanyaz Goldie

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 4:03am | IP Logged
Tremendous job.. Thumbs Up oh.. this is also an aappu thread...LOL

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cuty2sweety Goldie

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Posts: 1620

Posted: 29 September 2011 at 5:17am | IP Logged
naan innum padikla but couldnt stop from posting ..

idhai paarthavudan paravasam adainthein LOLLOL

loved the teaser Radha ..ClapClap
Mokkai  Ravusu  unku super aappu kaathiruku di ...LOL

Edited by cuty2sweety - 29 September 2011 at 5:19am

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alaipayuthey IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
awesome start...Big smile
i can't wait to know the flashback of mr mokkai zaminder...LOL
continue soon!!!Tongue

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SweetyGreen IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Aappu Aappu Aappu is the meaning of this thread...ROFL

Amazing job Radha dear..Clap

Continue dear...Thumbs Up

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Sue101 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
 and may not even make sense Wink
  absolutely ROFL but nonsense which is no me lot of ROFLROFLROFLROFL while readig

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